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ACTIVATE SELF 04-20-2018 11:06 AM

Kushstream Vol. I: Become
 
They say time is priceless be wise how you spend it
Cos happiness or vices will determine your existence
"The sky is the limit", that's the lie we've been given
But a civilized mind won't rely on opinions, he'll climb ...
To Olympus and swim to Atlantis, discover for himself ...
Not accept what's been handed, they planned it
Ever since Moses and the two Stone Commandments
Took a concept, then it's constant expansion ...
They're constantly addin to the chaos and madness
"Man made God and it cost him the planet!"
Now we're lost in a panic -- looking for a 'savior'
But warring over books is irrational behavior
It's major! Who made ya trade your whole soul
For a stack made of paper? Destroy your own home
Then trash Mother Nature? Disgraceful! Hateful!
The Devil must have raised you!?! You praise who?
An angel? That Annunaki Jesús who came to enslave you?
Too faithful! They trained you ... '12 Years A Slave'
Since the first day of grade school! Escape fool ...
Be brave too! Like those who flew the coop
And didn't stay to be strange fruit ...
Hanging from a strained noose, giving shade to
The same troops who laid claim to all of your possessions
When they set up shop and came through ...
To rape you and maim you and basically invade you
Then turn around and blame you for every single issue
In a nation that betrayed you, replaced you
Stole your whole history then maliciously erased you!
"Okay cool! Get ya head up out the past dude ...
Let's focus on the present so the future we can make new!"

I make do... like Moses in the desert blazing trails
With expelled Jews; I blaze an 'L' and inhale fumes
My brain excels than it swells too, like molecules in vacuums
It explodes til it goes BOOM! So here's the whole truth
THERE ARE NO RULES, and once you've cracked that code
You'll overstand what I've told you, that life is just a thought
And what you think can control you, so open up that 'box'
& chase your dreams you're suppose to! You are the stuff of stars
A living god (you have no clue)! The Universe is yours
And what you are is what you so choose!

Exis 04-20-2018 11:32 AM

You have a great way of wordin' things thru very detailed imagery...& seem to do it effortlessly, which sickens me lol...My bad I can't quote as I'm on a phone...but this is good bro, really good man ;)

Stay you.

ACTIVATE SELF 04-20-2018 11:59 AM

@Exis

Good looks, man. I appreciate that.

Geno 04-21-2018 12:40 PM

This was nice. Well written. Smooth. Content is insightful. Really diggin this.

Man made God and it cost him the planet!"
Now we're lost in a panic -- looking for a 'savior'
But warring over books is irrational behavior
It's major! Who made ya trade your whole soul
For a stack made of paper? Destroy your own home
Then trash Mother Nature? Disgraceful! Hateful!
The Devil must have raised you!?! You praise who?
An angel? That Annunaki Jesús who came to enslave you?
Too faithful! They trained you ... '12 Years A Slave'
Since the first day of grade school! Escape fool ...
Be brave too! Like those who flew the coop
And didn't stay to be strange fruit ...
Hanging from a strained noose, giving shade to
The same troops who laid claim to all of your possessions
When they set up shop and came through

I mean ive read this stuff in other places. Not rhymed just written. And always like to see someone write about it here from time to time.

Good shit

Malevolent 04-23-2018 04:05 PM

You are nasty with vocabulary and word placements. This was sick brothaman.

The Devil must have raised you!?! You praise who?
An angel? That Annunaki Jesús who came to enslave you?
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