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Amor of Struggle
reach into the dark side of your mind for a solution make use with the ruins left behind from seclusion Without struggle and pain, happiness is an illusion You can be happy in the rain if your used to it look back at my darkest days to get through some shit Without the hardship nd pain, success is diluted The evolution of struggle is what makes us humans habitual abuse with environmental nuisances Its the perfect union of yin and yang we're faced with Without hatred, how can we ever find peace in a place of sin? Whats the point of the heavenly gates without Satan? The good, the rage mixed and baked to create grace nd hatred you must balance the sacred shit with hate and sin We all in this complicated game, regardless of fate, you must play it |
Short & sweet...right up my nasal passage, should collab sometime...
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Nice piece, well written and nice flow with the multis. Good transitioning as well
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Lacrime Di Stelle Senza Speranza
Good shit homie, the wording was the best I've seen from you. The transitions were smooth as well!
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Boom.
You dropped some jewels in this one, fam. Real talk. The flow was crisp and the wording was smooth. It was intelligent without be pretentious. Clean. Clear. And to the point. I dug it top to bottom. |
Agree with everything said alrdy. Had a cut to the point syllable game going. Dug the material. Keep posting
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I, personally, disagree with every piece of feed so far. I found this to be anodyne and rather rote in terms of technical skills. Differing opinions really do make the world go 'round!
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Yeah i didnt really like this either sorry dont have much to say cause i dont really want to diss on your piece i mean good for dropping i guess...
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Feel like these words aren’t experienced, but a knowledge of tropes.
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Lol.
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