Gamble 2-3 vs Jabari Black 1-0 - GAMBLE WINS
 

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• Verses are due Thursday APRIL 5th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

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So we got Jae Borne aka Lyfzaa Gamble....

I’m wild for real. I’ll go to NY kick his door down, pointin a few sticks at em/
Wont even kill the nigga - just make him log on and vote on my 2trip battle/
Since y’all say I’m Nick James I’ll take Nick Carraway and whatever guns that lame has/
Then ride on Jae. Gatsby killin em. Cops won’t know who did it...they only found James’ Gats/
Ya bae’ll get smashed. I put a fist in her for Black Power after she sat on the wood/
Once she gag and lick the sack she take Black kids like defax in the hood/
Nigga you look like K-Fed - what the hell this clown gon’ do to me?/
Shotty and a 9 - I’ll air both n give u bucks after the mill...thats gratuity/
Mac-10 in the JACKet turn em Queen. Gun line King but u’ll scrap thinking ya boys’ll rush/
But a nasty hook’ll be my Ace in the hole cus my hands the best - royal flush/

Vs Jabari Black

I move sleek, ask Balor and The Bullet Club, my punch Too Sweet......
Im Fabolous with the hands, only it wont take me 7 swings to knock out your front 2 teeth!
I Buck Shots like Giannis, if u mention the best?......
I tell this bitch Jabari Parker ass in the back..with the other scrubs.. At the end of the bench.
With the hands I'm clever with sets, never the less always connect wit a left......
Facin me? Jabbin a tough position to get dropped in seconds...im like the McGregor of text!
Hes destine to feel the wrath of a God...Your trash immediatly have to just stop....
Blacklisted a bunch of unworthy attempts....just to suffer the same fate by the Admin after he dropped.

versus

Overall JB has to focus on fresher concepts, got to keep in mind that text has been around for 20+ years innumerable amount of bars, therefore you're not saying shit new lol. As for Gambe I liked your concept a lot, but that wording prattles on too much & takes away from the impact of potential dope punches. Comparing the two, even w/ the unpolished wording & one less bar, Gamble had more working for him, VOTE GAMBLE.

I’m wild for real. I’ll go to NY kick his door down, pointin a few sticks at em/
Wont even kill the nigga - just make him log on and vote on my 2trip battle/
nah, mehh puncha dn the multi is way off
Since y’all say I’m Nick James I’ll take Nick Carraway and whatever guns that lame has/
Then ride on Jae. Gatsby killin em. Cops won’t know who did it...they only found James’ Gats/
I did Gatsby w/p over 10 yrs ago so wasn't digging this personally
Ya bae’ll get smashed. I put a fist in her for Black Power after she sat on the wood/
Once she gag and lick the sack she take Black kids like defax in the hood/
mehh
Nigga you look like K-Fed - what the hell this clown gon’ do to me?/
Shotty and a 9 - I’ll air both n give u bucks after the mill...thats gratuity/
lol at k-fed, mill/meal def a bit of a stretch... this was okay
Mac-10 in the JACKet turn em Queen. Gun line King but u’ll scrap thinking ya boys’ll rush/
But a nasty hook’ll be my Ace in the hole cus my hands the best - royal flush/
played, even with the boxing reference

vs,

I move sleek, ask Balor and The Bullet Club, my punch Too Sweet......
Im Fabolous with the hands, only it wont take me 7 swings to knock out your front 2 teeth!
pretty dece
I Buck Shots like Giannis, if u mention the best?......
I tell this bitch Jabari Parker ass in the back..with the other scrubs.. At the end of the bench.
nice, like this nameplay
With the hands I'm clever with sets, never the less always connect wit a left......
Facin me? Jabbin a tough position to get dropped in seconds...im like the McGregor of
decent at best imo
Hes destine to feel the wrath of a God...Your trash immediatly have to just stop....
Blacklisted a bunch of unworthy attempts....just to suffer the same fate by the Admin after he dropped.
decent enough

Even with one less bar Gamble took this imo, less played material and Jabari Parker was lotb

Vote - Gamble

I got gamble here. Wasn’t feeling much at all from jabari black, closer probably read the best, but still been done.
Jabari Parker was dope from gamble and was enough to get him the win

V/gamble

JB; 1, I dont get this at all, is voting in a 2trip battle considered a punishment or something?
2, okayish. 3, a dope idea that should have been directed more directly at your opponent. 4, Im clueless here :(. 5, decent tho ace in hole aint exactly fresh material.

Gamble; 1, ok opener. 2, decent. 3, given recent events I think you could have come up with a more relevant Connor line. 4, basically a long statement.


Both players have some neat concepts but shoulda worded em tighter, not a fan of
these stretched lines. Anyways, gamble got this with his 2 first bars.

Gamble had the better verse. First two took it. JB work on your concepts