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Cred 04-02-2018 08:28 AM

Cred 5-5 vs Joe Boston 6-3 - CRED WINS
 
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Cred 04-02-2018 10:58 AM

Cash.

How many u want? @Joe Boston

Joe Boston 04-02-2018 03:37 PM

12-14? @Cred

Cred 04-03-2018 07:55 AM

LET ME TALK MY SHIT!
 
u were a nerd nigga early, but dis 9 got u lookin like my nxt victim
s’like a High school Swirlie.. cus dis Shit gon leave ur head Spinnin’
Joes features r as sloppy as it gets, dis how u catch a homi on the quiks
Finny does Dallas.. u LOOK like a fuckin retard n gettin bodied like a bitch
this kids so soft I ain’t gotta let that whole Clip go off
1 Round have u seein ur life flash b4 ur eyes like a crystal ball
I’m the Gun Bar KING! name a dude who cud stop this
these 2 arms in front of ur whip like a forklift AIN’T movin boxes
Choppers wit 100 clips gotta kick that ‘ll make u bounce back like a pogo
If u duck n I miss I’ll be Back wit the K like a Kim Kardashian logo

Joe Boston 04-04-2018 06:16 PM

Fake chains and money stacks, u pose like u manuever
Net thug, you'd be shook to throw gang signs at The real
Youtube Shooter
Every hood knows your a loser, ill comes through yours to tear you apart
With the Choppa screaming Im back! have you like Arnold Schwarzenegger with a fucking open heart
Use those street smarts agaisnt me it'll end in Fatality
Kill Joe i dont think this Ri Can, even Amen's embarrased to have the same nationality
U never trapped to make salary, bitch ill grab the shovel and dig this whole deeper
Let the MetalFace your dome, it wont be an Inspectah Deck or Esoteric feature
Creature of habitat when gun toting, i fucking kill to inspire
When the stick sparks you'll see flames, ill celebrate ur death around the next campfire

Joe Boston 04-04-2018 06:32 PM

@Cred open for votes

BodySnatcher 04-04-2018 09:24 PM

I like Cred's opener, crystal ball and forklift lines compared to Joe's Metalface and campfire lines. To me, Cred had 3 solid punches and Joe had 2. That Arnold line was bad too. Cred gets the nod for me.

Jabari Black 04-06-2018 11:08 AM

Cred comes out with a solid opener. Punch was simple but effective. Honestly, I didn’t understand the Finny does Dallas reference so can’t really judge that punch. Crystal ball was your lightest punch. It was just okay. But the forklift bar was special and the closer was pretty dope.

Very consistent verse. Overall very solid. I also like when you punch in your setup like with the sloppy joe line and the pogo line. It adds to the punch imo.

Joe started off pretty slow. I might have missed the reference, but the opener missed imo. Lol the mag bout to rip you apart for the Schwarzenegger/open heart bar lmao come on bruh. Didn’t really care for the Rican bar either.

Picked up steam though at the end of the verse. MF doom line was pretty good. And I thought the campfire line was pretty dope.

Vote goes to Cred.

Cred has a consistent round versus a up and down one from Joe. Cred’s best lines topped Joes best lines plus Cred didn’t miss with any of his punches. Felt like a “nother day in the office” type performance for Cred but consistent punches and loyalty to the gun bars got him the dub lol.

DynamiCz 04-06-2018 11:42 AM

u were a nerd nigga early, but dis 9 got u lookin like my nxt victim
s’like a High school Swirlie.. cus dis Shit gon leave ur head Spinnin’

this kids so soft I ain’t gotta let that whole Clip go off
1 Round have u seein ur life flash b4 ur eyes like a crystal ball

I’m the Gun Bar KING! name a dude who cud stop this
these 2 arms in front of ur whip like a forklift AIN’T movin boxes

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Fake chains and money stacks, u pose like u manuever
Net thug, you'd be shook to throw gang signs at The real
Youtube Shooter

Stretched but nice

U never trapped to make salary, bitch ill grab the shovel and dig this whole deeper
Let the MetalFace your dome, it wont be an Inspectah Deck or Esoteric feature


Overall nice read, I'm going with Cred by a less miss. Good shit!

V-Cred

Schadenfreude 04-06-2018 01:17 PM

VOTE CRED
Shooter just had too much, even tho he kinda mailed it in.
JB's wording structure was lackluster & the concepts were just OK/average.

Lyfzaa Gamble 04-06-2018 02:46 PM

fat wifewere a nerd nigga early, but dis 9 got u lookin like my nxt victim
s’like a High school Swirlie.. cus dis Shit gon leave ur head Spinnin’

Cool play, clean

Joes features r as sloppy as it gets, dis how u catch a homi on the quiksfat wife
Finny does Dallas.. u LOOK like a fuckin retard n gettin bodied like a bitch

Lol okay

this kids so soft I ain’t gotta let that whole Clip go off
1 Round have u seein ur life flash b4 ur eyes like a crystal ball

Eh, decent

I’m the Gun Bar KING! name a dude who cud stop this
these 2 arms in front of ur whip like a forklift AIN’T movin boxes

Nice

Choppers wit 100 clips gotta kick that ‘ll make u bounce back like a pogo
If u duck n I miss I’ll be Back wit the K like a Kim Kardashian logo

Dope

...................

Fake chains and money stacks, u pose like u manuever
Net thug, you'd be shook to throw gang signs at The real
Youtube Shooterfat wife

Okay

Every hood knows your a loser, ill comes through yours to tear you apart
With the Choppa screaming Im back! have you like Arnold Schwarzenegger with a fucking open heart

This could've been better, cool concept execution was weak

Use those street smarts agaisnt me it'll end in Fatalityfat wife
Kill Joe i dont think this Ri Can, even Amen's embarrased to have the same nationality

Decent nameplay

U never trapped to make salary, bitch ill grab the shovel and dig this whole deeper
Let the MetalFace your dome, it wont be an Inspectah Deck or Esoteric featurefat wife

Nice

Creature of habitat when gun toting, i fucking kill to inspirefat wife
When the stick sparks you'll see flames, ill celebrate ur death around the next campfire

Nice closer

Overall really close battle, i feel they eachhad maybe two solid bars a piece, but if i were to have to edge it to someone for consistency gotta go with Cred. I could see this going either way tho. Nice battle fellas

Vote @Cred

Saint 04-06-2018 02:47 PM

Vote Cred -- liked the finny & closer. crystal ball was cool.

JB -- Standouts were metal face & opener. IMO seen you come better.

Blue Bayou 04-06-2018 03:28 PM

u were a nerd nigga early, but dis 9 got u lookin like my nxt victim
s’like a High school Swirlie.. cus dis Shit gon leave ur head Spinnin’
pretty solid attack line opener..
Joes features r as sloppy as it gets, dis how u catch a homi on the quiks
Finny does Dallas.. u LOOK like a fuckin retard n gettin bodied like a bitch
lol, okay
this kids so soft I ain’t gotta let that whole Clip go off
1 Round have u seein ur life flash b4 ur eyes like a crystal ball
been done
I’m the Gun Bar KING! name a dude who cud stop this
these 2 arms in front of ur whip like a forklift AIN’T movin boxes
cool concept, like this for an attack line
Choppers wit 100 clips gotta kick that ‘ll make u bounce back like a pogo
If u duck n I miss I’ll be Back wit the K like a Kim Kardashian logo
pretty solid nameplay for a K concept... like the concept

vs.

Fake chains and money stacks, u pose like u manuever
Net thug, you'd be shook to throw gang signs at The real
Youtube Shooter
mehhh
Every hood knows your a loser, ill comes through yours to tear you apart
With the Choppa screaming Im back! have you like Arnold Schwarzenegger with a fucking open heart
wording choppy, seen better choppa/Arnold concepts b4
Use those street smarts agaisnt me it'll end in Fatality
Kill Joe i dont think this Ri Can, even Amen's embarrased to have the same nationality
who's Ri? assuming one of cred's aliases this was a dece nameplay but light punch
U never trapped to make salary, bitch ill grab the shovel and dig this whole deeper
Let the MetalFace your dome, it wont be an Inspectah Deck or Esoteric feature
cool current concept & attack bar
Creature of habitat when gun toting, i fucking kill to inspire
When the stick sparks you'll see flames, ill celebrate ur death around the next campfire
cool, like this concept


Overall a good short battle that is pretty close imo... I've got Cred taking this with one more standout punch and lil more consistency... JB's last two bars we're cool but imo his first couple cost him.. props to both

Vote - Cred

Destroyer 04-06-2018 09:10 PM

I got Cred taking this pretty easily just an overall better crafted and fun to read verse
I will say this is a major improvement from anything I’ve ever seen from joe Boston the metalface bar was a decent concept.
Please stop with the stick bars, people
I was feeling forklift and opener. Closer was ok for a k line

V/cred


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