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Cred 03-27-2018 07:25 AM

Habitat 8-7 vs CBA 0-0 - HABITAT WINS
 
Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday MARCH 29th and will be open until Sunday.
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

@Habitat @CBA

Habitat 03-27-2018 07:27 AM

check. probably going 10

CBA 03-28-2018 06:44 PM

10 works

CBA 03-29-2018 11:56 PM

CBA loves netcee's, shout out to the two guys that read this verse
I'll put the fire to habitat and leave a mark in the earth
So fuck writing for this battle, it's time to change up the plans
Cuz when it comes to jestor's I like to speak with my hands,
And your girl's head game is straight, I watched her switch up positions
Then the trick cupped my balls, something like a street magician
We never see habitat with the animals, dude's locked in the house all day,
But it's ironic you get dogged every time that you stray,
I'm just stylin now, there's no chance you can slay me,
You lost in ugly fashion like your stuck in the 80's

Habitat 03-30-2018 08:22 AM

ur wife give handjobs to stangers for free n she aint a first offender
the way that bitch terrorists out youd think we released every isis member
break u down to a science.. shoulda been shot before gave a fuckin start
and before u can telescope's on you.. the bacteria's already breakin u apart
fucking uglys is a sport to you, how u get passed the damn funk?
and it ain't a basketball game if every girl you slam drunk
ur a nobody, I could kill a million times n it'd never be a shame
When you dialogue on to see NO one is talking bout you or mentioning ya name
this worthless fuck is a boring loner
the only way you should pass time is by being a living organ donor

Enbombz 03-30-2018 09:44 AM

Cba - really not feeling the verse a lot of played concepts. Cup balls prob your best wording wise.

Had - opener was good, the flip for telescope doesn't work, your thinking of a microscope. When you die a log on? Nah

Hab takes this with the opener, not a great battle.

DynamiCz 03-30-2018 11:08 AM

And your girl's head game is straight, I watched her switch up positions
Then the trick cupped my balls, something like a street magician

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ur wife give handjobs to stangers for free n she aint a first offender
the way that bitch terrorists out youd think we released every isis member

break u down to a science.. shoulda been shot before gave a fuckin start
and before u can telescope's on you.. the bacteria's already breakin u apart

Yeah, Hab opener was nasty enough to take the whole battle. Props to CBA, just have to update your content a little more.

V-Hab

BodySnatcher 03-30-2018 12:22 PM

You gotta update your content CBA or flip it differently because the verse needs work. Cupping was your best line.
Hab your verse better but not by a whole lot. Your opener was solid & I enjoyed the wordplay. Others liked the telescope but I thought the line could've been used differently or worded differently. Overall this was a short quick battle that I give to HAB

Destroyer 03-30-2018 04:28 PM

Hab has this I wasn’t feeling much from CBA Street magician was ok
Hab had dialogue and other one way wp’s that was enough for the win
Telescope should be microscope so that one didn’t work

V/hab

Suthaveli 03-30-2018 09:11 PM

cba, i thought i remember him being better. i did like the street magician but nothing else rly stood out to me fam, apologies.

Hab tear her wrist bar was bananas. & telescope almost wrked if used right. I def like the idea. went back & read quite a few of ya verses. i like ya creativity, but saw tht u started declining when u got robbed (imo) on a battle. keep ya joints up man, you got gd material.

mvgt- @Habitat

ill nik-A 03-30-2018 11:21 PM

Street magician was nice.

Isis and the telescope joint was cool

I got fresh aka hab aka Mexico


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