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Cred 03-27-2018 12:04 AM

Blue Bayou 2-0 vs Suthaveli 2-0 - BLUE BAYOU WINS
 
Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday MARCH 29th and will be open until Sunday.
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

@Blue Bayou @Suthaveli

Blue Bayou 03-27-2018 12:18 AM

Whaddup Suth

20 sound good?

Suthaveli 03-27-2018 10:04 AM

Sure.

Suthaveli 03-27-2018 05:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Suthaveli (Post 654385)
Fuck this corny alias who'za about ta get r-r-rattled quick
Direct blows if AV-12 b one <--- bich, I just sunk ur battleship

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 654385)
Scope’s ready! & so we’re about to see this punk get rattled quick..
I’ll have so many ‘Red Dots on Destroyer’ u’d swear to god I sunk his Battleship


Didn't think I'd notice? Ya garbage & thas just facts, brah
Maybe u thought I'd let cha go.. Yea, while ya danglin ova a trash compactor
Get blown ta fragments.But i can see y u're one of mah mojo addicts
Let's do da math: Blues swag plus his concepts equals to a total of faggot!!!
Culture vulture pig.Total exposure would end ya, jerk
Put some heat up under dis swine & we got ourselves a spit roast in da wrks
Been stealin my concepts for yrs & there isn't no hype ta stop
But I've been watchin Dophe frm afar.. Steadily awaitin ta take da sniper shot
Gotta killer vocab. Don't let da skin colour get ya criss-cross
U'll get clapped between ea. word like blk biches talkin while they're pissed off
Swing a savage right & u're about ta get dealt da honors
Boooooooi, dis arm magic! One hit, & u lose ya grip. Expelliarmus!!
U ain't champin this season. U should go on & run, skidaddle
Or it's airport luggage lost for u - End up a missin case upon ya travels
Take me as a snack. As luck will hv it, u'll get damaged too
Try ta eat me & it's crocodile steez <-- I'll walk outta Blue Bayou an animal
It can get real Philly, ock when I fill the ox. Ya feel me, ock?
Sheeeit, i'm Dig Dug w. da shoti - Fill ya body w. tht pump until it pops
King Kong in dis bich!! I. Don't. Think. This. Fucker. Knows.
Place a foot in da arena w.me, I'm pointin & yellin, "BUT WHAA ARE THOOOOOSE!?!?"
Marksman w. my spots when strategically causin bleedin
Pound tht X across ya chest & u'll fall back doin da Wakanda greetin


22. gd luck. @Cred @Blue Bayou

Blue Bayou 03-27-2018 05:34 PM

Mr. Irrelevant ...
.
.


Hot or Thot proved he’s washed up, not the same beast as before..
ever since that Diabetes had to accept the fact he’s not Too Sweet anymore
meanwhile Blue’s back better than ever, a mutha’fuckin king w/ quotes..
Suth could 'pull more Strings' then Bags on his quest to 505 & STILL not get a single vote
hasn’t champed a single site in 10 years.. is it me or is this guy corny?!
ironic Suth’s getting 'Blown outta the Water' but he’s never been Fly-Boarding
you get NO pussy & not only is it clear you suck..
i roll in Derange while ur stuck listening to girls tell you that ur ‘weird as fuck’
WRITE THIS BAR IN ALL CAPS SO IT'S CLEAR THAT THIS BITCH IS A JOKE..
^^^I’ve got a point to make…. & once the knife’s sharpened I’m slittin his throat
i’ll post the last 100 bars he’s dropped & prove Suth's rappin is played..
Shohei’s nothing but a total bust to the point the Angels start askin for trades
your head'll get maimed, berettas’ll spray that’ll sever ya brain..
when I take the MACK out like u did w/ ur name since u’ve never been laid
come at me on some G shit & you’ll fall back fast..
claimin you 'Gobert Arms on the Block' but in reality you’re talkin All that Jazz’
sayin he’s a hustler & gets paper but I don’t care what he says to peers ..
it don’t matter what this bitchmade on the street when that’s been his rep for years
if somehow u dodge the left & start thinkin that u got me smoked..
i’ll give you the business with my Right Hand, Man.. like I sent a Proxy Vote
you don’t blast the tool, you’re a liar & ur wack to boot..
how can u be livin a Livelihood life when I’ve just taken THAT from you?!


22 & ya thru. g'luck

WRATH 03-27-2018 09:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Suthaveli (Post 654575)
Didn't think I'd notice? Ya garbage & thas just facts, brah
Maybe u thought I'd let cha go.. Yea, while ya danglin ova a trash compactor

Light

Get blown ta fragments.But i can see y u're one of mah mojo addicts
Let's do da math: Blues swag plus his concepts equals to a total of faggot!!!

Cringe

Culture vulture pig.Total exposure would end ya, jerk
Put some heat up under dis swine & we got ourselves a spit roast in da wrks

Ok

Been stealin my concepts for yrs & there isn't no hype ta stop
But I've been watchin Dophe frm afar.. Steadily awaitin ta take da sniper shot

Light

Gotta killer vocab. Don't let da skin colour get ya criss-cross
U'll get clapped between ea. word like blk biches talkin while they're pissed off

Nah

Swing a savage right & u're about ta get dealt da honors
Boooooooi, dis arm magic! One hit, & u lose ya grip. Expelliarmus!!

Lol ok

U ain't champin this season. U should go on & run, skidaddle
Or it's airport luggage lost for u - End up a missin case upon ya travels

Nice

Take me as a snack. As luck will hv it, u'll get damaged too
Try ta eat me & it's crocodile steez <-- I'll walk outta Blue Bayou an animal

Nah

It can get real Philly, ock when I fill the ox. Ya feel me, ock?
Sheeeit, i'm Dig Dug w. da shoti - Fill ya body w. tht pump until it pops

Sick

King Kong in dis bich!! I. Don't. Think. This. Fucker. Knows.
Place a foot in da arena w.me, I'm pointin & yellin, "BUT WHAA ARE THOOOOOSE!?!?"

Haha

Marksman w. my spots when strategically causin bleedin
Pound tht X across ya chest & u'll fall back doin da Wakanda greetin

Good



22. gd luck. @Cred @Blue Bayou


Hot or Thot proved he’s washed up, not the same beast as before..
ever since that Diabetes had to accept the fact he’s not Too Sweet anymorefat wife

Okay

meanwhile Blue’s back better than ever, a mutha’fuckin king w/ quotes..fat wife
Suth could 'pull more Strings' then Bags on his quest to 505 & STILL not get a single vote

Okay

hasn’t champed a single site in 10 years.. is it me or is this guy corny?!
ironic Suth’s getting 'Blown outta the Water' but he’s never been Fly-Boarding

Ok

you get NO pussy & not only is it clear you suck..
i roll in Derange while ur stuck listening to girls tell you that ur ‘weird as fuck’

Heh

WRITE THIS BAR IN ALL CAPS SO IT'S CLEAR THAT THIS BITCH IS A JOKE..fat wife
^^^I’ve got a point to make…. & once the knife’s sharpened I’m slittin his throatfat wife

Okay

i’ll post the last 100 bars he’s dropped & prove Suth's rappin is played..
Shohei’s nothing but a total bust to the point the Angels start askin for trades

Nice

your head'll get maimed, berettas’ll spray that’ll sever ya brain..
when I take the MACK out like u did w/ ur name since u’ve never been laid

Ha

come at me on some G shit & you’ll fall back fast..fat wife
claimin you 'Gobert Arms on the Block' but in reality you’re talkin All that Jazz’fat wife

Cool

sayin he’s a hustler & gets paper but I don’t care what he says to peers ..fat wife
it don’t matter what this bitchmade on the street when that’s been his rep for yearsfat wife

Sick

if somehow u dodge the left & start thinkin that u got me smoked..
i’ll give you the business with my Right Hand, Man.. like I sent a Proxy Vote

Nice

you don’t blast the tool, you’re a liar & ur wack to boot..fat wife
how can u be livin a Livelihood life when I’ve just taken THAT from you?!

Good

To significant misses edges to blue
V blue

Hush 03-27-2018 10:40 PM

Man

Blue used that make a point cut urthroag lien and it really fucked me up

It was one of those what are we doing here moments

Suth first half really was wack to me I can’t hold y’all
Second half fire wit the Harry Potter and what are those lines
Dig dug and bitches Clappin was cold too



Blue had the derange line witch was fire

Bitchmade and lively hood was tight too


Just a lot of the shit was site references or sports quotes I didn’t get


So yea


I only commented cuz that cut ya throat line gave me deja vu

Lyfzaa Gamble 03-28-2018 12:04 PM

Damnn Blue went hardd, suth had a nice verse too. Ima edit this with my vote.

Barcotic 03-28-2018 09:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Suthaveli (Post 654575)
Didn't think I'd notice? Ya garbage & thas just facts, brah
Maybe u thought I'd let cha go.. Yea, while ya danglin ova a trash compactor
decent, but the concepts arent the same so the personal barely hits
Get blown ta fragments.But i can see y u're one of mah mojo addicts
Let's do da math: Blues swag plus his concepts equals to a total of faggot!!!
miss
Culture vulture pig.Total exposure would end ya, jerk
Put some heat up under dis swine & we got ourselves a spit roast in da wrks
not horrible but this missed as well, too simple imo
Been stealin my concepts for yrs & there isn't no hype ta stop
But I've been watchin Dophe frm afar.. Steadily awaitin ta take da sniper shot
i reiterate my feedback from the last bar
Gotta killer vocab. Don't let da skin colour get ya criss-cross
U'll get clapped between ea. word like blk biches talkin while they're pissed off
if "ea." means each, this is nice
Swing a savage right & u're about ta get dealt da honors
Boooooooi, dis arm magic! One hit, & u lose ya grip. Expelliarmus!!
LOL dope, this verse is heating up
U ain't champin this season. U should go on & run, skidaddle
Or it's airport luggage lost for u - End up a missin case upon ya travels
pretty gd
Take me as a snack. As luck will hv it, u'll get damaged too
Try ta eat me & it's crocodile steez <-- I'll walk outta Blue Bayou an animal
hit, but not hard
It can get real Philly, ock when I fill the ox. Ya feel me, ock?
Sheeeit, i'm Dig Dug w. da shoti - Fill ya body w. tht pump until it pops
had to look it up, didnt like it
King Kong in dis bich!! I. Don't. Think. This. Fucker. Knows.
Place a foot in da arena w.me, I'm pointin & yellin, "BUT WHAA ARE THOOOOOSE!?!?"
ok, swagger helped this one hit
Marksman w. my spots when strategically causin bleedin
Pound tht X across ya chest & u'll fall back doin da Wakanda greetin
gd

4 gd punches
3 jabs
4 misses

vs

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 654583)
Hot or Thot proved he’s washed up, not the same beast as before..
ever since that Diabetes had to accept the fact he’s not Too Sweet anymore
nah, forced it into a concept imo
meanwhile Blue’s back better than ever, a mutha’fuckin king w/ quotes..
Suth could 'pull more Strings' then Bags on his quest to 505 & STILL not get a single vote
slick, i like this
hasn’t champed a single site in 10 years.. is it me or is this guy corny?!
ironic Suth’s getting 'Blown outta the Water' but he’s never been Fly-Boarding
gd
you get NO pussy & not only is it clear you suck..
i roll in Derange while ur stuck listening to girls tell you that ur ‘weird as fuck’
light hit
WRITE THIS BAR IN ALL CAPS SO IT'S CLEAR THAT THIS BITCH IS A JOKE..
^^^I’ve got a point to make…. & once the knife’s sharpened I’m slittin his throat
too old of a concept here, ur setup angle culdnt save it
i’ll post the last 100 bars he’s dropped & prove Suth's rappin is played..
Shohei’s nothing but a total bust to the point the Angels start askin for trades
dope
your head'll get maimed, berettas’ll spray that’ll sever ya brain..
when I take the MACK out like u did w/ ur name since u’ve never been laid
very nice
come at me on some G shit & you’ll fall back fast..
claimin you 'Gobert Arms on the Block' but in reality you’re talkin All that Jazz’
i must be missing it, pm or visitor msg me after the vote
sayin he’s a hustler & gets paper but I don’t care what he says to peers ..
it don’t matter what this bitchmade on the street when that’s been his rep for years
dece
if somehow u dodge the left & start thinkin that u got me smoked..
i’ll give you the business with my Right Hand, Man.. like I sent a Proxy Vote
not a miss, not great
you don’t blast the tool, you’re a liar & ur wack to boot..
how can u be livin a Livelihood life when I’ve just taken THAT from you?!
same as above bar, pretty consistent verse

4 gd punches
4 jabs
3 misses

dope battle, real close
v/blue bayou bwo 1 less miss

felt like his ideas overall had a bit more sting as well
but this culd definitely go either way

Schadenfreude 03-29-2018 12:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Suthaveli (Post 654575)
Been stealin my concepts for yrs & there isn't no hype ta stop
But I've been watchin Dophe frm afar.. Steadily awaitin ta take da sniper shot
Gotta killer vocab. Don't let da skin colour get ya criss-cross
U'll get clapped between ea. word like blk biches talkin while they're pissed off
Swing a savage right & u're about ta get dealt da honors
Boooooooi, dis arm magic! One hit, & u lose ya grip. Expelliarmus!!
U ain't champin this season. U should go on & run, skidaddle
Or it's airport luggage lost for u - End up a missin case upon ya travels
It can get real Philly, ock when I fill the ox. Ya feel me, ock?
Sheeeit, i'm Dig Dug w. da shoti - Fill ya body w. tht pump until it pops
King Kong in dis bich!! I. Don't. Think. This. Fucker. Knows.
Place a foot in da arena w.me, I'm pointin & yellin, "BUT WHAA ARE THOOOOOSE!?!?"
Marksman w. my spots when strategically causin bleedin
Pound tht X across ya chest & u'll fall back doin da Wakanda greetin

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 654583)
hasn’t champed a single site in 10 years.. is it me or is this guy corny?!
ironic Suth’s getting 'Blown outta the Water' but he’s never been Fly-Boarding
your head'll get maimed, berettas’ll spray that’ll sever ya brain..
when I take the MACK out like u did w/ ur name since u’ve never been laid
sayin he’s a hustler & gets paper but I don’t care what he says to peers ..
it don’t matter what this bitchmade on the street when that’s been his rep for years
if somehow u dodge the left & start thinkin that u got me smoked..
i’ll give you the business with my Right Hand, Man.. like I sent a Proxy Vote
you don’t blast the tool, you’re a liar & ur wack to boot..
how can u be livin a Livelihood life when I’ve just taken THAT from you?!

Pretty good battle, a lot of filler tho, should've went 16. Anyway Suth went crazy plenty of the creativity & humor I love to see from him, especially 'expelliamus'. Blue was nice, but there were a few random sports references that fell flat or just concepts that weren't fresh. Overall comparing the two, VOTE JAMES SUTHERLAND.

BodySnatcher 03-30-2018 12:26 AM

I think we can all agree Blue took this. Suth verse was hard at times to catch a flow, kinda choppy. Most of the punches were average. Honestly, his finisher was his best IMO with the Wakanda line. That was fresh. Blue's Gobert/Jazz line and the bitchmade line were enough to win this.

ill nik-A 03-31-2018 10:04 AM

Blue won. The point line was bad though cmon now

Suth. Second half was good. First half not so much. Blue was more consistent

Good battle from good ole vets

Alvin Karpis 04-01-2018 12:12 PM

Wtf 2002 lol

some old lines in this one

2 very good battlers

I got Blue taking this. close battle, Love the what are those line trom Suth, can’t front ya style is refreshing, unique, but overall it came down to consistency and Blue had the better verse

Saint 04-01-2018 01:22 PM

Didn't think I'd notice? Ya garbage & thas just facts, brah
Maybe u thought I'd let cha go.. Yea, while ya danglin ova a trash compactor
(decent, but a lil predictable)
Get blown ta fragments.But i can see y u're one of mah mojo addicts
Let's do da math: Blues swag plus his concepts equals to a total of faggot!!!
(needed more, ive seen lines like thèse before & it wasnt fresh enough)
Culture vulture pig.Total exposure would end ya, jerk
Put some heat up under dis swine & we got ourselves a spit roast in da wrks
(same as abv)
Been stealin my concepts for yrs & there isn't no hype ta stop
But I've been watchin Dophe frm afar.. Steadily awaitin ta take da sniper shot
(same here, needed a diff twist)
Gotta killer vocab. Don't let da skin colour get ya criss-cross
U'll get clapped between ea. word like blk biches talkin while they're pissed off
(cool)
Swing a savage right & u're about ta get dealt da honors
Boooooooi, dis arm magic! One hit, & u lose ya grip. Expelliarmus!!
(This hit)
U ain't champin this season. U should go on & run, skidaddle
Or it's airport luggage lost for u - End up a missin case upon ya travels
(Ok)
Take me as a snack. As luck will hv it, u'll get damaged too
Try ta eat me & it's crocodile steez <-- I'll walk outta Blue Bayou an animal
(Aightt)
It can get real Philly, ock when I fill the ox. Ya feel me, ock?
Sheeeit, i'm Dig Dug w. da shoti - Fill ya body w. tht pump until it pops
(I had a digdug idea, this was ok)
King Kong in dis bich!! I. Don't. Think. This. Fucker. Knows.
Place a foot in da arena w.me, I'm pointin & yellin, "BUT WHAA ARE THOOOOOSE!?!?"
(Lol. )
Marksman w. my spots when strategically causin bleedin
Pound tht X across ya chest & u'll fall back doin da Wakanda greetin
(cool)


vs


Hot or Thot proved he’s washed up, not the same beast as before..
ever since that Diabetes had to accept the fact he’s not Too Sweet anymore
(wp off to me)
meanwhile Blue’s back better than ever, a mutha’fuckin king w/ quotes..
Suth could 'pull more Strings' then Bags on his quest to 505 & STILL not get a single vote
(cool vid ref)
hasn’t champed a single site in 10 years.. is it me or is this guy corny?!
ironic Suth’s getting 'Blown outta the Water' but he’s never been Fly-Boarding
(Ok)
you get NO pussy & not only is it clear you suck..
i roll in Derange while ur stuck listening to girls tell you that ur ‘weird as fuck’
(ok wordplay, decent finish)
WRITE THIS BAR IN ALL CAPS SO IT'S CLEAR THAT THIS BITCH IS A JOKE..
^^^I’ve got a point to make…. & once the knife’s sharpened I’m slittin his throat
(old idea)
i’ll post the last 100 bars he’s dropped & prove Suth's rappin is played..
Shohei’s nothing but a total bust to the point the Angels start askin for trades
(Cool idea. but wp is a lil off)
your head'll get maimed, berettas’ll spray that’ll sever ya brain..
when I take the MACK out like u did w/ ur name since u’ve never been laid
(not bad, wording helped)
come at me on some G shit & you’ll fall back fast..
claimin you 'Gobert Arms on the Block' but in reality you’re talkin All that Jazz’
(This ok, looked up)
sayin he’s a hustler & gets paper but I don’t care what he says to peers ..
it don’t matter what this bitchmade on the street when that’s been his rep for years
(decent feels old tho)
if somehow u dodge the left & start thinkin that u got me smoked..
i’ll give you the business with my Right Hand, Man.. like I sent a Proxy Vote
(Ok)
you don’t blast the tool, you’re a liar & ur wack to boot..
how can u be livin a Livelihood life when I’ve just taken THAT from you?!
(Aight)

Not a bad battle, wish Suth 1st half was like his 2nd. Blue got it off wording & consistency.

V -- B.B


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