bleak 3-7 vs Plot 1-2 - BLEAK WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday MARCH 22 and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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@bleak @Plot

brains look like Super Aqua, what a Wonder this Bat is
quick Flash to his Mans cz there's no Justice for faggots.
Hair trigger on my hands,1 pull &you gon' take this flak.
Watch your circle get erased w/ one finger like Facebook chat
Clip bout 69 deep. &this bitch is gifted in gab, kids.
You'll hear the Tek, 'aaa SHI-' then it's sounding like his ad libs.
I front weight it's kilos. Skip and I'm throwing the rockets.
Your front weight is that dad gut, keeps ur keys low in your pockets

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For 8? Sure

Check this nosey faggot pre-swayying... so fucking lousy,
Imma just get busy-bodying the fool, care what he says about me!
Fuck this clown Bleak, he's gotta be the dumbest nerd,
If he thinks he's fly he got it backwards, he's a hummingbird.
Got no chance, shit gets absurd when I start throwing hands,
Leave all his facial features dripping-off, like a snow man.
Winning with those weak bars? pathetic how this fool tanks,
Just a shitty pipe dream, guess he must have missed Shawshank.

Bleak

Justice League scheme was decent. Basic but decent. I liked the circle get erased with one finger bar. Not gonna lie, I hated that tekashi 69 bar lmao. Maybe I’m tripping but I felt dumb af reading it out loud lol. The closer landed.

Plot I think you completely wasted your opener. I didn’t pay attention enough in school to know hummingbirds fly backwards lol. I used context clues though. I didn’t think it was that great though - too simple. Snowman bar was decent. I think you had an opportunity to build up that punch a bit more. Didn’t really care for your closer.

Bleak took this one. Punched every line and overall I liked your verse. Plot you wasted your opener which you can’t do when you only going 8 bars. Even then, I think Bleak’s punches landed harder and he had a overall better verse.

bleak; 1st, cool. 2nd, decent. 3rd, okay. 4th, meh.

Plot; 1st, just a statement. 2-4, the concepts have potential to hit hard but didnt.
I mean, there shoulda been more creative flips.

Anyways, bleaks gets the vote for better punches, better flips, etc.

bleak had fb chat & keys low

plot had a nice structured verse


bleak obv put up a quickie as most did this week. me included. i hated the justice league line., lol... apologies. IDK much about that rainbow bright kid other than the fact that i do find him to be a funny real life troll to the cali cats.
plot had potiental w.the hummingbird line, but i didn't like how it was executed. the problem w.plot, which has always been a issue w.him is he comes rly basic. wording structure is ideal for the site, he just needs to come much more creative w. what he says, imho.

mvgt- @bleak

Hair trigger on my hands,1 pull &you gon' take this flak.
Watch your circle get erased w/ one finger like Facebook chat
Clip bout 69 deep. &this bitch is gifted in gab, kids.
You'll hear the Tek, 'aaa SHI-' then it's sounding like his ad libs.

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Got no chance, shit gets absurd when I start throwing hands,
Leave all his facial features dripping-off, like a snow man.

I'm going with bleak on this one, just better overall better verse with better content. Props to Plot tho.

V-Bleak

VOTE BLEAK
Bleak forced his opener & that 69 concept was wack lol. FB chat & keys low were decent tho. Plot's concepts were super simple, that only works when your opponent's ideas are convoluted. At least your wording was clear & concise, just nothing special w/ your punches. Neither wowed Me w/ their verses, just an overall OK battle.