2Tripple0 vs Concrete - CONCRETE WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Feb 22nd and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

@2tripple0 @Concrete

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don't know why concrete even bothers posting here
aint no one going vote for him this season or throughout the full calendar year
Yeah you can just post verses for fun and battle to learn I guess
but you filled with so much shit it just attracting the flies way crete is such a pest
the nbl aint no joke I guess you should get credit for participating
you aint get the votes though for real cause none of your bars are worth articulating
He aint learned much from his previous battles and I doubt he'll ever take advice
guess i'll be like Chinese takeout way this cat should come with a side of fried rice
could've ended it there but there's always more to the story
i'll have you feeling cheesie cause ya verse reads more like it was some macaroni...

introducing myself by reducing your health, wasting this freak
facing Concrete will leave you face in concrete - tasting defeat
I kick game quick, lil lame kid, smack you like Rick James, bitch
you couldnt flow properly less you melt down like Nick James did
I spit flames sick, leaving your condition in a defenseless silence
punches without any point, your bars literally senseless violence
why fuck with the best, I can already sense the rot of your flesh
call me an unknown factor cos this X marks the spot on your chest
feeling your spark die, you realize any chance of survival is a far cry
see your despair with a sharp smile, gladly take Trips to the darkside

2trip: single syllable rhymes (almost just typed, single syllable multis. Duh.) And really weak if really any punches. Not even really good insults. Felt this was pretty weak.

Concrete:a little better in the punches department but nothing stellar. The nick James bar was probably your best punch. Internal rhyme and multis were head and shoulders above, though.

Vote. Concrete

v/concrete
just a better overall verse. concepts, multies & impact
plus he had the only bar i liked

punches w/o point was dope

stay up fellas

Damn Trip bro, you have to somehow find a way to make your punches sting. You formulating, but there not connecting or direct for a battle scheme verse.

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I kick game quick, lil lame kid, smack you like Rick James, bitch
you couldnt flow properly less you melt down like Nick James did
I spit flames sick, leaving your condition in a defenseless silence
punches without any point, your bars literally senseless violence

This here was enough alone to get this battle....Nice man

V-Concrete

VOTE CONCRETE because 'senseless violence' was the bar I liked in this battle.