Netcees - Godlyke vs Gaslight

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- - Godlyke vs Gaslight - GAS WINS BY NS (http://netcees.org/showthread.php?t=127366)

Godlyke vs Gaslight - GAS WINS BY NS

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Feb 22nd and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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@Godlyke @Gaslight

You came here to rap, but you're getting duffed in the face and shoved in a lake
And it's clear I'm Superior, so I guess you can say you just went In on one of the greats.
Goddyke is such a faggot, you might find him slurpin up a fiend knob,
He practices sucking dick in his sleep. Guess he's been workin on his dream job.
Bring ya whole clique, I'm too tough you wouldn't hurt me.
You'll get jumped after I get da squad n push up. I been workin on my burpees .
Might both be fresh, but i'm fresh to death, this chumps frontin
So push me and you'll see da new king like trumps button.
Think you could come over the top with the tek? That queer is flexin, yo.
Cuz I couldn't see dis dope bein prevalent in a black mirror episode.

@Godlyke take the ext. Don't you go radio silent on my first battle.

Pretty varied verse, 1st bar, is this a mere statement or I am missing something? 2nd, seems familiar but the flip was aight, kinda funny bar. 3rd, I didnt get this :(. 4th, I liked the idea and punch was worded effective, your best effort in here imo. 5th, cool concept , but the word play doesnt work entirely. Rhymes\flow is aight. Overall a decent verse, shows potenital. Too bad you got no-show hoed here.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gaslight (Post 650259)

You came here to rap, but you're getting duffed in the face and shoved in a lake
And it's clear I'm Superior, so I guess you can say you just went In on one of the greats.
this was nice, a little light on impact but dope conceptually n it still hit
Goddyke is such a faggot, you might find him slurpin up a fiend knob,
He practices sucking dick in his sleep. Guess he's been workin on his dream job.
lol ok, simple but funny. loses effect the more i read it tho
Bring ya whole clique, I'm too tough you wouldn't hurt me.
You'll get jumped after I get da squad n push up. I been workin on my burpees .
ehh, not feelin this one, the idea seemed forced into a concept but gd attempt. the word accociation jus wasnt as smooth as i like these type of bars to be
Might both be fresh, but i'm fresh to death, this chumps frontin
So push me and you'll see da new king like trumps button.
a bit corny conceptually, this seems like filler. creative tho
Think you could come over the top with the tek? That queer is flexin, yo.
Cuz I couldn't see dis dope bein prevalent in a black mirror episode.
couldve done more this this, which also felt like filler

u could be a problem in the nbl w/ a few minor changes, im liking the creativity