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Profit vs Schadenfreude - #1 CONT - SCHADENFREUDE WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Profit @Schadenfreude |
Check, how's 12-14 sound?
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16 Look..
Swear yo verses straight hot fire, but they mild as shit, only got L’s for putting that em together, thats an allen wrench. Shove the pistol in your face to get yo bravado in check a quick press’ll have ya switching type after the auto-correct. I’ll simply state yo boring bars not worth quoting, tool.. only reason ppl even read yo battle's due to the voting rule. Robotic bars won't get u far w/o style, swagger or pull, a drunk white tavern slut.. you love riding that mechanical bull. Through out the mag they tried to hype ya calm bombs & could only show a couple love, you've been writing RomComs. S’in my pocket, dubs a gimme, wasting rhymes, stop it, guaranteed every last vote in this charity battle’s a non-Profit. Bitch I’m up at a level you haven’t the chance to match free parking - I will body u on the spot, this is your handicap. Mfer my record clearly shows I put bodies into caskets, it's an obvious loss Prophecy, he should’ve known this’d happen. ..BODY. |
I got luv fa every writer, but in battle u can trust I'll off um w/a ratchet
So s'no hate when I throw Schade, in war it's a must I toss him in a casket U clowned Bar fa cryin, that's cool cos I ain't denyin the guys fits But when U lose u stay quiet fa weeks.... pussy u do all ur cryin in private This text shits a hobby tho, right? Well that makes 2 of us son But when I body u bruh, think party pooper, Im here to ruin the fun U show up to all ya battles & drop weak, landin a worthless percentage S'like hiring a reliable idiot, all u got going for u is perfect attendance To act wild is funny, ur name plays r trash & ur wack style is bummy u'll be the only faggit flippin profit & still be assed out of money Proof u ain't got chips is in ya thot pic, that slop trick is a life waisted So fuck sayin ya knots thick, when u score hoes that's not thick in the right places Cheap sluts, even the homeless hit ya crib when u leave cuz To them ya spots the headquarters, cos s'only 25 cent to get ya meat sucked Most don't believe in this stuff,but I tell the future, hammers out, piece to ya mug Think that's absurd clown then S'Raptors 1st round.. either way u'll get the heat or the bucks |
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3 gd punches 3 jabs & 2 misses profit had 3 gd punches 3 jabs & 2 misses ffs, that didnt help this is cloooooose ima have to come back to it hate to do it but ill have to re-read the battle a couple x and im tryna watch a show rn dope match tho fellas, ill be back 100 EDIT v/Schadenfreude after few reads back, im soley basing this decision on oveall creativity & substance this could def go either way, style preference IMO matter of fact im shocked that the votes are so leaned to either 1 way or the other... i think its a lot closer than other battles this week, excluding bb & destro's props to both, n congrats to whoever earns the shot |
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Shad- auto correct was okay, mechanical bull was an okay, closer was okay too. No real misses just no stand outs either this verse. Pretty clean as usual but seen better from you.
Profit- crying in private was cool, added out of money was okay, head quarters was meh to okay needed setting up better. Other than that wasn't feeling what was left over. Excution was up and down in this verse. V/shad slightly more consistent. |
Swear yo verses straight hot fire, but they mild as shit,
only got L’s for putting that em together, thats an allen wrench. Nice Shove the pistol in your face to get yo bravado in check a quick press’ll have ya switching type after the auto-correct Dope here Robotic bars won't get u far w/o style, swagger or pull, a drunk white tavern slut.. you love riding that mechanical bull Lol funny, but nice S’in my pocket, dubs a gimme, wasting rhymes, stop it, guaranteed every last vote in this charity battle’s a non-Profit Fiyaaaa! Bitch I’m up at a level you haven’t the chance to match free parking - I will body u on the spot, this is your handicap Ok --------- U clowned Bar fa cryin, that's cool cos I ain't denyin the guys fits But when U lose u stay quiet fa weeks.... pussy u do all ur cryin in private Nice personal U show up to all ya battles & drop weak, landin a worthless percentage S'like hiring a reliable idiot, all u got going for u is perfect attendance Lol this was nice To act wild is funny, ur name plays r trash & ur wack style is bummy u'll be the only faggit flippin profit & still be assed out of money Coo Most don't believe in this stuff,but I tell the future, hammers out, piece to ya mug Think that's absurd clown then S'Raptors 1st round.. either way u'll get the heat or the bucks ok Nice read from both of you! Good shit, I'm going with Schad on this one though. His punches were a little more well put together and less misses, none the less still a good read from both! Vote-Schad |
No..
Schad-boring verse, I expect at least some clever lines, but wtf? Proft - I was feelin a few lines and you had the consistency, caught my attention V/Profit |
Swear yo verses straight hot fire, but they mild as shit,
only got L’s for putting that em together, thats an allen wrench. Seen u drop something similar before but cool I’ll simply state yo boring bars not worth quoting, tool.. only reason ppl even read yo battle's due to the voting rule. This was good S’in my pocket, dubs a gimme, wasting rhymes, stop it, guaranteed every last vote in this charity battle’s a non-Profit Nice vs U show up to all ya battles & drop weak, landin a worthless percentage S'like hiring a reliable idiot, all u got going for u is perfect attendance Lol ok To act wild is funny, ur name plays r trash & ur wack style is bummy u'll be the only faggit flippin profit & still be assed out of money Nice flip Proof u ain't got chips is in ya thot pic, that slop trick is a life waisted So fuck sayin ya knots thick, when u score hoes that's not thick in the right places I liked this personally Most don't believe in this stuff,but I tell the future, hammers out, piece to ya mug Think that's absurd clown then S'Raptors 1st round.. either way u'll get the heat or the bucks I fuck wit this closer This battle was surprisingly good, especially not have reading a profit verse before I thought shad would for sure take it. Idk this jus wasn’t one of those shad verses that banged like they usually do, maybe took him light? anyways I was fuckin wit profits verse tbh, even that headquarters and crying in private were almost quotables. Good shit y’all but Vote / Profit |
Vote Schaden.
His verse way better worded and more effective as a whole, more direct attacks and overall a more entertaining read. Profit had several potetential good ideas but was too wordy in most instances, I'm not a fan of long lines to get to some point. The 'flippin profit' was probably his best. |
Shove the pistol in your face to get yo bravado in check
a quick press’ll have ya switching type after the auto-correct. S’in my pocket, dubs a gimme, wasting rhymes, stop it, guaranteed every last vote in this charity battle’s a non-Profit. Mfer my record clearly shows I put bodies into caskets, it's an obvious loss Prophecy, he should’ve known this’d happen. Vs If I had to be generous.. knot thick? Better wording could’ve helped but it was ok. I was feeling anything else really, like you had some cool concepts there but the execution on em weren’t great. I got Schad winning clearly v/Schad |
This wasn’t close to me
Profit needs a lot of work on the delivery of concepts Schad was ok obv not his best but he did enough Prophecy, charity battle were dope Profit’s bet was his self-name play, which I frown upon V/schade |
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