Sour joog [vs] Alvin Karpis - AK WINS
 

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@Sour joog @Alvin Karpis

How many?

12 or 14 is good

Enbombz to Sour Joog huh lol

You’ll never be top tier so stop feedin ya rep
What I just quoted is the closest you’ll come to bein a Vet
With ya name swap you had ta been clownin
You a Ge? No, cuz you wouldn’t even drop a N Bomb around him
I’ll pull ya bitch with ease and cop this win
Steal Bombay and have her swallow me faster then a shot of Gin
Got her sprung, I don’t even know what to tell yo bitch
She sayin Cardi B huge before that Bodak Yellow shit
WC had me dyin, you didn’t even bring heat
I got robbed by 1 vote...you got 6 less & clean sweeped
You stalk helpess & hurt children, this pedo is nasty
If you see Sour Patch Kids up in a van, it’s after he offers them candy

I pen award winning raw scriptures, I drop flames there's no confusion
You say ya dugongs, we're still trying to sea cow you even came to that conclusion,
Tried to battle in the top tier w/ Orc, but bitch you got slaughtered
You needed something magic Karp..n did an amazing job of a fish out of water
You ain't a lover or a fighter, what you want? It's the truth g
If you throw a clean punch, It's quickly replaced by the one that you roofied
Boy an easy kill like Ezekiel, when there's action he dead silent
He ain't shit without a cat to back him up, just an actor who dread violence
Icu faggot n you should already know the kid got shooters
Ya think not loser..I'll put the pump to ya lungs like a Rick Ross rumor
Bust in this fat fuck house n leave him on the couch bleeding
Without reason..these hands gone go to work on tubs like they housekeeping

You’ll never be top tier so stop feedin ya rep
What I just quoted is the closest you’ll come to bein a Vet
cool
With ya name swap you had ta been clownin
You a Ge? No, cuz you wouldn’t even drop a N Bomb around him
didn't like this
I’ll pull ya bitch with ease and cop this win
Steal Bombay and have her swallow me faster then a shot of Gin
this was good
Got her sprung, I don’t even know what to tell yo bitch
She sayin Cardi B huge before that Bodak Yellow shit
this was good
WC had me dyin, you didn’t even bring heat
I got robbed by 1 vote...you got 6 less & clean sweeped
diodn't like this
You stalk helpess & hurt children, this pedo is nasty
If you see Sour Patch Kids up in a van, it’s after he offers them candy
light

vs

I pen award winning raw scriptures, I drop flames there's no confusion
You say ya dugongs, we're still trying to sea cow you even came to that conclusion,
do gongs? not sure if I'm missing something (I get seek how / sea cow and dugong correlation but wtf is dugong supposed to mean?)
Tried to battle in the top tier w/ Orc, but bitch you got slaughtered
You needed something magic Karp..n did an amazing job of a fish out of water
this is good
You ain't a lover or a fighter, what you want? It's the truth g
If you throw a clean punch, It's quickly replaced by the one that you roofied
light
Boy an easy kill like Ezekiel, when there's action he dead silent
He ain't shit without a cat to back him up, just an actor who dread violence
didn't like this
Icu faggot n you should already know the kid got shooters
Ya think not loser..I'll put the pump to ya lungs like a Rick Ross rumor
ok
Bust in this fat fuck house n leave him on the couch bleeding
Without reason..these hands gone go to work on tubs like they housekeeping
light

Pretty close here but karp had the harder hitting punches.

v/karp

Alvin

You’ll never be top tier so stop feedin ya rep
What I just quoted is the closest you’ll come to bein a Vet
simple as a personal

With ya name swap you had ta been clownin
You a Ge? No, cuz you wouldn’t even drop a N Bomb around him
nah

I’ll pull ya bitch with ease and cop this win
Steal Bombay and have her swallow me faster then a shot of Gin
played nameplay

Got her sprung, I don’t even know what to tell yo bitch
She sayin Cardi B huge before that Bodak Yellow shit
lol cool wordplay

WC had me dyin, you didn’t even bring heat
I got robbed by 1 vote...you got 6 less & clean sweeped
simple personal again

You stalk helpess & hurt children, this pedo is nasty
If you see Sour Patch Kids up in a van, it’s after he offers them candy
another played nameplay

Sour

pen award winning raw scriptures, I drop flames there's no confusion
You say ya dugongs, we're still trying to sea cow you even came to that conclusion,
didn't get the dugongs wordplay here

Tried to battle in the top tier w/ Orc, but bitch you got slaughtered
You needed something magic Karp..n did an amazing job of a fish out of water
cool personal plenty of karp fish joints done but not a bad flip

You ain't a lover or a fighter, what you want? It's the truth g
If you throw a clean punch, It's quickly replaced by the one that you roofied
lol

Boy an easy kill like Ezekiel, when there's action he dead silent
He ain't shit without a cat to back him up, just an actor who dread violence
nah

Icu faggot n you should already know the kid got shooters
Ya think not loser..I'll put the pump to ya lungs like a Rick Ross rumor
dope

Bust in this fat fuck house n leave him on the couch bleeding
Without reason..these hands gone go to work on tubs like they housekeeping
nice

well Alvin had too simple of personals and overall some played content. sour had more consistency his last two bars had good impact which made him take the dub here. that rick ross bar was tough.

v/Sour

VOTE ALVIN KARPIS
Karp was overly simplistic, but SJ had some really weird concepts, which caused some really bad misses.

You’ll never be top tier so stop feedin ya rep
What I just quoted is the closest you’ll come to bein a Vet
okay
With ya name swap you had ta been clownin
You a Ge? No, cuz you wouldn’t even drop a N Bomb around him
eh
I’ll pull ya bitch with ease and cop this win
Steal Bombay and have her swallow me faster then a shot of Gin
decent
Got her sprung, I don’t even know what to tell yo bitch
She sayin Cardi B huge before that Bodak Yellow shit
nah
WC had me dyin, you didn’t even bring heat
I got robbed by 1 vote...you got 6 less & clean sweeped
I liked this this was good
You stalk helpess & hurt children, this pedo is nasty
If you see Sour Patch Kids up in a van, it’s after he offers them candy
ooo that was funny

vs.

I pen award winning raw scriptures, I drop flames there's no confusion
You say ya dugongs, we're still trying to sea cow you even came to that conclusion,
no way
Tried to battle in the top tier w/ Orc, but bitch you got slaughtered
You needed something magic Karp..n did an amazing job of a fish out of water
eh
You ain't a lover or a fighter, what you want? It's the truth g
If you throw a clean punch, It's quickly replaced by the one that you roofied
I liked that
Boy an easy kill like Ezekiel, when there's action he dead silent
He ain't shit without a cat to back him up, just an actor who dread violence
okay I guess
Icu faggot n you should already know the kid got shooters
Ya think not loser..I'll put the pump to ya lungs like a Rick Ross rumor
ooo that was funny
Bust in this fat fuck house n leave him on the couch bleeding
Without reason..these hands gone go to work on tubs like they housekeeping
nah


vote: sour joog

just enjoyed his verse a bit more... this was a dope battle though...

I’ll pull ya bitch with ease and cop this win
Steal Bombay and have her swallow me faster then a shot of Gin
Got her sprung, I don’t even know what to tell yo bitch
She sayin Cardi B huge before that Bodak Yellow shit

vs

You ain't a lover or a fighter, what you want? It's the truth g
If you throw a clean punch, It's quickly replaced by the one that you roofied
Icu faggot n you should already know the kid got shooters
Ya think not loser..I'll put the pump to ya lungs like a Rick Ross rumor

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Nice battle here my dudes. The quotes I quoted were dope. That rick Ross joint was fuego from sour but that Bombay punch from Karp was nasty too. However the cardi b line was a bit better than the roofied one. I also enjoyed Karps verse a bit while reading through

Vote / Alvin Karpis

Karp
opener was gd
geno was cool
bombay is as played as open mike
cardi b was dope
wc personal was bland
not feelin sour patch kids

3 standouts

vs

SJ
hated ur opener
magic karp is old
clean punch had a fresh enough flip, liked it
hated the next one
pump to ya lungs was coo
closer was gd too but idt karp is fat

3 standouts

this is close af
ima have to go off misses
karp's were better
v/karpis

Lol swaying in a vote, you filthy animal.

Karp had: Geno was average & Cardi B was OK.

Joog had: nothing I liked... A lot of played/dated concepts hardly flipped with a fresh enough twist.

I got Karp here. And barely...

I’ll pull ya bitch with ease and cop this win
Steal Bombay and have her swallow me faster then a shot of Gin
Got her sprung, I don’t even know what to tell yo bitch
She sayin Cardi B huge before that Bodak Yellow shit
WC had me dyin, you didn’t even bring heat
I got robbed by 1 vote...you got 6 less & clean sweeped

This whole read was fiya to me!

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Tried to battle in the top tier w/ Orc, but bitch you got slaughtered
You needed something magic Karp..n did an amazing job of a fish out of water

This was coo

Icu faggot n you should already know the kid got shooters
Ya think not loser..I'll put the pump to ya lungs like a Rick Ross rumor
Bust in this fat fuck house n leave him on the couch bleeding
Without reason..these hands gone go to work on tubs like they housekeeping

Nice

Good battle here, but I'm going w/ karp by a hair

V-Karp

Karpis: cardi b, bombay

Joog: clean punch, rick ross

saw a cpl played ideas (magic, bombay)
but thought the twist made it better.
Joog some of ya wording was a lil shaky.
Karp was simpler but hit harder imo..

V -- Karpis