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Amen 03-06-2018 08:50 AM

CONT MATCH: Letterman [vs] Barcotic - BARCOTIC WINS
 
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@Letterman @Barcotic

Barcotic 03-06-2018 11:27 AM

12-16, ur call

Letterman 03-06-2018 05:50 PM

16

Barcotic 03-06-2018 10:02 PM

sent 12
@Allen Knight @Letterman
gl

Barcotic 03-08-2018 12:53 AM

@Letterman

no hall of fame & no hof battles is what u've achieved w/ ur skill
u havent had One Omelet.. n u'll fold when i put the heat to ur grill
geek, u should chill. u resemble a retarded, black gollum
gun bars dont hold weight if a gat in ur arms wuld snap both 'em
id be astounded n stunned if i found any pumps in ur waist
thisll be a first round 'sub,let' jus for sounding like somethin u aint
i beat karp, swerve & nick this season. s'why mike goes hard
im coming direct. u leaving dy wrecked is ur best highlight so far
my duel plays are either clobberin' vets or mocked
urr duel plays involve plastic revolvers and western props
want a path to the title? nope. no gold here, punk
u cant stand up to the flow -stone cold beer truck

no ext.

Letterman 03-09-2018 02:04 AM

Vs Barcotic

You become a legend from biting. That’s why ya hype stoppin
Once this Buster Douglas into the archives, we all saw Mike droppin
It’s widely known I bruise fools. It’ll happen to you too
It’s not hard to understand, you’ll get a knot to confuse you
If we ever battled face to face, I’ll leave your blown out in rage
1 shot’ll leave ur skull open, Mike.. til all ur expressions are flowin’ out on stage
Light up your block like Billie Jean, da glock’ll definitely hearse ya
So make the wrong move.. & I’ll fire at Mike top like a Pepsi commercial
Your team got a fruity ambience. & you prolly claiming that shit
‘Cause we can tell by your menorah, that you’re all some flaming faggots
It’s common for vets to get a W off the strength but u got em by a mile
Like we’ve seen Nightwing it & steal a win, you’ve completely mastered that robin style

Lyfzaa Gamble 03-09-2018 08:26 AM

@Letterman

no hall of fame & no hof battles is what u've achieved w/ ur skill
u havent had One Omelet.. n u'll fold when i put the heat to ur grill

ok

geek, u should chill. u resemble a retarded, black gollum
gun bars dont hold weight if a gat in ur arms wuld snap both 'em

lol nice

id be astounded n stunned if i found any pumps in ur waist
thisll be a first round 'sub,let' jus for sounding like somethin u aint

dope af

i beat karp, swerve & nick this season. s'why mike goes hard
im coming direct. u leaving dy wrecked is ur best highlight so far

woooooo

my duel plays are either clobberin' vets or mocked
urr duel plays involve plastic revolvers and western props

okay decent

want a path to the title? nope. no gold here, punk
u cant stand up to the flow -stone cold beer truck

decent closer

___

Vs Barcotic

You become a legend from biting. That’s why ya hype stoppin
Once this Buster Douglas into the archives, we all saw Mike droppin

nice opener

It’s widely known I bruise fools. It’ll happen to you too
It’s not hard to understand, you’ll get a knot to confuse you

okay

If we ever battled face to face, I’ll leave your blown out in rage
1 shot’ll leave ur skull open, Mike.. til all ur expressions are flowin’ out on stage

cool wp..

Light up your block like Billie Jean, da glock’ll definitely hearse ya
So make the wrong move.. & I’ll fire at Mike top like a Pepsi commercial

nice

Your team got a fruity ambience. & you prolly claiming that shit
‘Cause we can tell by your menorah, that you’re all some flaming faggots

loool

It’s common for vets to get a W off the strength but u got em by a mile
Like we’ve seen Nightwing it & steal a win, you’ve completely mastered that robin style

sick closer, great wording

overall this was a dope battle, both were very solid. i could see this going either way, but ima give it to Letterman for being more creative. If bars last 2 bars would've hit he would've took it imo. Great battle

V/ letterman

Amen 03-09-2018 02:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic (Post 648127)
@Letterman

no hall of fame & no hof battles is what u've achieved w/ ur skill
u havent had One Omelet.. n u'll fold when i put the heat to ur grill
Don't even know where you were going with this WP? Don't see it.
geek, u should chill. u resemble a retarded, black gollum
gun bars dont hold weight if a gat in ur arms wuld snap both 'em

This was simple, funny but effective and dope.
id be astounded n stunned if i found any pumps in ur waist
thisll be a first round 'sub,let' jus for sounding like somethin u aint
Wasn't to crazy about this one.
i beat karp, swerve & nick this season. s'why mike goes hard
im coming direct. u leaving dy wrecked is ur best highlight so far
my duel plays are either clobberin' vets or mocked
urr duel plays involve plastic revolvers and western props

Lol, ok.
want a path to the title? nope. no gold here, punk
u cant stand up to the flow -stone cold beer truck
SMH, no bro lol...

no ext.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman (Post 648492)
Vs Barcotic

You become a legend from biting. That’s why ya hype stoppin
Once this Buster Douglas into the archives, we all saw Mike droppin
Buster dug less was good - however the execution was corny/light. Should have made it more harsher man... This could have been fire dude, even tho the biting concepts on him are fairly dated.
It’s widely known I bruise fools. It’ll happen to you too
It’s not hard to understand, you’ll get a knot to confuse you
Nah.
If we ever battled face to face, I’ll leave your blown out in rage
1 shot’ll leave ur skull open, Mike.. til all ur expressions are flowin’ out on stage

This was fire.
Light up your block like Billie Jean, da glock’ll definitely hearse ya
So make the wrong move.. & I’ll fire at Mike top like a Pepsi commercial
Didn't like this.
Your team got a fruity ambience. & you prolly claiming that shit
‘Cause we can tell by your menorah, that you’re all some flaming faggots
What?
It’s common for vets to get a W off the strength but u got em by a mile
Like we’ve seen Nightwing it & steal a win, you’ve completely mastered that robin style
Nah.

v/Barcotic with one more effective bar. Basically saw this 2-1.

Joe Boston 03-09-2018 03:55 PM

Barcotic

no hall of fame & no hof battles is what u've achieved w/ ur skill
u havent had One Omelet.. n u'll fold when i put the heat to ur grill
seen the omelet wordplay bunch of times

geek, u should chill. u resemble a retarded, black gollum
gun bars dont hold weight if a gat in ur arms wuld snap both 'em
I felt calling him a retarded black Gollum has nothing to do with the finisher correlation it was not relevant. felt u could've went more towards the Gollum character direction according to the finisher

id be astounded n stunned if i found any pumps in ur waist
thisll be a first round 'sub,let' jus for sounding like somethin u aint
nameplay was cool

i beat karp, swerve & nick this season. s'why mike goes hard
im coming direct. u leaving dy wrecked is ur best highlight so far
dope good personal shot nice flip

my duel plays are either clobberin' vets or mocked
urr duel plays involve plastic revolvers and western props
lmao

want a path to the title? nope. no gold here, punk
u cant stand up to the flow -stone cold beer truck
nah

Letterman

You become a legend from biting. That’s why ya hype stoppin
Once this Buster Douglas into the archives, we all saw Mike droppin
I really liked the buster dugless wordplay I'm assuming barcs name is Mike? so overall dope opener

It’s widely known I bruise fools. It’ll happen to you too
It’s not hard to understand, you’ll get a knot to confuse you
nah

If we ever battled face to face, I’ll leave your blown out in rage
1 shot’ll leave ur skull open, Mike.. til all ur expressions are flowin’ out on stage
dope af good nameplay

Light up your block like Billie Jean, da glock’ll definitely hearse ya
So make the wrong move.. & I’ll fire at Mike top like a Pepsi commercial
setup wasn't feeling and the wording on the finisher fell flat

Your team got a fruity ambience. & you prolly claiming that shit
‘Cause we can tell by your menorah, that you’re all some flaming faggots
men aura? didn't really get this little reach to me

It’s common for vets to get a W off the strength but u got em by a mile
Like we’ve seen Nightwing it & steal a win, you’ve completely mastered that robin style
nice wordplay

I liked Dy wrecked from Barcotic and the Western pops bar. Letterman had a dope opener and that Open Mike bar was tough Lotb. I felt both were pretty evenly matched
but I gotta go with Letterman here I felt he was slightly more consistent and overall flips on the two nps he had were more creative.

V/Letterman

Schadenfreude 03-09-2018 09:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic (Post 648127)
no hall of fame & no hof battles is what u've achieved w/ ur skill
u havent had One Omelet.. n u'll fold when i put the heat to ur grill
Forced as fuck
geek, u should chill. u resemble a retarded, black gollum
gun bars dont hold weight if a gat in ur arms wuld snap both 'em
Decent
id be astounded n stunned if i found any pumps in ur waist
thisll be a first round 'sub,let' jus for sounding like somethin u aint
Just OK
i beat karp, swerve & nick this season. s'why mike goes hard
im coming direct. u leaving dy wrecked is ur best highlight so far
Again aight, but nothing crazy
my duel plays are either clobberin' vets or mocked
urr duel plays involve plastic revolvers and western props
Good
want a path to the title? nope. no gold here, punk
u cant stand up to the flow -stone cold beer truck
Mediocre closer

versus

Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman (Post 648492)

You become a legend from biting. That’s why ya hype stoppin
Once this Buster Douglas into the archives, we all saw Mike droppin
Good opener
It’s widely known I bruise fools. It’ll happen to you too
It’s not hard to understand, you’ll get a knot to confuse you
Very unoriginal
If we ever battled face to face, I’ll leave your blown out in rage
1 shot’ll leave ur skull open, Mike.. til all ur expressions are flowin’ out on stage
Nice
Light up your block like Billie Jean, da glock’ll definitely hearse ya
So make the wrong move.. & I’ll fire at Mike top like a Pepsi commercial
Lol..thought this would suck, from that set-up, but you finished well
Your team got a fruity ambience. & you prolly claiming that shit
‘Cause we can tell by your menorah, that you’re all some flaming faggots
Bad wording & concept
It’s common for vets to get a W off the strength but u got em by a mile
Like we’ve seen Nightwing it & steal a win, you’ve completely mastered that robin style
Predictable end punch

VOTE BARCOTIC had Letterman had one more quote he'd have taken this, cuz I was bored by Barc's verse tbh, but his punches were more damaging comparing the two.

2tripple0 03-10-2018 06:28 AM

no hall of fame & no hof battles is what u've achieved w/ ur skill
u havent had One Omelet.. n u'll fold when i put the heat to ur grill
okay I guess
geek, u should chill. u resemble a retarded, black gollum
gun bars dont hold weight if a gat in ur arms wuld snap both 'em
nah
id be astounded n stunned if i found any pumps in ur waist
thisll be a first round 'sub,let' jus for sounding like somethin u aint
nah
i beat karp, swerve & nick this season. s'why mike goes hard
im coming direct. u leaving dy wrecked is ur best highlight so far
okay I guess
my duel plays are either clobberin' vets or mocked
urr duel plays involve plastic revolvers and western props
nah
want a path to the title? nope. no gold here, punk
u cant stand up to the flow -stone cold beer truck
eh

vs.


You become a legend from biting. That’s why ya hype stoppin
Once this Buster Douglas into the archives, we all saw Mike droppin
nah
It’s widely known I bruise fools. It’ll happen to you too
It’s not hard to understand, you’ll get a knot to confuse you
nah
If we ever battled face to face, I’ll leave your blown out in rage
1 shot’ll leave ur skull open, Mike.. til all ur expressions are flowin’ out on stage
this was nice
Light up your block like Billie Jean, da glock’ll definitely hearse ya
So make the wrong move.. & I’ll fire at Mike top like a Pepsi commercial
okay I guess
Your team got a fruity ambience. & you prolly claiming that shit
‘Cause we can tell by your menorah, that you’re all some flaming faggots
that was funny
It’s common for vets to get a W off the strength but u got em by a mile
Like we’ve seen Nightwing it & steal a win, you’ve completely mastered that robin style
eh didn't like this much


vote: letterman I guess don't know could've gone either way really...

Pinot Grij 03-10-2018 11:26 AM

Barc - props, I'm trying to solve this Olemet wp like it's an expert level sudoku. No idea what you're talking about though, lol. damn.
Hold weight was funny.
Sublet isn't a hit for me.
Duel plays is at least a different concept. I like the idea, not huge on the execution though.
Closer is funny.

Yo, I respect your commitment to this super short bar style. It's working in points for you, but working against you at times too. You haven't nailed it 100% but kudos for trying something new.

Letterman

Buster Douglas flip worked but wasn't the most original concept - medium hit
Knot - not feeling
Open mike was dope. Only thing is I didn't even know Barc's name is Mike, so the nameplay is a bit hard to connect for me at first.
Pepsi commercial relies on this same premise. a bit dated on the reference.
Menorah is in Omelet territory for me bro.
Robin style is cool but a little indirect.

This isn't an easy call because neither really grabbed the battle from the other. Letterman's first two bars were cool, but Barc had 3 that hit for me. I got it 3 to 2 for Barc.

Vote -- Barcotic

Alvin Karpis 03-10-2018 08:17 PM

Buster Douglas was nice as hell, not a bad verse
Barc, Omelet was brutal plus my Namaste line was goat
However, King went too hard on NPs and Barc had less misses
Bar got this with consistency

v/Mike

Saint 03-10-2018 09:08 PM

Not gonna give a huge breakdown
quick

Barc: duel plays, nom let im iffy on
hold weight was ok
sublet coulda been bettr imo

Lett: buster, open mic
fire top is ok but too dated
last 2 bars felt the wording killed ya a lil.

V -- Barc, more original imo.


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