WEEK IX: Sammy vs Pinot Grij[PINOT WINS]
 

Verses are due FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Voting ends SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words

Voting on 3 battles is required.

Topic: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=126253

@Sammy vs @Pinot Grij

Goodluck!

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I can post tonight, but I'm guessing you want an extension

@Sammy

sure

“Promise”

It lessens the blow by making sense of
Confusion
Daily entanglements become riddles expressed by Confucius
What was nuisance slowly unraveled;
I welcome loose end
Let me breathe, please...a dream before this story begin

Like all story, it begins with dark clouds within view
There were efforts to mine silver but I'd choke on the fume
Lost with no sails; this world swells; I'm lost in the blues
Lost in my thoughts. lost it all; completely lost without you
Every Moment, a step closer to the edge of a bridge;
Making my long story short, Still i long for a hit
Lining up white promises and the promise are kept
Promise of bliss; plotting the script:
“are u proud of me yet?”
Except in this story, she promised me that pops would say “yes”
Birds would chirp in ecstasy. Fox plays with fish
Thanks to my sweet Snow White...alway promising kisses

https://i.imgur.com/AhEA5zv.png

What to do here @Pinot Grij

Sammy:
the confusion dump was nice, slightly grasped it and carried the line..
nuisance slowly unraveled;
carried in and dragged through very subtly highly enjoyed it..

a dream before this story begin

very impressed

"mine silver"
deffinetly had color in it

white promises and the promise are kept

much more past that and it is all the way out of here

Thanks to my sweet Snow White...alway promising kisses

nice ending..

xoxo

good show keep it up

@Innovator yea sorry, guy basically confirmed he wanted an ext at 5 pm the day AFTER verses were due. I went out and didn't have time to finish my verse. Don't really care anymore now tbh.

Yo @Innovator disqualify my verse, hombre. I’ll take the L.

nice @Sammy