FTW
 

I mean..
Whys a old G like Gen gotta suffer though, ive always had a hunger jones
I just never really had a place to call a fuckin home..
It was never hard to go to school and learn some new shit
Its just hard to give a fuck, when you go home to some bullshit
Alcoholic father, an experiment to a step mom
Who cared more about her own rep, less about my head problems
Bounced around early, on the move since a scrap
To much anxiety to fit in groups, how stupid is at
I hit my adult age, and i hit the bricks to
I been on my own ever since i learned to ditch school
Now im tryina a do right, tryina start a new life
Fightin with the good and bad angels, tryina choose sides


Cuttin this short..
Geno

2trip done opened a door for a style atm lol

that head problems shit was real tho. n the ditched school. I fucks wit that

Really liked the flow in this. Also, some relatable content (to a certain degree) which I'm really appreciative of. The beginning and mid section were the highlights to me but I definitely liked the slightly positive/optimistic tone you ended this on as well. Wish it was longer, though.

geno, you're dope, i think your pengame is nice and you've got skills when it comes to spitting a verse, even if you're white (jk). i feel like, when i read your writing, though, i've read the same sort of verse from you a dozen times before. i'm always playing with language when i write so maybe it's unfair of me to criticize your admittedly polished style, but no shade thrown - just saying it how i see it. if a writer develops something of an obvious formula and continues to write in that style, it doesn't excite me.

all that said, this was tight and i vibed with it (more than i'd care to admit). good shit.