Concrete vs. 2tripple0
 

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Right I don't really think you got a chance in this
You could write ill concepts but you have no idea how a concept flips
this battle won't be ill and I doubt anyone will consider reading it
its whack when your dropped in 013 and aint nobody noticed you ever since
you aint ill your completely lost he probably has no idea how to battle
you don't diss ya opponents and ya bars don't flip well now take this loss and hang it up on ya mantel
your rhymes are soft and bars with multis that just confuse us like something that was awkward
it takes you hours to arrange the structure of ya text but finish up and still end up being slaughtered
this rapper destroying the essence of true hip hop and I bet he don't have a clue
cats don't even come they best in the BA so I'm giving them something better to do


eh...

so I asked for battle, this low-tier replied and I got one
torture him in my basement, guess I gotta start at bottom
you only succeed at failing, while I'm the sovereign to be
my style is outlandish but killing a netcee aint foreign to me
coming to complex bars, I'm taking the game to new places
I craft intricate lines, you can barely tie your own shoe laces
you thinking you can win just made you the joke of the story
pissed on by everybody, still you wanna soak up the glory?
I mean, you're record is 6-21, while I can outmatch any fool
another loss is not a paradox, cos you're about to catch 22

Pretty clear the new guy had a better sense of crafting a punch. crete has a simplistic style that he can expand on but he needs fresher concepts if he's gonna beat real heads. Sign into NBL @Concrete you'll get better much faster there than here. I like the minimalist approach you can fit a bit more in here tho if youre gonna use deeper concepts dpwn the road Not that you needed to here.

http://www.netcees.org/forumdisplay.php?f=243

Mantle and battled don't rhyme trip.

V/Concrete

Simplistic > Contrived, but thanks for voting.

Concrete won

Tripple didnt throw.no real punches again.

Concrete had me loling with the shoe.laces bar. Lmaoo. Damn 2trp