Netcees - Alvin Karpis vs For Battling

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Alvin Karpis vs For Battling - ALVIN KARPIS WINS

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THE WINTER CLASSIC
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Sunday,
Voting ends Thursday,
Battles that lack votes may close later.

One sided battles may get closed early.

Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 24 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 24 lines

General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory -- if there's no check in by Friday, you will be replaced.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Alvin Karpis @For Battling

Ugh

Can we please do pics or swag & flow? Legit anything other than regular text @Alvin Karpis
10-12 btw /:

Let’s get it

16 maybe more

Let’s drop tonight

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling (Post 641268)

Guess I jumped the gun a little on closing battles on time. Shame on me. Mags are hard to do, I do everything from my phone. Y’all just unappreciative af tbh. I can definitely improve on them since I’ll have more time but if Orc wants me out as mod I get it.
@Orc

LOL@those fuckin Can lines

I think I Can, I think I Can, no way those Cans gon win
You really think Tay Roc needs Orc to write mags for him??
You’re hideous. ya ex said my dicks bigger & she got fucked nice
It was opposite of that old saying...she measured once and I cut twice
1 punch and you’ll meet the dead, show respect more
I’ll Black & beat ya Red, you’ll Drop as I Connect Four
Lesnar left you hangin.. now you lonely so how you OG?
You can’t fool ol me, I bet you still wanna give Kool Mo Dee
I’m livin lavish this kid is average, he’s not that rare
My Palete consists of fine dining... his just gets awkward stares
I’m sendin headshots... you’ll catch a whole round from the blicky
Four Tops gonna be everywhere like it’s Motown in the sixties
How you claim you’re rich when you never made a lick
The last Mill you chased was fried rice on a date with Nik
Listen here crystal clear, this moron is losin
The pistol near it’s time he disappears....That’s a Foregone conclusion

You’re wack & washed up, been on that barc flow. it’s not your fault
I’ll have a pregnant lady cop in a chopper milkin on ya.. areola salt
Had a rough week, finger acting strange shits messin up
Your skills? Like my skin.. cept’ you’ve been deteriorating way before the eczema
Real rap, he’ll b in the chat again cryin’ that he lost
Chopper in the mall, it’s for your kids.. presents from the kiosk
Gay guns back again! Ready to bang on this dork
I’ll let carcass the butt all he wants till all that’s left is his corpse
Yes I’m a cop. I merk niggas on the regular w/o any range time
So do you want the K? Or the 9?...or I’ll send the K9!!!!! (KAPOW!)
Thinks he’ll beat Z? Smh fucks wrong with this man?
First I’ll put up on his block, then I open up from the window like ice cream vans
Tbh I’m not sure how he’s a legend, with each battle he worsens
Keep an oldie tucked, this next blast from the past won’t be one of his verses
We know you’ve been hurtin’, here’s something to take the pain away
Penguin flow, keep an Auto under the umbrella, it’s for a rainy day

VOTE ALVIN KARPIS

Idk wtf Zelph was on w/ that verse..smh. Karp had some heat tho, especially the opener & 'palette'.

Quote:

LOL@those fuckin Can lines

I think I Can, I think I Can, no way those Cans gon win
You really think Tay Roc needs Orc to write mags for him??
-didnt feel it.
You’re hideous. ya ex said my dicks bigger & she got fucked nice
It was opposite of that old saying...she measured once and I cut twice
-this was ok
1 punch and you’ll meet the dead, show respect more
I’ll Black & beat ya Red, you’ll Drop as I Connect Four
-alright
Lesnar left you hangin.. now you lonely so how you OG?
You can’t fool ol me, I bet you still wanna give Kool Mo Dee
Lol...could've tied in something more to kool moe
I’m livin lavish this kid is average, he’s not that rare
My Palete consists of fine dining... his just gets awkward stares
-alright but you used this angle alot last battle
I’m sendin headshots... you’ll catch a whole round from the blicky
Four Tops gonna be everywhere like it’s Motown in the sixties
-nice
How you claim you’re rich when you never made a lick
The last Mill you chased was fried rice on a date with Nik
-meal/mill eh ok....dece personal
Listen here crystal clear, this moron is losin
The pistol near it’s time he disappears....That’s a Foregone conclusion
-solid closer

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling (Post 641698)

You’re wack & washed up, been on that barc flow. it’s not your fault
I’ll have a pregnant lady cop in a chopper milkin on ya.. areola salt
-aerial assault is fresh wp....fucked the execution
Had a rough week, finger acting strange shits messin up
Your skills? Like my skin.. cept’ you’ve been deteriorating way before the eczema
-nah
Real rap, he’ll b in the chat again cryin’ that he lost
Chopper in the mall, it’s for your kids.. presents from the kiosk
-not bad
Gay guns back again! Ready to bang on this dork
I’ll let carcass the butt all he wants till all that’s left is his corpse
-seen kar kiss....eh seen it done better
Yes I’m a cop. I merk niggas on the regular w/o any range time
So do you want the K? Or the 9?...or I’ll send the K9!!!!! (KAPOW!)
-cool idea.....executed eh
Thinks he’ll beat Z? Smh fucks wrong with this man?
First I’ll put up on his block, then I open up from the window like ice cream vans
-mail trucks pushed it
Tbh I’m not sure how he’s a legend, with each battle he worsens
Keep an oldie tucked, this next blast from the past won’t be one of his verses
-didnt feel
We know you’ve been hurtin’, here’s something to take the pain away
Penguin flow, keep an Auto under the umbrella, it’s for a rainy day
-ok

V- Karp.....FB read rushed & threw off his execution & wording.

We know you’ve been hurtin’, here’s something to take the pain away
Penguin flow, keep an Auto under the umbrella, it’s for a rainy day

I can tell u aint have much time this wk, closer was dope tho.

vs

Listen here crystal clear, this moron is losin
The pistol near it’s time he disappears....That’s a Foregone conclusion
I punch and you’ll meet the dead, show respect more
I’ll Black & beat ya Red, you’ll Drop as I Connect Four
I think I Can, I think I Can, no way those Cans gon win
You really think Tay Roc needs Orc to write mags for him??

some good hits..

I think karp took this one kinda easy

vote - karp

Karp
opener made me lol, just decent tho
palette was coo
foregone conclusion was dope

old saying was bland, forced the connect four concept, same w/ four tops & i just wasn't feeling the other 2 conceptually

vs

FB
chopper in the mall was gd
closer was coo

areola salt was a cool combo wp but it fell flat w/ the execution, eczema was weak, kar kiss is played, ice cream truck was lazy/too similar to other lines u ben droppin, oldie tucked almost made the cut but ehh

very inconsistent battle
v/karpis by a bar

You’re hideous. ya ex said my dicks bigger & she got fucked nice
It was opposite of that old saying...she measured once and I cut twice
I’m sendin headshots... you’ll catch a whole round from the blicky
Four Tops gonna be everywhere like it’s Motown in the sixties
How you claim you’re rich when you never made a lick
The last Mill you chased was fried rice on a date with Nik

Vs

I’ll let carcass the butt all he wants till all that’s left is his corpse
Tbh I’m not sure how he’s a legend, with each battle he worsens
Keep an oldie tucked, this next blast from the past won’t be one of his verses

Alvin came with enough to get the dub here , I did like that carcass this butt line but why it have to be gay, the gun cudnt be a Nina? Lmao fag. Nonetheless the ending punch was pretty dope, not the set up. Date with nik was lol and that mo town in the sixties was dope.

Vote / alvin