Dope track from an old contest
 

https://soundcloud.com/jay-lyriscolo...gist-damn-barz

rhymeschemes are crazy..

Good flow work on them beats and delivery

good looks

Dope man.
Id sau the same. Work on a harder delicery. More conviction behind your words and i think youd have something pretty nasty man. Flow is on point. Nailing the beat well. Just needs that extra oomph behind it.if that makes sense. Idk it prolly doesnt. To ke it does. To you it migjt not. All depends on how you hear yourself i guess. If your happy with it then its good enough. But ya. Dope shit