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Orc 01-15-2018 02:12 PM

Profit vs Defiant - PROFIT WINS
 
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Profit 01-17-2018 03:54 AM

Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration
U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack
So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that
See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be
Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek
I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire
Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers
Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd
Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III
See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro
So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke

For Battling 01-19-2018 09:28 PM

@Defiant you have until midnight pst

Pinot Grij 01-20-2018 10:08 AM

Opener is ok.
Diggs is cool.
Robert Griffin line is nice af.

I feel like you watch a lot of football. Fun little read.

For Battling 01-20-2018 10:20 AM

Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration
alright
U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack
So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that
this was cool
See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be
Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek
wasnt feelin this one
I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire
Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers
hmm this can work both ways
Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd
Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III
dope concept, wording could have been a little better but overall I liked this punch
See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro
So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke
decent, don’t like how you executed this too much

You would have won if he had showed either way, but this was a cool little verse. Diggs and RG3 were both nice

Orc 01-20-2018 03:10 PM

Eagles celebration was nice, Diggs was a cool flip. The other football flip was okay too. Liked the swagger in the passionate line although it wasn't necessarily a heavy punch. Thought the verse was pretty consistent as a whole and you've got a nice writing style.


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