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Profit vs Defiant - PROFIT WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! |
Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke |
@Defiant you have until midnight pst
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Opener is ok.
Diggs is cool. Robert Griffin line is nice af. I feel like you watch a lot of football. Fun little read. |
Broke 8-0'd u, n imma leave u smellin pavement
Cos 1 punch'll rock this dogs face, no eagles celebration alright U have no chance of winnin, n the league knows that this kids wack So beatin me would take a Vikings miracle, unfortunately nobody Diggs that this was cool See G's don't pick on the vulnerable, so this ain't a position I'm wanting to be Just cos im fully loc I ain't a bully yo, I gets no pleasure from punkin a geek wasnt feelin this one I'm not comin w/heat, n no1 blames me cos yo ass isn't fire Call it lack a desire, cos I only put in work against the passionate writers hmm this can work both ways Since 2013 N ur only competition is herbs, u outta listen than nerd Stop gettin HURT n face the fact ur not built fa this league.. Robert Griffen III dope concept, wording could have been a little better but overall I liked this punch See it's very clear that ur barely feared, bro So Beating u s'called doin what I'm podado...<-- that ain't a Aries Spears joke decent, don’t like how you executed this too much You would have won if he had showed either way, but this was a cool little verse. Diggs and RG3 were both nice |
Eagles celebration was nice, Diggs was a cool flip. The other football flip was okay too. Liked the swagger in the passionate line although it wasn't necessarily a heavy punch. Thought the verse was pretty consistent as a whole and you've got a nice writing style.
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