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Allen Knight vs Innovator - ALLEN KNIGHT WINS

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@Allen Knight @Innovator

10

Fuck this fagot his name I won’t even mention
Like when legends get discussed he’s never in the conversation.
No smiles when I let the pump joke on your mandible
Ohh you in LOL? That’s funny cuz yah bars are always laughable
YOU NOT RELEVANT no one checks for you fagot, that’s unlikely
Cuz when’s the last time you heard of a knight shining brightly
HOF? Nah homie you twisting cheers for jeers
Let’s be honest You got it backwards that shit should say FOH!
Fuck a AK, grab the shotty niggah, aim it at his chest
And rock this fagot. so if he’s a gaint, call me David in the flesh.

my team fulla animals, one word they'll wreck him early
they'll tackle & put Paws on ya chest like u rockin a Clemson jersey
dont give ppl txt advice, ur gonna die.. pass the urn
u cant come to Infrastructure this pussies world about to crash & burn
run up in ya crib, grab ur throat & handle u quick
a Wallaby the first place ur face gets slammed on some animal shit
i'll spit in ur face & back hand ya then scar u further
step up or even Tesla bit i'll swing off on u till im charged w/ murder
w/ ya wifey right now smashin, bustin seeds on her dome
if thats a Shock Collar & listen to that bitchass dog scream for the bone

Inno u're the homie, but u have a lot of elevating to do in this battle shit. Gotta be much more orioginal w/ those concepts to creative effective punches Bro. As for Allen, this verse read like u were taking it easy, but it was still effective overall..VOTE ALLEN KNIGHT.

Fuck this fagot his name I won’t even mention
Like when legends get discussed he’s never in the conversation.
this didn’t rhyme Bro, not even slantly /:
No smiles when I let the pump joke on your mandible
Ohh you in LOL? That’s funny cuz yah bars are always laughable
gotta find a way to better correlate your setup & finishers
YOU NOT RELEVANT no one checks for you fagot, that’s unlikely
Cuz when’s the last time you heard of a knight shining brightly
alright now this is something that had potential, sure the concept is played on him but you had the right idea for sure.
HOF? Nah homie you twisting cheers for jeers
Let’s be honest You got it backwards that shit should say FOH!
lol ok made me laugh
Fuck a AK, grab the shotty niggah, aim it at his chest
And rock this fagot. so if he’s a gaint, call me David in the flesh.
good flip I liked it

Vs

my team fulla animals, one word they'll wreck him early
they'll tackle & put Paws on ya chest like u rockin a Clemson jersey
alright cool
dont give ppl txt advice, ur gonna die.. pass the urn
u cant come to Infrastructure this pussies world about to crash & burn
decent, wasn’t feeling it all that much
run up in ya crib, grab ur throat & handle u quick
a Wallaby the first place ur face gets slammed on some animal shit
ha nice
i'll spit in ur face & back hand ya then scar u further
step up or even Tesla bit i'll swing off on u till im charged w/ murder
nah didn’t like
w/ ya wifey right now smashin, bustin seeds on her dome
if thats a Shock Collar & listen to that bitchass dog scream for the bone
this was good

Innovator, you should definitely keep going with text, I can see you definitely getting better as time progresses. Already a hitter at poetry, ain’t impossible with text. Allen didn’t have to go ham here, opener, wallaby, and closer was nice lines.

VOTE: Allen Knight

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator (Post 628444)

10

Fuck this fagot his name I won’t even mention
Like when legends get discussed he’s never in the conversation.
blah
No smiles when I let the pump joke on your mandible
Ohh you in LOL? That’s funny cuz yah bars are always laughable
played concept even w/ the crew flip
YOU NOT RELEVANT no one checks for you fagot, that’s unlikely
Cuz when’s the last time you heard of a knight shining brightly
played as well
HOF? Nah homie you twisting cheers for jeers
Let’s be honest You got it backwards that shit should say FOH!
terrible execution, ok concept
Fuck a AK, grab the shotty niggah, aim it at his chest
And rock this fagot. so if he’s a gaint, call me David in the flesh.
played

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight (Post 628448)

my team fulla animals, one word they'll wreck him early
they'll tackle & put Paws on ya chest like u rockin a Clemson jersey
eh, seen it but decent
dont give ppl txt advice, ur gonna die.. pass the urn
u cant come to Infrastructure this pussies world about to crash & burn
wasnt really feelin
run up in ya crib, grab ur throat & handle u quick
a Wallaby the first place ur face gets slammed on some animal shit
not bad
i'll spit in ur face & back hand ya then scar u further
step up or even Tesla bit i'll swing off on u till im charged w/ murder
eh
w/ ya wifey right now smashin, bustin seeds on her dome
if thats a Shock Collar & listen to that bitchass dog scream for the bone
nice

v/ AK

Allen Knight took it comfortably.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight (Post 628448)

my team fulla animals, one word they'll wreck him early
they'll tackle & put Paws on ya chest like u rockin a Clemson jersey

dope

dont give ppl txt advice, ur gonna die.. pass the urn
u cant come to Infrastructure this pussies world about to crash & burn

nah

run up in ya crib, grab ur throat & handle u quick
a Wallaby the first place ur face gets slammed on some animal shit

nice

i'll spit in ur face & back hand ya then scar u further
step up or even Tesla bit i'll swing off on u till im charged w/ murder

nah

w/ ya wifey right now smashin, bustin seeds on her dome
if thats a Shock Collar & listen to that bitchass dog scream for the bone

dope

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innovator (Post 628444)

10

Fuck this fagot his name I won’t even mention
Like when legends get discussed he’s never in the conversation.

nah

No smiles when I let the pump joke on your mandible
Ohh you in LOL? That’s funny cuz yah bars are always laughable

nah

YOU NOT RELEVANT no one checks for you fagot, that’s unlikely
Cuz when’s the last time you heard of a knight shining brightly

nah

HOF? Nah homie you twisting cheers for jeers
Let’s be honest You got it backwards that shit should say FOH!

nah

Fuck a AK, grab the shotty niggah, aim it at his chest
And rock this fagot. so if he’s a gaint, call me David in the flesh.

nah

Innovator's verse was terrible. Allen caught a body.

v-AK

Ak got this, Wallaby was my fav, Innovator didn’t have enough, mention and conversation don’t mesh, FOH had potential

Allen got it with the opener and shock collar
Wallaby been done tho, lol..

In- wasn't feeling...

V ak

Clemson, wallaby..shock collar Tesla could've been cool your setup was trash

Inno wasn't a fan of your verse. You need more wit and aggression

V/knight

Inno leaned me with that HOF concept, some dope shit right thurrr

otherwise I think Allen took it with the last half of his verse.
that Shock Collar shit was pretty smooth