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Adonis 08-16-2017 01:45 AM

One day Ur Here, and then...
 
How come we all go? Leaving burdens in the burbs
With a wife and sidepiece pouring bourbon for the hurt
Spending time sipping lean and snuffing pink
Puffing Purp and stacking green to the brink
What the fuck you think? The West is crazed
Sun Kissed snow bunnies catching eggs in legs
We act hard and pull cards until behind bars
Either that or broken boned in ER
We either capture scars or shelve out fists
Some scrappy kids napping kids
Lil Bitch, here, come and catch this brick
As I swang my dick and slang Bow's to Niks
Making bank with a glock near rib
or Stacking stacks so I can floss a wrist
Bezel gleam, Stuntin Drunk, Charlie Sheen
I'm woke as you the second fore' you pass
Wide eyed pleading for peace and then you pass
We all have...We're just woke in the now
Giving time to social feeds receiving clout
Eating Fear
Swine and cow
They're raised cheap,
Cattle, both food and humanity
No worries, when we're dead and gone
IG will filter in our Sanity


And Then UR Gone.....

2tripple0 09-10-2017 04:37 AM

Okay this was good but you need to connect that shit better... idk talking like your dead your gonr whats the meaning and then you just talking like you taking drugs and shit idk man how does that connect i mean u coulda connected it but i woulda been like yo im fucking raking drugs er sumn and then i like take too many and i overdose and its like the kid just died right and its like fuck why the fuck did he die fuck me wow your flow was nice though i think it was mostly down to wording goodluck with the rest a ya shit though yeah... alright decent drop i guess... what do i know u know...


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