Lmaooo wassup fools
 

Im back

Young man

Ok

Im surprised this still here

yooo

young stunna

Hi.

Greetings

hello

Ayyee

Im not here for long I just told myself I wasnt coming back till i recorded a song. And i wanted the people who really got me into the rap i like n listen to to hear it. If I remember correctly yall niggas might clown me for this one but its a love song but its fye

https://soundcloud.com/profitmalachi/dear-lauryn

Idk if u can change it so its not a link

dope shit malachi, only critique i can give is perhaps give a little bit more emotion to it. it sounds a bit too laidback, but perhaps that's the way you wanted to go with. i fuck with it actually after the third listen lmao

thats dope man. better than most peoples first tracks

you could be more forceful though, but it'll come with more comfortability with recording. and the vocals could just be louder in general they were getting drowned out at times by the beat

but word man it was much better than i was expecting

Thanks you two i def agree about my voice n being more forcedul n emotion. I think i just need to get more comfortable in the booth and ill sound much better