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Geno 07-21-2017 07:38 PM

Geno -Untitled. Vol.1
 
clap artillery at you frauds not feelin me
Rob ya neck, get ya chain mailed, all that chivalry
Im the white night, palest when that full moon hits
True goon shit, i shot the sheriff when that duece-duece spit
Ive always had a screw loose bitch, Makin sure his tu-tu fit
Its voodoo shit, my bars'll hit ya like them 2 blues did
Knock ya dick in the dirt, dippin off the benzos dog
Wake up with shit that isnt mine, swear to death those arnt
I dont remember shit, brand new shoes i swyped..
Woke up in prison like, what the fuck i do last night?
The Gift and the curse, such a fuckin miserable life
Sometimes i wanna turn around, and just give it to christ
But you hittin the pipe, thinkin i would ever retreat
Got the devil in me, big balls and medical weed
Thats a recipe for dissaster, if i ever i seen
And if ever i did you wrong, we should settle the beef
This malt liquer, bringin out the person ive caged
Its my personal hate, locked away, my version of satan

PancakeBrah 07-22-2017 09:29 PM

I've always enjoyed your rhymes, tbh. Maybe I've said that before in some feed. Schemes come pretty standard but the word choice is solid and the complexity (syllable length) is good but its all smooth, nothing forced. The content of this piece was typical of you. Easy enough to read, didn't hit a point where I wanted to quit. Nice little one off.

Mr. J 08-01-2017 01:37 AM

This has a dope bounce to it.
would be very impressive with music
I could chill out & vibe to it.
you could slap a bitch or smoke ice to it.
or you could pass the J like I do it.
either way this was nice, keep it up...true shit

2tripple0 09-11-2017 03:16 PM

I guess so whatever bump to music would be nice i gueas but like i just dont see what ypur trying to say.. like okay flow over a beat here are apme lines ya feel me.... felt idk just too easy....


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