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Dope girl 07-14-2017 08:27 AM

Like my mother does
 
People always say I got the goodness like my mother does
She taught me how stay strong when things get rough
I've got her heart
No matter what I go through
She's by my side
I always wanted to be just like her
I show a lot of love like my mother does
When I'm in pain I bow and pray like my mother does
I see everyone the same like my mother does
I'm grateful for everything she done for me
Because of her I made this far
She's A Queen
She's my World and everything
She's my all in all.

Mr. J 08-01-2017 01:19 AM

I've got her heart

that escalated quickly...









thought this was a step up from ya previous joint
Queens dont rap about ass... they give orders.
like a waitress but they get more than the tip.
either way this was bouncing pretty smoothly.
kind of slipped up here & there but you rode this nicely.
keep it up.

Dope girl 08-14-2017 11:19 AM

thanks love!

Geno 08-14-2017 07:32 PM

But they get more than the tip>

2tripple0 09-10-2017 07:49 AM

Lol yeah that was better good work for u silver i liked the read of a loving mother.... interesting how she took all of this childs shit and just took it until the end when tje kids still givig her everythig and her mothers still there for it thats crazy good story silver

Dope girl 09-15-2017 07:17 PM

the forthefeedback loves


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