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Infiltration (2-0) vs Barcotic (2-1) - Barcotic WINS
NBL Season 10 Week 5 Due SUNDAY 12/18/16 Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT - IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls! |
anywhere from 12-16 is good
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Alright.
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listen to barc
im fixin to spark. cred brought the style in, I lifted the art shots finna go thru Inf armour n hit the snitch in his heart our LAST visit? 7-0 when the match finished, dog in votes I'm seven up 'n U the one gettin ur cap twisted off wont do pics cuz on the down low, cat's the fattest .. wow yo. a couple straps'll drop this cow, no raptor paddock other names for inf? sheep, flake & softy they gave this Inf lamb a bull n ima cremate the body str8 cryyying whnevr u get this mf to open his mouth s' one thing to claim politics, it's another to vote for urself http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=124829 wanna dispute that? hold ur fake words instead u've pushed so much under the rug .. I'll stab the roll to make sure ur dead ur bitch fucks for $. ur just the lil whore's mascot laid enuff pipe over the green for Happy Gilmore's last shot shit ya, ur chick's ass is fucked mate staring at the fullback as I hit, that's a pump fake 16 no exts |
Last week
U weren't hittin hard; shot a full load but missed the mark Your craft was set on a self-destructive path up in Aerospace & u forgot to disembark. Your fondest memories in the HOF grow distant; & since been a fall That was Brain Candy....Now you're a canadian joke we LOL@ when thinkin a/b this kid in the hall Legacy took a kick in the balls; u hit a wall u cant climb out Can Mike find the Will? Boy, I've seen Stranger Things....but THIS world aint upside down. Dog your bitch on some borg shit & you act like a white knight Barc serves his queen, b....assimilate while every nigga shares that thot; that's a hive mind. Only have yourself to blame for losing battles; reverse it, carefully What Mike Pens gets no votes &'ll lead to swaying like a faggot...til he needs Conversion Therapy. I'll put holes in your top, wont stop if ya blood is splattering Shot after shot; we'll see the metal building UP in your frame like construction scaffolding. Your girls a freak, on her knees beggin me to peg her painfully Lars gift thread: I gave the bitch disciplinary action when her box opened w/ anal beads. This body is labeled; next intro will be u talkin to angels. No names so fuck a teaser, a 'Cold Open' will describe ya corpse on an autopsy table. |
This is extremely close, I almost did a bar-by-bar breakdown. Both had some great creativity in their metaphors & wordplay, yet both lacked in overall punch impact. Barc it seemed as tho you dumbed-down yo bars, don't simplify your concepts, just aim to be more harsh. Inf first off you were stretched asf, but more importantly, you saturated the verse w/ word association schemes, which are creative, but those are best utilized in helping punches, not being the punch. Anyway, my personal preference would be to vote for Barc, but I'm edging it to Inf, because he had more to offer substantively & literally..long winded ass bars, VOTE - INFILTRATION.
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1-0 Infiltration
Lets get some votes! |
I saw this differently.
I thought Barcotic brought heat. my favorite line was under the rug - it was a cool concept/personal sting. I thought Infiltration was a bit verbose with weak associations between the set-ups and closers of his punchlines. I do respect that he's thinking outside of the box in his lines. vote = Barcotic. our LAST visit? 7-0 when the match finished, dog in votes I'm seven up 'n U the one gettin ur cap twisted off wanna dispute that? hold ur fake words instead u've pushed so much under the rug .. I'll stab the roll to make sure ur dead vs This body is labeled; next intro will be u talkin to angels. No names so fuck a teaser, a 'Cold Open' will describe ya corpse on an autopsy table. |
The whole flow from twisted off top and raptor paddock is smooth
I really enjoyed that whole Inf lamb a bull play that was cool. Happy Gilmore leaned me...I don't know why though perhaps nostalgia. Inf had some cool concepts but didn't pick up for me until upside down & conversion therapy. The Lars gift and closer had me applauding ya work though Tough choice, I enjoyed bits & pieces of both verses One had the better delivery which was Barcotic But both brought some dope material to the table here. I'm leaning towards Bar due to the name play though |
Seven up, inf lamb a bull, rug stab
Vs Aerospace, brain candy, conversion therapy This was close. Even on quotes... inf was wordy as fuck but overall I think more impactful with his bars and just a slight bit more creative. It was a good read, but I got inf edging it V/inf |
Barc
I liked ur opener, cremate the body was good, stab the rug was dopee vs Aerospace was dope, metal build up was good, anal beads was decent This was a close match here. Neck in neck wit quotes, but idk I thought barcs rug joint was lotb and his hits were a little harsher. Im givin him the edge here. Vote - barcotic |
3-2 Barcotic
Bump for votes. |
Raptor paddock, 7up, vote for self
Vs Scaffolding n conv therapy I dug barcs style more cuz it was less wordy IMO. V barc |
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