Netcees - Maximus (2-1) vs Destroyer (2-1)

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Maximus (2-1) vs Destroyer (2-1) - OPEN FOR VOTES

NBL Season 10
Week 4

Due SUNDAY 12/11/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE

Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

don't know if you're gonna show up.. 10 sent to cred anyways @Destroyer

u got basic weak shit. s'why u get wasted w/ease kid
when these votes rush in, ur labeled a hack, no Obama investigation needed
how does it feel to be wack as fuck? I'm sure u stay pretty tho
I try to treat max well, but he keeps making shirtless gay videos
ur lines are straight, but u rush it & just word the shit wrong
the way aero took u out last week, u should change ur name to rickon
des shows up armed in the dark w/laughter & I always spark it faster
light up ur chest with so much iron, man, shit be looking like an arc reactor
ur girl stay calling me up too... she asked if I could run her home
& this prolly gonna make u mad, max, but bitch gave me that thunder dome

i got the glocks, i got the chromes. I'm putting shots in all my foes
leave you dead.. it ain't a nasal swab test when they put cotton in your nose
you're getting slayed with weapons, dickriders give you undue praise & credit
its obvious you're gassed up & now you're getting fucked.. inflation fetish
got marriage plans but I'll rip out your bones, im just beasting for fun
so I'll jump the broom with my missing rib, but sweep yours with one
you're decrepitly fading & degrading, truly this lame is aging
funny.. you're surrounded by cells & radiation when your cells need radiation
stab you to death when we battle, leave this pallid fag aching
step in the ring & you'll be gourd on the canvass like a calabash painting

Des -Russian good current event, Maxwell kinda obv but cute, rickon had to look up but concept makes sense dece, iron man is aiiiight, lol @ mad max thunder dome.

Overall good verse,safe, no misses.

Max - cotton nose aight, gassed up inflation lol dolls get inflated w air, I guess oxygen is gas so ok it works, missing rib worded kinda awkward, cells radiation a cool concept just needed dif wording, gourd on painting had to look up, it's ok kinda obscure

Overall I liked the concepts,

Good battle. Des was cleaner here

ur girl stay calling me up too... she asked if I could run her home
& this prolly gonna make u mad, max, but bitch gave me that thunder dome

That line is what i took from both sides.
pretty even battle. you two write similarly. This could go either way.

Vote = Destroyer. by one quotable. good battle fellas.

I have des here. Opener and ark reactor was cool. Not any big lows or misses.
Max had that painting and cell lines, a bit of a wording issue, but concepts were cool on both sides..

V/ Des for more convincing hits.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 612054)

u got basic weak shit. s'why u get wasted w/ease kid
when these votes rush in, ur labeled a hack, no Obama investigation needed
Just a n Okay opener
how does it feel to be wack as fuck? I'm sure u stay pretty tho
I try to treat max well, but he keeps making shirtless gay videos
That was D'Angelo, not Maxwell
ur lines are straight, but u rush it & just word the shit wrong
the way aero took u out last week, u should change ur name to rickon
Lol..good
des shows up armed in the dark w/laughter & I always spark it faster
light up ur chest with so much iron, man, shit be looking like an arc reactor
Decent, nothing crazy
ur girl stay calling me up too... she asked if I could run her home
& this prolly gonna make u mad, max, but bitch gave me that thunder dome
Decent

VERSUS

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maximus (Post 612060)

i got the glocks, i got the chromes. I'm putting shots in all my foes
leave you dead.. it ain't a nasal swab test when they put cotton in your nose
Nahh, your wording ruined this concept
you're getting slayed with weapons, dickriders give you undue praise & credit
its obvious you're gassed up & now you're getting fucked.. inflation fetish
Decent, not harsh enough tho
got marriage plans but I'll rip out your bones, im just beasting for fun
so I'll jump the broom with my missing rib, but sweep yours with one
Soft jab
you're decrepitly fading & degrading, truly this lame is aging
funny.. you're surrounded by cells & radiation when your cells need radiation
Lol..nice
stab you to death when we battle, leave this pallid fag aching
step in the ring & you'll be gourd on the canvass like a calabash painting
Good

DESTROYER edges, his punches just dealt more damage to Max.