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Cred 11-30-2016 04:17 PM

CBA (1-0) vs Barcotic (1-0) - Barcotic WINS
 
NBL Season 10
Week 3

Due SUNDAY 12/04/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

Barcotic 11-30-2016 05:03 PM

ten

CBA 11-30-2016 06:34 PM

Sounds good

Barcotic 12-01-2016 11:22 PM

meet barc ..

a veteran battler, dismembering challengers when he's throwin blows
ima put hands to cheek quicker than Kevin McCallister when he's home alone
buckle a clown, n muzzle the sound when ruthless weapons spark
Dhalsim, Street Fighter.. that's multiple rounds w/ two extended arms
I'm on another level dog, the long rifle gets me here
u'll find pieces of ya heart on ur lap like Shawn Michaels wrestling gear
last guy couldn't even FACE ME. saw him tuck, run & hide ..
and u should probably follow suitcase I open up from the side
watch it, I got tools to make ur soft clique have to peepee
glock shit. peg u at the bottom n leave ur top split.. that's a teepee
it'd be dumb to play bad n spit a bunch of fake adjectives
the chopper'd lift the beef faster than the one in Lake Placid did
every day is priceless, I will pop u in the streets
high cholesterol.. any way u slice it, ima drop u w/ a piece
they'll find u dead on arrival beside ur bible, chump
n if the tribe show up, we Blastoise thru ya screen.. Hydro Pump

16
@CBA

CBA 12-04-2016 11:17 PM

16? Let's do this!

Fuck battling me, you need to battle your depression Barc,
My gat won't help you feel better but it can still open your heart
Now I'll catch him leavin his house and see this herb dyke's nervous,
Slam him to the pavement and take out Bar, that's curb side service

And he's got a team of cowards, they're changing color when I hit the room,
I'll put hands on those squares, watch em get twisted like rubix cubes
Plus you raised the bar count and wrote 6 extra lines of filler trash
It's ironic ever since you bust out the pen, you always smuggle in ass

People get tired of these lazy battlers, you never really say shit
You wouldn't break the mold if you cleaned your mom's basement
I'm going straight to T Dot like DeRozan just to shut him up
You can get mug'd in Toronto, something like a Raptor's cup

Come to Cleveland and best believe you'll leave in a hearse
Empty the chamber like the court has dispersed,
You can see Bar missing like this last part of my verse

Chemist 12-05-2016 12:01 AM

a veteran battler, dismembering challengers when he's throwin blows
ima put hands to cheek quicker than Kevin McCallister when he's home alone
buckle a clown, n muzzle the sound when ruthless weapons spark
Dhalsim, Street Fighter.. that's multiple rounds w/ two extended arms
I'm on another level dog, the long rifle gets me here
u'll find pieces of ya heart on ur lap like Shawn Michaels wrestling gear
last guy couldn't even FACE ME. saw him tuck, run & hide ..
and u should probably follow suitcase I open up from the side
watch it, I got tools to make ur soft clique have to peepee

vs


Fuck battling me, you need to battle your depression Barc,
My gat won't help you feel better but it can still open your heart
Now I'll catch him leavin his house and see this herb dyke's nervous,
Slam him to the pavement and take out Bar, that's curb side service
I'm going straight to T Dot like DeRozan just to shut him up
You can get mug'd in Toronto, something like a Raptor's cup


both came nice but cbas misses were just terrible
compared to barcs here
mvgt to barc
cuz he had some haymakers

Cred 12-05-2016 07:50 AM

1-0 Barc


Lets get votes.

Schadenfreude 12-05-2016 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic (Post 611343)
buckle a clown, n muzzle the sound when ruthless weapons spark
Dhalsim, Street Fighter.. that's multiple rounds w/ two extended arms
I'm on another level dog, the long rifle gets me here
u'll find pieces of ya heart on ur lap like Shawn Michaels wrestling gear
it'd be dumb to play bad n spit a bunch of fake adjectives
the chopper'd lift the beef faster than the one in Lake Placid did
every day is priceless, I will pop u in the streets
high cholesterol.. any way u slice it, ima drop u w/ a piece

versus

Quote:

Originally Posted by CBA (Post 611465)
Now I'll catch him leavin his house and see this herb dyke's nervous,
Slam him to the pavement and take out Bar, that's curb side service
Plus you raised the bar count and wrote 6 extra lines of filler trash
It's ironic ever since you bust out the pen, you always smuggle in ass

VOTE BARCOTIC..CBA was decent, but too many of those concept were extremely simplistic. Even tho he had a few misses, Barc's 'Shawn Michaels' was easily LOTB, that & a few quotes got the w.

Suthaveli 12-05-2016 04:02 PM

Vote- Barcotic.

Obv had some stuff to say. I would keep peepin cba, tho. The potential is endless, & i can see him being in top tier talks here, given time.

Aero 12-05-2016 05:45 PM

Barc - this was a cool verse, a bit tame. Some of the concepts I wasn't really feeling. The lake placid line was dope, good imagery. Lot of swag/braggo here. I guess that's what the kids are doing these days.

CBA - open heart counts against you. Curbside was cool. Ah man, you came better last week. This feels rushed and lazy which happens. Rubix Cube line would've been dope in 06.


Neat battle here. Both kindve cruised on this one. CBA's misses were worse I have to vote Barc.

Good job

Slechtn 12-05-2016 07:56 PM

Barcotic: Home Alone was fresh. Dhalism was nicely executed for it being an old concept. Shawn line was LOTB. Teepee was dope. Rest was decent but not quotable. Hydro pump was played.


CBA had curb and raptors cup. The rest was decent but not executed good enough.


Voting Barcotic


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