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Wise Wiggles 10-21-2016 06:44 PM

Still Ba'allin'
 
Want to know what the joke is?
The ballistics of their boldness?
They bully us with bullets
Ballots nice as ballet
And you think you're ballin'?
In the ballroom, having a ball
Singing jingle bells and other bullshit
You're balding cuz you believed them
The super bowl is where your belief is
They deceive you with labels
Demon fables
Great spells under tables, better bail
Got your brain boxed in basic cable
We are more than able to read between their babble
That they love to scrabble. I gotta ask you
What do you grab the bull by?
Bull's eye, they tell you bold lies
So you bible.. in the belly of the beast
It's your leash, billy goat. bowling belligerent
Ideas to pin heads, culling their ignorance inside a bullpen
Balancing my belches inside a belltower
We talking Orion's BELT power..
Stumbling on hubble, bursting your stable bubble
With trouble scribbles
Squabbling wobbles of constant bologna from the constabul phonies
Bulgaras from Bolivia to Belgium
Lobbing lies in bulk
Got us binded, blinded by lightening bolts inside their light bulbs
Billionaires sell us fear and Belvidere
From biology to a balcony above the Baltic sea, the code's of this kabal
As the bowls get sparked
And kids collect their bulbasaurs
Massive boulders of debt building
Bills bills and more bills, they stay billing..
And who is gullible?.

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2tripple0 10-23-2016 01:33 PM

Gotta take thos for what it is... its like theres a party but theres like inner con ienent passages that could lead toward an exit.. yeah the kid needed a way out and saalled it metaphor... it was like eureka when dude figured volume out right.... but at the same time it was like a man who had to come up with something in the same moment in order to leave some feedback in this link......ehh thats all i want to say about his you coulda just taken it for what it was it wasnt perfect but life goes on u know keep dropping bro thanks for stopping by... damn i gotta stop acting like im in control of everything.. this was nice i just wanted to finish posting about it for now...

dead man 10-23-2016 03:33 PM

I miss you. This was different. Not like.. Rusty or bad. Just different.

Maybe older and colder.

Hope you submit more and inspire me and others to do the same.

Wise Wiggles 10-26-2016 09:02 AM

It was different! Yup, I was more so pissed when I jotted this, pissed at the fact our langauge was created by satanists. Religions, moneys, statutes.. All illusions of the controller class.. bill, bell, ball, bull are all derivitives of an ancient dark sun god called Ba'al. Much love everyone. Stay true to yourself. These people are crazy.

Witty 10-27-2016 06:52 PM

Was about to say I love this title. Will read the piece itself and drop some feed, I'm sure it's dope as always.

Split Eight 10-30-2016 04:02 AM

Sickness

Witty 10-30-2016 10:26 AM

Very good...very cynical, probably a more serious tone than usual, but we live in cynical times, we need to get serious quick fast...this piece perfectly reflected what is happening in the world, and shared views and worries a lot of people have. I guess it was social commentary? It was very well written, less playful than a lot of your pieces, very direct and to the point...rhymes were top notch as always.

Thanks for the read man.

Mr. J 11-08-2016 12:44 PM

It's your leash, billy goat. bowling belligerent
Ideas to pin heads, culling their ignorance inside a bullpen
Balancing my belches inside a belltower
We talking Orion's BELT power..

^^^
this felt like some classic Wise material right here...
very enjoyable read, I always enjoyed your twist on words
your style suits you so well that it would be hard to manipulate
its always refreshing to see you drop when you make it back around these parts
the OM needs more pieces like this due to the originality you bring.
I always wondered what it is that inspires you aside from your recreational use of stimulants and such.
this whole piece had some quotables but whats above was my favorite...keep it up Wiggles


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