"Letter To My Unborn Child"
 

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INB4 "HOW WOULD YOUR FIRST BORN EVEN BE ABLE
TO READ THIS?!"

ASSHOLES

top notch, very heartfelt!

"Show them you're motivated to face up to challenges
focusing solely on whatever makes you the happiest.
Use change as the catalyst to start up and you'll see
failure's embarrassing only if you don't try harder to succeed."

if y'all realised just how quickly this was wrote, you'd be even more impressed.

I'm gonna quote you on this for a status.

This is a master piece.

I haven't read this...but I too wrote a letter to my child about a week before he was born...I have it stored away for when he's older.

Will read this after work.

I too haven't read this yet... will peep when I get a chance...

A lot of cliches in writing, which isn't necessarily bad, you do it particularly decent, but I can't get past the tonal similarity in a lot of the things you write, be it mechanically, or solidarity in essence, it just seems very particular. Peculiar enough, it's done very crisp and wordy. Organized and shoveled. that's what you do great, I can say. Also the schematics in which you rhyme just ring an almost OCD type of advanced super advanced Dr. Seuss. It's almost too predictable. This is one not my qualms. Heartfelt, though. And for that, thanks

Nobody said it would easy, so don't make a habit of rushing,
some leave the road to success to pursue a path to destruction.


dope stuff here baron

You are the Tony Robbins of Topical Writing

Motivational. I would like it if you would drop another verse in the next few days to commemorate the second round of your tournament. Only right

Firstly, love the pic...you have a great knack of drawing the reader in...I admire that.You write shit that resonates with people, seem to have this gift in getting what you want across in what appears to be a very simple yet effective way, yet it's not simple in anyway but has a lasting effect, if that makes sense ? The emotion in this piece is dope...thought word usage was also a highlight, made for a near flawless flow...I've nothing negative to say which isn't like me lol, good shit Lars...very enjoyable.

Sorry can't quote my phone on some Ellen thing.

Stay upwards.