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Dope girl 08-08-2016 11:16 PM

My King part one
 
There he go
don't mind that guy
that's just my King
Since he hold it down
Sipping on pimp juice
He not going nowhere
because I'm his Queen
he rolling
keep that A game Hundred
Looking like LLCOOL J
He a knockout
Even when I'm making the doe
He's on my mind
He be by my side
My ryda till the end

YDK 08-09-2016 04:44 AM

I like how this was a free verse, it didn't need rhymes to be amazing. I like how you used doe as dough like money but it also works as if you're the one out hunting those deer, like you bringing home the bacon AND the venison.
Dope verse, clearly above most of the heads on here. I doubt many will be able to catch all the genius wordplays and second layers of this verse. I love it

Dope girl 08-09-2016 09:08 AM

Thanks love

Sir Oswald Gonesberg 08-09-2016 01:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silver (Post 596187)
He not going nowhere
Looking like LLCOOL J

https://i.makeagif.com/media/5-23-2015/xS0hZ0.gif


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