Netcees - John Hensley vs Jilti

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John Hensley vs Jilti - J Hens Wins

Summer Classic VII

Due Thursday August 11th
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line limit can increase if both agree

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@jilti @john hensley

i know this is kind of ridiculous, but if i could get an extension until a few hours past the deadline, that would be awesome.. stuck at work until about 2 am pacific.

Cool with me. Due tomorrow

Jilti verse

when i heard ur one of the best, believe i scoffed
they only call John Legend cuz all his keys sound soft
pop the shotty open, then dump ur body in the ocean
give u a Cap before entering the water.. olympic swim coaches
ur old skool like NES, & wack as graphics on the first
u been blowin' hard since trying to get nintendo cartridges to work
one right will end ur whole life, its the haunting truth
gonna see hands before lights go out.. thats the conjuring 2
ur a rapper claiming many hoods, but i laugh tho
cuz if Urinary Blockage just means this pussy cant flow
shoot ur kid on the way to school while he still walking
leave John Henson w/ Bucks across his chest like the center for Milwaukee

Hens verse

U ain't no G. I dunno what this punk is actin' for.
Dude says he's Blasting Downtown..but he's just bumpin' Macklemore.
As for me? You better believe the shotty rocks.
Bury ya, then leave the corpse covered in Lime like tequila body shots.
Fuckin homo. This fagot's known for hookin' in a skirt.
Dudes constantly shove their Fists into Ti.. like puttin' on a shirt.
U don't get pussy, let's face it dawg, ur gay.
watchin' the LFL was the First Down Bitch he's ever seen in Lingerie.
Think ur dope beatin washups? I KNOW ur lame & no factor.
Like playin' wit a Pre Existing Injury, U just overcame an old Fracture.
Predictions got you losin, that's why you fear pundits.
Ask the board who's winnin, ur Hearin Loss enough to need an ear trumpet.

pz12.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 597296)

JILTI VERSE

when i heard ur one of the best, believe i scoffed
they only call John Legend cuz all his keys sound soft
Weak flip to a played concept
pop the shotty open, then dump ur body in the ocean
give u a Cap before entering the water.. olympic swim coaches
This was good
ur old skool like NES, & wack as graphics on the first
u been blowin' hard since trying to get nintendo cartridges to work
Nope, played
one right will end ur whole life, its the haunting truth
gonna see hands before lights go out.. thats the conjuring 2
Nice, easily your best bar
ur a rapper claiming many hoods, but i laugh tho
cuz if Urinary Blockage just means this pussy cant flow
Forced wordplay, very unnatural phonically
shoot ur kid on the way to school while he still walking
leave John Henson w/ Bucks across his chest like the center for Milwaukee
Weak wp w/ clunky wording

versus

HENS VERSE

U ain't no G. I dunno what this punk is actin' for.
Dude says he's Blasting Downtown..but he's just bumpin' Macklemore.
Naw just a jab
As for me? You better believe the shotty rocks.
Bury ya, then leave the corpse covered in Lime like tequila body shots.
Decent
Fuckin homo. This fagot's known for hookin' in a skirt.
Dudes constantly shove their Fists into Ti.. like puttin' on a shirt.
Weak & played
U don't get pussy, let's face it dawg, ur gay.
watchin' the LFL was the First Down Bitch he's ever seen in Lingerie.
Nice..lol
Think ur dope beatin washups? I KNOW ur lame & no factor.
Like playin' wit a Pre Existing Injury, U just overcame an old Fracture.
This was hard, good personal flip
Predictions got you losin, that's why you fear pundits.
Ask the board who's winnin, ur Hearin Loss enough to need an ear trumpet.
Decent

Overall even tho I liked the 2 bars Jilti had more than Hensley's best bars, those were ONLY 2 quotables out of his entire verse, whereas John was consistent w/ really only one bar I disliked & the rest being ok punches, just no haymakers. JOHN HENSLEY gets my vote, Jilti didn't have enough in his arsenal.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 597296)

Jilti verse

when i heard ur one of the best, believe i scoffed
they only call John Legend cuz all his keys sound soft

light

pop the shotty open, then dump ur body in the ocean
give u a Cap before entering the water.. olympic swim coaches

I like this ok...wording needs work tho

ur old skool like NES, & wack as graphics on the first
u been blowin' hard since trying to get nintendo cartridges to work

u fucking kidding me right now? I should just vote for hens now. smh/ just so ur not confused cuz obv u weren't aware ...which is baffling to me but...this is fucking played/

one right will end ur whole life, its the haunting truth
gonna see hands before lights go out.. thats the conjuring 2

wack

ur a rapper claiming many hoods, but i laugh tho
cuz if Urinary Blockage just means this pussy cant flow

fire

shoot ur kid on the way to school while he still walking
leave John Henson w/ Bucks across his chest like the center for Milwaukee

eh better then some of ur other bullshit

Hens verse

U ain't no G. I dunno what this punk is actin' for.
Dude says he's Blasting Downtown..but he's just bumpin' Macklemore.

wack to me

As for me? You better believe the shotty rocks.
Bury ya, then leave the corpse covered in Lime like tequila body shots.

here we go.....heating up

Fuckin homo. This fagot's known for hookin' in a skirt.
Dudes constantly shove their Fists into Ti.. like puttin' on a shirt.

not a fan of half name flips

U don't get pussy, let's face it dawg, ur gay.
watchin' the LFL was the First Down Bitch he's ever seen in Lingerie.

ok ish

Think ur dope beatin washups? I KNOW ur lame & no factor.
Like playin' wit a Pre Existing Injury, U just overcame an old Fracture.

pretty simple here...an I don't think any1 really thinks it was cool he beat that wack ass frac that was here a couple months ago////I only put that in my mad for palyoffs cuz I didn't have anything else good to say about him lol

Predictions got you losin, that's why you fear pundits.
Ask the board who's winnin, ur Hearin Loss enough to need an ear trumpet.

this is cool

pz12.

this is honestly tough to me, hens had lime & hearing loss vs jilti swim coaches and urinary....I could maybe give him that closer too...that Nintendo shit was so fucking bad tho. im gonna lean hens but for real I almost voted jilti and could see him getting votes and or even winning. lackluster battle here/

v j hens

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 597296)

Jilti verse

when i heard ur one of the best, believe i scoffed
they only call John Legend cuz all his keys sound soft
[in 2016, if no one used a john legend line against this man, i'll eat my iphone. No.]
pop the shotty open, then dump ur body in the ocean
give u a Cap before entering the water.. olympic swim coaches
[ha. this was dope]
ur old skool like NES, & wack as graphics on the first
u been blowin' hard since trying to get nintendo cartridges to work
[nah this was trash]
one right will end ur whole life, its the haunting truth
gonna see hands before lights go out.. thats the conjuring 2
LOL I like this. I like throwing hands/fighting bars better than gun bars too.
ur a rapper claiming many hoods, but i laugh tho
cuz if Urinary Blockage just means this pussy cant flow
fire concept/wordplay but the wording could've been better
shoot ur kid on the way to school while he still walking
leave John Henson w/ Bucks across his chest like the center for Milwaukee
this was cool

Hens verse

U ain't no G. I dunno what this punk is actin' for.
Dude says he's Blasting Downtown..but he's just bumpin' Macklemore.
lol simple but not bad
As for me? You better believe the shotty rocks.
Bury ya, then leave the corpse covered in Lime like tequila body shots.
this was dope. solid bar
Fuckin homo. This fagot's known for hookin' in a skirt.
Dudes constantly shove their Fists into Ti.. like puttin' on a shirt.
this was trash
U don't get pussy, let's face it dawg, ur gay.
watchin' the LFL was the First Down Bitch he's ever seen in Lingerie.
this was cool
Think ur dope beatin washups? I KNOW ur lame & no factor.
Like playin' wit a Pre Existing Injury, U just overcame an old Fracture.
eh
Predictions got you losin, that's why you fear pundits.
Ask the board who's winnin, ur Hearin Loss enough to need an ear trumpet.
nice finish

pz12.

Going to say this was a TIE if anything. I feel like Jilti had better concepts but his flow/wording didn't come as smooth and transition into bars wasn't as fluid as J Hens...but hens didn't wow me either.

pick somebody or ill fuck ur life up/

hen i heard ur one of the best, believe i scoffed
they only call John Legend cuz all his keys sound soft
ok
pop the shotty open, then dump ur body in the ocean
give u a Cap before entering the water.. olympic swim coaches
i like this
ur old skool like NES, & wack as graphics on the first
u been blowin' hard since trying to get nintendo cartridges to work
kinda old concept.. not feeling this
one right will end ur whole life, its the haunting truth
gonna see hands before lights go out.. thats the conjuring 2
ok
ur a rapper claiming many hoods, but i laugh tho
cuz if Urinary Blockage just means this pussy cant flow
cool
shoot ur kid on the way to school while he still walking
leave John Henson w/ Bucks across his chest like the center for Milwaukee
decent closer

U ain't no G. I dunno what this punk is actin' for.
Dude says he's Blasting Downtown..but he's just bumpin' Macklemore.
haha cool,
As for me? You better believe the shotty rocks.
Bury ya, then leave the corpse covered in Lime like tequila body shots.
ight ight decent
Fuckin homo. This fagot's known for hookin' in a skirt.
Dudes constantly shove their Fists into Ti.. like puttin' on a shirt.
okay decent
U don't get pussy, let's face it dawg, ur gay.
watchin' the LFL was the First Down Bitch he's ever seen in Lingerie.
eh okay
Think ur dope beatin washups? I KNOW ur lame & no factor.
Like playin' wit a Pre Existing Injury, U just overcame an old Fracture.
ha, okay, I like this persona
Predictions got you losin, that's why you fear pundits.
Ask the board who's winnin, ur Hearin Loss enough to need an ear trumpet.
mh okay closer

damn very cLOSE, I got hens barely edging this with a little more consistency.