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Aero vs OG Smokinstein - OG wins

Summer Classic VII

Due Wednesday August 3rd
Extension available if your opponent allows it. 24hr ext ONLY.

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
NO recycling
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Aero @Og smokinstein

Verse sent to Strikta.

LOL Aero pls

do u have a verse or not shithead?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags (Post 595615)

LOL Aero pls

do u have a verse or not shithead?

I'll post it when I get to my laptop tonight. @Strikta you can post mine now.

@Aero dont let us black folk down. Do it for the people brother. Knowledge is born understanding, cipher god.

@Bags I'll be posting my verse tonight at 12 am central. Smh @Strikta

i give his girl a discount on sex if she picks me up in her car.

OG had the nerve to call her BEGGING to hang out on one occasion

She calls me the best deal in town, he blowing her cell pleading in earnest
On her phone like "bae you drive such a hard bargain!" & we laugh as my erect penis confirms it

Stop with your chatter, me & ya girl will always fuck tough talk's not gonna matter
He screamed "Over my dead body!" So I killed him & we had sex atop a cadaver

If I get in riffs my fist battle, then police put me in stiff shackles
If his hands land him in hot water he woke up peeing while his friends ***kle

Y'all think he got his name bangin w the foes or slangin on the stove?
No! after seeing his dick girls're like "ohhhh, geee... maybe you should go."

Quit faking your wealth, or saying with girls your making them melt
Your social life's like using archaic references in a story, nigga you're dating yourself

You get no thread views or thread ratings boy you on a slump
If you ever get a gold star I'll disrespect your mother like Donald Trump

Quote:

Originally Posted by Og smokinstein

You dnt like gunbars so what..
U want me to talk about fucking your bicth?
I mean it was more like a gangbang we ran an unstoppable train like an denzel flick.
Aero put his ear to the door,it sound like she bone thugs,i call that a crucial conflict.
But aero to pussy to stop it,he just stand there looking stupid.
I hope you play tough guy, at least aero will have heart at the end like cupid.
Im a loyal nigga, a space shuttle re-entering the atmosphere, that down to earth.
But you a snake nigga lacking any sense of worth.
When cops show up aero point to the guy next to him- im with stupid shirt.
Im kidnapping relatives,aero'll be searching for his fam like joe dirt.
You dont wanna go to war,with the reapper.
Cross me in the field,and meet a monster like jeepers creepers.
Cop killers loaded in the mac,i feel like the No/dallas shooter when i grip the heaters.
Shots through you vest,shit'll get ugly under armor like setph sneakers.
You gotta be the lamest nigga i ever battled,bitchn bout gunsbars cause your bars dont connect.
Ill be damn if this square stop my sig from smoking,i dont believe in nicoret.

You dont wanna go to war,with the reapper.
Cross me in the field,and meet a monster like jeepers creepers.
Cop killers loaded in the mac,i feel like the No/dallas shooter when i grip the heaters.
Shots through you vest,shit'll get ugly under armor like setph sneakers.

Vs

f I get in riffs my fist battle, then police put me in stiff shackles
If his hands land him in hot water he woke up peeing while his friends ***kle
Quit faking your wealth, or saying with girls your making them melt
Your social life's like using archaic references in a story, nigga you're dating yourself

This was like the sharknado of text battles. So bad its almost good. Yall really set the bar here and by that i mean lowered it alot. Og u shoulda smoked aero's verse here but tbh idk wtf u smokin cuz those first like 11 lines were awful bro i cant even lie. The ones i quoted were funny tho and if u had more of that u coulda swept him. Aero u play too much. Theres nothing for me to critique bc youve been doin text for bout a decade & r just trolling at this point. Like daylyt but minus the writing ability.

theres no winners here, we all lose for being part of this.

Vote- og for trying

bruh this was dreadful

og took this with better structure and more quotables.

aero had the dating yourself line
og had joe dirt and sneaker line

vote og