KEPT RAPPIN DESPITE MY FATHERS SHPIEL
 

I DONT LIKE THIS. LMAO

had caps lock on but it fits. its just not for me, its solid for what it is, you did your thing for sure tho flow was on point, bars solid. you did nothing wrong outside of deciding to use this weird thing that goes against all my personal preferences but every humans different. but yea the beats chaotic but you find the pocket throughout.

but word i'm messing with that sample you sent me. i tried to get all crazy intricate but i'm about to just keep it simple and make some banging dopeness. just using there first 8 bars for the intro/hook and keeping it simple with the intro chops. i'm just gonna spice it up with drums and probably never post it since its from an active touring group of musicians lol. i'll send it to you though

okay but finish the crazy intricate part too because i want to hear what you trying to be intricate sounds like before you throw it away

Spiel.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/ua...6/allalone.mp3

thats my quick attempt at it keeping it simple. probably too simple

and me being intricate was like just trying to chop small from all over thinking it could work, when chopping it i'm thinking yea this piece followed by this piece into this piece back to the big change and loop over, but when i put it together like that it was nonsense that didnt flow right lol so i had to abandon and rechop just to satiate the need to make SOMETHING.

i'm going to mess with this more, i didnt want to mess with the intro cuz its so plain, i like the open breakdowns later in the song, its just about finding chops for the main parts of the verse, like the breakdown chops are 1 bar a piece, and they do em back to back, the fallling apartttt, cuz i'm falling aparrttt parts. towards the end they just do instrumentation without words. i was going to use those pieces, but finding the main verse parts that would lead into that, and flow back off it i didnt get em my first go round

also the vocals i took for that beat i made there, the beginnings of each 4 bars had the OHHHHHH with the whole band, but i swapped it with the stabs in the beginning, so i knew i could drop back into those stabs for the verse

if any of that makes sense. but word that samples dope. i'm gonna mess with it again for sure i'm not happy with that simple shit. i'm gonna check there other stuff too this weekend probably

cool man, sounds good so far, simple but i'll start writing, excited to hear what it can turn into

word i just listened to it again with fresh ears and the snare is hideous. i'll change that for sure. but word i'll let you know what comes of it.

Can't imagine I would enjoy this, ever. So I didn't listen.

Hope you liked it, though, boof.

@PancakeBrah you ever listen to Suuns?

Nobody trynna listen to this vegana monologues bullshit fuck face fagot

Idve beat u w a pipe if I were ur dad

Wow.... This beat took me completely by surprise. I'm actually down with some rock shit, and you killed this. I don't think I care for anything else than the verses, but this some seriously different shit.

I couldn't even pay attention to half your lyrics this beat was so nutty. lol

Shit was dope tho, boof.

Different shit.

Well I've been waiting to post these in my own thread but since I can't make threads... Boof and uh oh I wants feeds...

https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/falling
https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/yes-i-love-you
https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/all-that-matters

it must be tough having so many clever thoughts but no flow to contain them in

OMG LAWD TAKE ME NOW

VEGAN SLAUGHTER!!!!!!!!


idk I will recover from this


If not I want pancake to have my Nolan Ryan rookie card.








And for finny to drop dead while watching 8 mile and then his gf man to jerk off onto his cold dead corpse and then spit on his child.

just check the track out fagot i know you'll like it

Lol imagine me clicking on one kf ur tracks


Haha not even once

I dig it. Ur vicious with the mechanics bruh

thx doggy, wheres your newest track

ok ok....

first up this Beat didn't do nothin' for me....took away from the track in my opinion...You got a nice flow tho' delivery stayed consistent
first verse felt like u juz warmin' up...or maybe it's me not used to this beat yet

Hook eh....again wit' the beat

2nd verse- Ok now you pickin' up steam... diggin' the rhyme scheme an energy, Background vocals poppin things out nice... yea this 10 times better then first verse...u killed that one

break---

3rd verse... 3 sheets to the wind line haha
short...felt like this shoulda been longer...I'd like to hear you ova somethin better this whole beat kinda bugged me....feel me? But as a MC you did your thing... nice polished style

Good Listen, glad to see someone on here rockin' Mics right




check out my latest....

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=124103