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Ghost1 06-06-2016 08:32 AM

(5)Allen Knight vs (12)Destroyer - DESTROYER WINS
 
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Destroyer 06-06-2016 09:54 AM

pics?

Allen Knight 06-06-2016 06:52 PM

goin 14.

Destroyer 06-06-2016 08:08 PM

on my pic?

Destroyer 06-07-2016 11:34 PM

sent 14 to bags

Ghost1 06-09-2016 06:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer
des ain't harmless, I've tossed lots of bodies into tar pits
but when ur moms dropped u off at work, was the last time u hid a carcass
worried this archive-skimming bitch makes the finals? there's no reason
just check those NHL stats on ESPN homie... sharks don't do well in post season
I'm past hate, fuck ur sports refs, ur leaving in a cast, mate
or u gonna Broussard when I hit u in the knee if it's not a fast break
if he make it past des u know there's a glitch in the matrix
cuz alkaline up all the best bars he's ever wrote and the shit still would be basic
we all laugh at u, cuz face the facts, ur a lame faggot, dude
the only place AK is on top is when we talking about U.S. state latitude
I'll drop him where he stands, cuz des stays nice w/these hands
& my guns so nuts they make u wet urself... I call them my pecans
des sees through him... A-lister? bro, ur a B student
when nitrites & nitrates so low it's clear those verses got no meat to em


Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight
ok Tim Grady aka EmpathE LOL,

i'll...

get EmpathE's moms hooked on drugs, hes a loser fag
after Emma Stone off crack, she calls me back wantin more Superbad
i'll take ur head off w/ the blade, fag i grip those knifes
u'll be flatlined in the ICU w/ the top of ya wig missing thats Kimbo Slice
got ya knees in my sniper scope, shit alter's lives loser
pop the metal on both sides of ya legs u'll be walkin like Walter White Jr
ur akward boxy shaped heads gettin shot or shanked at
i'll cop a case over ur squared circle like a fuckin Money in the bank match
demolishin ur girls vag 24/7, she luvs wen i smack her ass
i beat the shit Otterbox w/ no protection till the pussys cracked in half
talkin shit'll get ur slut kidnapped n dumped in a town area
if u cross the line ill hit my boys up & tell'em if she makes a Sound Barrier
doin drive-bys on ppl in trucks & suv's, goin ham w/ a mac
u'd neva spray Ativan, u jus pop those for ur bitchass panic attacks


die slow.


Kenny the OG 06-10-2016 07:44 PM

des ain't harmless, I've tossed lots of bodies into tar pits
but when ur moms dropped u off at work, was the last time u hid a carcass
decent
worried this archive-skimming bitch makes the finals? there's no reason
just check those NHL stats on ESPN homie... sharks don't do well in post season
mean. I fuck wit this
I'm past hate, fuck ur sports refs, ur leaving in a cast, mate
or u gonna Broussard when I hit u in the knee if it's not a fast break
dope
if he make it past des u know there's a glitch in the matrix
cuz alkaline up all the best bars he's ever wrote and the shit still would be basic
ok
we all laugh at u, cuz face the facts, ur a lame faggot, dude
the only place AK is on top is when we talking about U.S. state latitude
whatever
I'll drop him where he stands, cuz des stays nice w/these hands
& my guns so nuts they make u wet urself... I call them my pecans
lol ok
des sees through him... A-lister? bro, ur a B student
when nitrites & nitrates so low it's clear those verses got no meat to em
nah



get EmpathE's moms hooked on drugs, hes a loser fag
after Emma Stone off crack, she calls me back wantin more Superbad
not feelin this wp
i'll take ur head off w/ the blade, fag i grip those knifes
u'll be flatlined in the ICU w/ the top of ya wig missing thats Kimbo Slice
ehh
got ya knees in my sniper scope, shit alter's lives loser
pop the metal on both sides of ya legs u'll be walkin like Walter White Jr
lol ok
ur akward boxy shaped heads gettin shot or shanked at
i'll cop a case over ur squared circle like a fuckin Money in the bank match
fiiire
demolishin ur girls vag 24/7, she luvs wen i smack her ass
i beat the shit Otterbox w/ no protection till the pussys cracked in half
decent
talkin shit'll get ur slut kidnapped n dumped in a town area
if u cross the line ill hit my boys up & tell'em if she makes a Sound Barrier
nah this wp feels stale. The flip on it didnt make it fresher imo
doin drive-bys on ppl in trucks & suv's, goin ham w/ a mac
u'd neva spray Ativan, u jus pop those for ur bitchass panic attacks
ok


Good battle. This was was close as hell no lie. Read at least 4x and to be honest i felt more and more that not allen knight did enough to get the win. Some of Allens wp choices just werent hittin for me even tho the concepts themselves were ok overall. I think his best line was the money in the bank match bar, other than that he was consistent although average. No hate i just expected a harder hitting verse from ak. The other guy had the shark in postseason bar and broussard bar which were both worded clean, creative and landed hard. Overall he was more consistent with less misses. Even though i feel rapper #1 got this for sure, its definitely a debatable battle. Allen knight did his thing but i just enjoyed the other verse alittle more. I really wish allen had won here but he may not have. Hopefully he still does tho.

Vt- allen knights opponent

Schadenfreude 06-10-2016 10:54 PM

I hate line-by-lines, but I have to, because this battle's that close...

des ain't harmless, I've tossed lots of bodies into tar pits
but when ur moms dropped u off at work, was the last time u hid a carcass
car kiss/carcass, kind of corny, but it hit
worried this archive-skimming bitch makes the finals? there's no reason
just check those NHL stats on ESPN homie... sharks don't do well in post season
Nice
I'm past hate, fuck ur sports refs, ur leaving in a cast, mate
or u gonna Broussard when I hit u in the knee if it's not a fast break
Good wp, solid
if he make it past des u know there's a glitch in the matrix
cuz alkaline up all the best bars he's ever wrote and the shit still would be basic
Nahh didn't like this
we all laugh at u, cuz face the facts, ur a lame faggot, dude
the only place AK is on top is when we talking about U.S. state latitude
Decent, not that hard hitting tho
I'll drop him where he stands, cuz des stays nice w/these hands
& my guns so nuts they make u wet urself... I call them my pecans
Lol..usually I'd say corny, but I liked this a lot
des sees through him... A-lister? bro, ur a B student
when nitrites & nitrates so low it's clear those verses got no meat to em
Cool wp, but nothing crazy

versus

get EmpathE's moms hooked on drugs, hes a loser fag
after Emma Stone off crack, she calls me back wantin more Superbad
Decent, nothing crazy
i'll take ur head off w/ the blade, fag i grip those knifes
u'll be flatlined in the ICU w/ the top of ya wig missing thats Kimbo Slice
OK
got ya knees in my sniper scope, shit alter's lives loser
pop the metal on both sides of ya legs u'll be walkin like Walter White Jr
NICE
ur akward boxy shaped heads gettin shot or shanked at
i'll cop a case over ur squared circle like a fuckin Money in the bank match
Nahh, familiar concept
demolishin ur girls vag 24/7, she luvs wen i smack her ass
i beat the shit Otterbox w/ no protection till the pussys cracked in half
Ehh, OK
talkin shit'll get ur slut kidnapped n dumped in a town area
if u cross the line ill hit my boys up & tell'em if she makes a Sound Barrier
Could've flipped this much harder
doin drive-bys on ppl in trucks & suv's, goin ham w/ a mac
u'd neva spray Ativan, u jus pop those for ur bitchass panic attacks
OK

Overall AK was more creative, but Des was more impactful, AK most likely took the geezer light, but Des went hard a lil bit, VOTE DESTROYER.

~RustyGunZ~ 06-12-2016 10:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer
des ain't harmless, I've tossed lots of bodies into tar pits
but when ur moms dropped u off at work, was the last time u hid a carcass

Lol cool

worried this archive-skimming bitch makes the finals? there's no reason
just check those NHL stats on ESPN homie... sharks don't do well in post season

Cool

I'm past hate, fuck ur sports refs, ur leaving in a cast, mate
or u gonna Broussard when I hit u in the knee if it's not a fast break

Dope

if he make it past des u know there's a glitch in the matrix
cuz alkaline up all the best bars he's ever wrote and the shit still would be basic

Okay

we all laugh at u, cuz face the facts, ur a lame faggot, dude
the only place AK is on top is when we talking about U.S. state latitude

Eh wording was weird

I'll drop him where he stands, cuz des stays nice w/these hands
& my guns so nuts they make u wet urself... I call them my pecans

Lmao

des sees through him... A-lister? bro, ur a B student
when nitrites & nitrates so low it's clear those verses got no meat to em

Cool

Good verse

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight
ok Tim Grady aka EmpathE LOL,

i'll...

get EmpathE's moms hooked on drugs, hes a loser fag
after Emma Stone off crack, she calls me back wantin more Superbad

Didn't work for me. Needed the d at the end.

i'll take ur head off w/ the blade, fag i grip those knifes
u'll be flatlined in the ICU w/ the top of ya wig missing thats Kimbo Slice

Okay

got ya knees in my sniper scope, shit alter's lives loser
pop the metal on both sides of ya legs u'll be walkin like Walter White Jr

Lmaao lotb

ur akward boxy shaped heads gettin shot or shanked at
i'll cop a case over ur squared circle like a fuckin Money in the bank match

Eh

demolishin ur girls vag 24/7, she luvs wen i smack her ass
i beat the shit Otterbox w/ no protection till the pussys cracked in half

Forced. Outer and otter don't sound the same.

talkin shit'll get ur slut kidnapped n dumped in a town area
if u cross the line ill hit my boys up & tell'em if she makes a Sound Barrier

Really dope concept but I'm not seeing the connection?
Just because crossing a line?

doin drive-bys on ppl in trucks & suv's, goin ham w/ a mac
u'd neva spray Ativan, u jus pop those for ur bitchass panic attacks

Nice

die slow.

Solid verse but had some lows

Close one and a good read. Feel like Allen would've took it if he worked on his wording which is usually on point and didn't do that Kimbo line for the sake of doing a Kimbo line

Destro

veritas 06-12-2016 11:13 AM

Mvgt allen.

BROKE LESNAR 06-14-2016 10:55 PM

des ain't harmless, I've tossed lots of bodies into tar pits
but when ur moms dropped u off at work, was the last time u hid a carcass

☆☆


worried this archive-skimming bitch makes the finals? there's no reason
just check those NHL stats on ESPN homie... sharks don't do well in post season

☆☆☆☆☆

I'm past hate, fuck ur sports refs, ur leaving in a cast, mate
or u gonna Broussard when I hit u in the knee if it's not a fast break

☆☆

if he make it past des u know there's a glitch in the matrix
cuz alkaline up all the best bars he's ever wrote and the shit still would be basic

☆☆☆

we all laugh at u, cuz face the facts, ur a lame faggot, dude
the only place AK is on top is when we talking about U.S. state latitude

☆☆☆☆☆

I'll drop him where he stands, cuz des stays nice w/these hands
& my guns so nuts they make u wet urself... I call them my pecans

☆☆

des sees through him... A-lister? bro, ur a B student
when nitrites & nitrates so low it's clear those verses got no meat to em




get EmpathE's moms hooked on drugs, hes a loser fag
after Emma Stone off crack, she calls me back wantin more Superbad



i'll take ur head off w/ the blade, fag i grip those knifes
u'll be flatlined in the ICU w/ the top of ya wig missing thats Kimbo Slice

☆☆☆☆☆

got ya knees in my sniper scope, shit alter's lives loser
pop the metal on both sides of ya legs u'll be walkin like Walter White Jr

☆☆

ur akward boxy shaped heads gettin shot or shanked at
i'll cop a case over ur squared circle like a fuckin Money in the bank match

☆☆☆☆☆

demolishin ur girls vag 24/7, she luvs wen i smack her ass
i beat the shit Otterbox w/ no protection till the pussys cracked in half



talkin shit'll get ur slut kidnapped n dumped in a town area
if u cross the line ill hit my boys up & tell'em if she makes a Sound Barrier

☆☆☆☆☆

doin drive-bys on ppl in trucks & suv's, goin ham w/ a mac
u'd neva spray Ativan, u jus pop those for ur bitchass panic attacks

☆☆☆☆☆

I wasn't a huge fan of much of the wordplays as I understood them but relying on the voter to provide the emphasis for them didn't seem right to me. Des had some cool personals and clever bars but Allen just had a lot more creativity.

v-Allen Knight


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