Netcees - Lotto Smirk vs Habitat

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Lotto Smirk vs Habitat - Habitat wins

NBL Season 9

Due Tuesday May 31st
Extension available.

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
time limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
NO recycling
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Lotto Smirk@Habitat

OH we get to battle where good people can vote.

You're dead.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 576164)

be on the floor gettin kicked if u try n mess wi the champs camp
have tat on his lower back in pain, call that applying a tramp stamp
if we bearin arms I'll kill this fag he ain't hurting me
caps'll wash thru his garms w/ intention of removing this stain permenantly
inferred scope to kill this joke, blast leave more than a bruise
no medical procedure but the laser'll have this tat marked up n removed
everything stretched or old, don't rush what u jot
cus the 10 second rule's just on food but u clearly apply it to everything that u drop

Key'd

Key'd? Really?

u dropped ur verse an hour after me u retarded fuck
that's a crazyyy bitch move, next he'll be keyin cars n such
smirk tough? u don't have the drive, watch me smack this guy
I remain calm.. n' deer in the headlight look's on his face when I jack his ride
ur'e a fucking pussy, so steppin to me would be very unwise
not that we believe you woodlot... it's well known you'd get cut down to size
bah don't have time to finish but I got 6 to go
plus it don't look like this faggot gonna show
your mom got down syndrome eyes
and a chicken wing stuck to her thighs

I can key ten in or we can ext and you can post a real verse?

so outdated,just wack & washed up that's a fact
cus u stopped being fresh wayyyy before u changed ya name to habitat
our battle had wack votes, but you bitching cus u lost son
n if we removed them it would also include your 2 pity votes from silver n Boston
this herb gay n w/ that corny wordplay chances are slim
cus that's just how he front lines and ironically the only place that shit'll get him a win

Meh I'll match your 6 to make it fair if we ext I'll post a proper verse

I can post a proper verse up tonight fresh?

I posted this so I didn't no show and I don't have time also.

Lol I'm opening this for votes smh

Hab

Wood lot was cool

Lotto:

I felt he was more consistent here came with a personal approach.

V/Lotto

Hab had the opener and the woodlot bar which were both good imo. Lotto had the opener.

This battle was easy to vote on. I appreciate you guys.

Vote habitat

u dropped ur verse an hour after me u retarded fuck
that's a crazyyy bitch move, next he'll be keyin cars n such

meh woodlot was a decent idea but didnt really hit with any sting and im not even 100% sure what you described is called a woodlot tbh LOL

vs

so outdated,just wack & washed up that's a fact
cus u stopped being fresh wayyyy before u changed ya name to habitat
our battle had wack votes, but you bitching cus u lost son
n if we removed them it would also include your 2 pity votes from silver n Boston

i almost didnt quote the second punch, but i enjoyed it slightly more than Hab's "woodlot" one

ive got Lotto edging this

Quote:

Originally Posted by Habitat (Post 588078)

Key'd? Really?

u dropped ur verse an hour after me u retarded fuck
that's a crazyyy bitch move, next he'll be keyin cars n such

Like this

smirk tough? u don't have the drive, watch me smack this guy
I remain calm.. n' deer in the headlight look's on his face when I jack his ride

This was a hard one to pull off....ur wordplay works for me but ur wording of the concept and delivery was muddled. Too much going on.

ur'e a fucking pussy, so steppin to me would be very unwise
not that we believe you woodlot... it's well known you'd get cut down to size

Ok

bah don't have time to finish but I got 6 to go
plus it don't look like this faggot gonna show
your mom got down syndrome eyes
and a chicken wing stuck to her thighs

Lol

So outdated,just wack & washed up that's a fact
cus u stopped being fresh wayyyy before u changed ya name to habitat

Wooo ok ok

our battle had wack votes, but you bitching cus u lost son
n if we removed them it would also include your 2 pity votes from silver n Boston

Nothing here

this herb gay n w/ that corny wordplay chances are slim
cus that's just how he front lines and ironically the only place that shit'll get him a win

This is played to oblivion. An that's just from tiny visits I've had to rb.

Meh I'll match your 6 to make it fair if we ext I'll post a proper verse

I got Hab here with fresher ideas. Just liked his verse more. I mean this was a shit show but Habs improving an lotto had sum old stuff.....an his general ongoing laziness didn't help him.

V hab

smirk tough? u don't have the drive, watch me smack this guy
I remain calm.. n' deer in the headlight look's on his face when I jack his ride

vs

so outdated,just wack & washed up that's a fact
cus u stopped being fresh wayyyy before u changed ya name to habitat

Disappointing battle. Wish you guys actually wrote a full verse. Oh well. Either way, I got one quote each side. I have Habitat taking this though because I felt the complexity and creativity of the line outweighed the more direct approach that Lotto took.

It was close. However, I got Hab slightly edging this. As I said would have liked to read a full verse from both.

V/hab

Basing this off the 6 lines they posted I got hab. All 3 of his bars were decent whereas Lottos closer was a miss and his second bar wasn't much better. Opener was nice but that's it. Have gets on consistency

V. Hab