"Lay You Down" shouts to Netcees for the inspiration.
 

Y'all gave me what I needed to make a classic. LOL

Made the beat in 20 minutes, wrote it in less than an hour, recorded and mixed in less than an hour. What you get? HOT ASS MOTHER FUCKIN SHIT!

"Lay You Down"
https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/lay-you-down

This was cool. But tbh all i focused on was your picture
And mouth in that cock ready position. I was digging the vibe
And i was bumping my head and you had a cool cadence going


But your face ruined it.



Cool rap tho

lol

That picture is supposed to be a joke. I just took it for my Google+ profile.

It cracks me up tho so I ain't changing it.

Props for checkin me out.

22 people checking the thread and only one person says something. Lol

Yall can't say shit unless it's negative.

thats netcees bro lol. i fuck with this beat tho

THEY SAY MY RHYMES ARE TOO SIMPLE
I DON'T EVEN GOTTA RHYME ITS THAT SIMPLE

BARS

lol for real though i dug this. one of your better beats, its simple but effective. drums and bass kept me interested.

i just don't like the "tough guy" rap for lack of a better word coming from you honestly. thats what i was trying to convey in my last critiques. that track you made on my beats years ago i thought was where you should be going from a writing standpoint. more reflective, personal, don't get me wrong you were speaking about yourself on this but with a hook like lay you down its like aight. but the beat calls for it i get it, its just not YOU at least how i perceive you. but word man keep banging out

That's why i wrote the whole second verse. Lol

My shits completely different than i used to be.

LOOOOOOOOOOOL

That's all you got? Really?

I'm good with that.

I listened to the song.

Stfu uh oh u fagot

If this dirtbag was black u'd give him a pass to spout off about gun play in a heart beat whether he was Malcom x or Bryant gumbel

U disgrace ur skin

I don't really care. I know that's what hurts you most of all.

Did you ever get promoted to manager at Wendy's or are you still a fry cook? Serious question.

Saw ur face and the laughter it gave me will last the day

Thank u sir

Thats like saying if he was a muslim id give him a pass to spout off on terrorism. It is simply accurate and i dont see your point.

But nah theres no point critiquing my critiques because im actually genuine and trying to help. If we had any black forum members spitting gun bars id tell them the same shit if it applied

The point is to be yourself. Write about your actual life

what are you trying to help him with

it;s over

he's 30, making minimum wage, supporting a kid he once tried to kidnap while his baby's mom fucks around with her first baby's daddy on his child support dime

this dude ASPIRES to be pjk

THINK ABOUT THAT

don't continue to pursue your "rap" career.

Jesus christ. Lol.

Can't kidnap your own kid when you're on the birth certificate and the mother doesn't have a custody agreement from the court. If he's on my property the cops couldn't even tell me to hand him back, legally. And remember, she was the one who wanted to scratch me up and shit. If i ever do have enough money to take her to court then I'll win almost exclusively because of this. She just better pray i DON'T ever get my shit together.

Also, i never said one thing about a gun. Lay you down in the streets isnt mutually exclusive to guns. In fact, i was specifically talking about scrapping.

I haven't been in a fight since 7th grade. But i don't think i could stomach losing one at this age. I might just snap and kill someone. Don't fuck with someone who's been fucked with their whole life..

You might not like what i turn into.

it's been 5 years since that happened

nobody is worried about you getting your shit together

rofls at the rest of your post.

classic finny.

why do skinny white dudes always go to that trope? I DON'T FIGHT BUT SRS I'M A MONSTER.

shut up, nerd. pick up my dry cleaning, nerd.

Vintage dirt

You'd love most of upstate NY finny

thought this sucked.

but cool to see you're still doing music.