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~RustyGunZ~ 05-18-2016 12:28 AM

Habitat vs. Chyeahhh!!! - Chyeahhh!!! wins
 
You know the rules by now.

Due Saturday CALIFORNIA TIME MIDNIGHT.

Habitat 05-18-2016 09:41 AM

check
@Chyeahhh!!!

^^need to get to ur profile so I can dig up some dirt

Habitat 05-18-2016 12:57 PM

I'ma murder u faggot

then leave u in a 1000 pieces, this gon' be sick
point the burner at ya head, embrace it... eternity's torture and this ain't a rob zombie flick
worthless scrub doesn't garner respect, so shit bout to get raw
one bullet to ya dome has all of NC's cheering- that's a round of applause
da gat devoted, when caps get loaded... I'm done w/ this faggot
empty the Magnet removes tha charge from his soul- body'll attract nothing but maggots
chyea spit heat? he blowin SMOKE if he thinks he's good
If I'm blowin smoke, it's after unloadin rounds into this punk like clint eastwood
metal piece gleamin, tunnel vision get you locked in my sights
Watch it rise and shine... u know ur dead at the first hint of light

Chyeahhh!!! 05-18-2016 05:50 PM

U the tourny’s punching bag, couldn’t wait to get a turn
These hands will show yah neck romance, then have their way with your urn
We can go “tit for Tat” but keep coo brah
This aint a fight
This a petition for your flat chested brute broad to go and get a boob job
got this on lock ya’ll, yah girl sucks my hot dog and gets lock jaw
Swallows them baby Dwayne johnsons’, that’s called getting my Rocks off
have your boo missin, seen her N’ spit my rap to her quicker than Fu Snickens
Muffled her face, had your dime under the pillow, but u aint have a tooth missin
Serve Hab quicker than soup kitchens, come and get a taste bum!
then blow a hole through Habitats ribs just to see where his abs originate from

Kenny the OG 05-19-2016 07:37 PM

then leave u in a 1000 pieces, this gon' be sick
point the burner at ya head, embrace it... eternity's torture and this ain't a rob zombie flick
not feelin this
worthless scrub doesn't garner respect, so shit bout to get raw
one bullet to ya dome has all of NC's cheering- that's a round of applause
Nooo
da gat devoted, when caps get loaded... I'm done w/ this faggot
empty the Magnet removes tha charge from his soul- body'll attract nothing but maggots
As a stand alone bar this shit was fire to me tbh. The wording & rhyme scheme was dope. As a text battle bar it didn't hit hard tho
chyea spit heat? he blowin SMOKE if he thinks he's good
If I'm blowin smoke, it's after unloadin rounds into this punk like clint eastwood
I appreciate the visual and it reads smooth enough. But like the last bar I think this is a bar better fit for an actual verse rather than a text battle imo.
metal piece gleamin, tunnel vision get you locked in my sights
Watch it rise and shine... u know ur dead at the first hint of light
I like the rise & shine angle but I wish u hadve went a different direction with it. Could've hit alot harder bro



U the tourny’s punching bag, couldn’t wait to get a turn
These hands will show yah neck romance, then have their way with your urn
Not sure what to make of this
We can go “tit for Tat” but keep coo brah
This aint a fight
This a petition for your flat chested brute broad to go and get a boob job
I like the concept but the wording fucked it all up
got this on lock ya’ll, yah girl sucks my hot dog and gets lock jaw
Swallows them baby Dwayne johnsons’, that’s called getting my Rocks off
Booooo this man. I'm mad cuz the setup looked like it was headed for somethin mean. The punch was corny bruh. Disappoint
have your boo missin, seen her N’ spit my rap to her quicker than Fu Snickens
Muffled her face, had your dime under the pillow, but u aint have a tooth missin
THIS the shit I been waiting on. Lotb
Serve Hab quicker than soup kitchens, come and get a taste bum!
then blow a hole through Habitats ribs just to see where his abs originate from
Not feelin this

This battle was weird as hell to me to keep it g. Didn't like much from either, alot of wild misses. Habitat just needs to make his shit land harder. A few good concepts but not executed right. Chyeah was wild inconsistent as usual. I swear he has the potential to be a beast in this shit but his style is so unorthodox and contrary to what's typically viewed as a solid text verse that when he misses he misses big. Then he has his "dime under the pillow" moments. Fire. This battle comes down to preference really since they're both unique styles

Definitely a debatable but I got chyeah off the strength of having the lotb

MFtastick 05-22-2016 07:56 PM

Gotta agree with the homie @Kenny the OG. read a bit wierd. were alot of misses. vote goes to Chyeah.

Ghost1 05-23-2016 08:22 AM

Bump

Og smokinstein 05-23-2016 12:03 PM

I vote chyeah... I thought his verse was lil better.
Hab was ok but had a lot of misses..

Vote cheyeah

Ghost1 05-23-2016 02:59 PM

I'ma murder u faggot

Ok let's see

then leave u in a 1000 pieces, this gon' be sick
point the burner at ya head, embrace it... eternity's torture and this ain't a rob zombie flick

Light

worthless scrub doesn't garner respect, so shit bout to get raw
one bullet to ya dome has all of NC's cheering- that's a round of applause

Played...wording was cool

da gat devoted, when caps get loaded... I'm done w/ this faggot
empty the Magnet removes tha charge from his soul- body'll attract nothing but maggots

This was dope to me

chyea spit heat? he blowin SMOKE if he thinks he's good
If I'm blowin smoke, it's after unloadin rounds into this punk like clint eastwood

Lol. Not a fan of using the concept 2x to explain it like u did in the setup an punch. The flip itself wasn't anything special tho wording aside.

metal piece gleamin, tunnel vision get you locked in my sights
Watch it rise and shine... u know ur dead at the first hint of light

Eh ok light



U the tourny’s punching bag, couldn’t wait to get a turn
These hands will show yah neck romance, then have their way with your urn

Lol this was weord but I kindve fucked w it

We can go “tit for Tat” but keep coo brah
This aint a fight
This a petition for your flat chested brute broad to go and get a boob job

U mean to tell me u just be coming up w multiple flat chested concepts no matter who the opposition is tho? Lol Watre u 12? Lol nah I'm fuckin w u....tit for tat is played tho.


got this on lock ya’ll, yah girl sucks my hot dog and gets lock jaw
Swallows them baby Dwayne johnsons’, that’s called getting my Rocks off

Lol this is eh. Okish.

have your boo missin, seen her N’ spit my rap to her quicker than Fu Snickens
Muffled her face, had your dime under the pillow, but u aint have a tooth missin

Fuck w this

Serve Hab quicker than soup kitchens, come and get a taste bum!
then blow a hole through Habitats ribs just to see where his abs originate from

Concept is there....idve took a more subtle approach myself tho.



Hab was better then last week. Concepts r getting better....wording was clean this week. Execution is still lacking tho. Need to get more harsh and fresher. Chyin had sum misses too but his standouts were better then the majority of habs....minus that magnet bar.....that shit was good....even almost out of place in that verse. But yea chyeahh landed more often and mostly harder.

V chyin

Schadenfreude 05-23-2016 07:34 PM

CHYEAHHH slid pass w/ a win. Hab just didn't have anything that did significant damage, just light jabs. C had some clever punches here & there, especially that tooth fairy flip. So decent battle, Hab keep writing & Chy take your writing more serious.

Saint 05-23-2016 07:41 PM

I have chyeah here that dime under pillow was cool..
Hab had some cool ideas but executed them poorly..
rob zombie could've been cleaner as the magnet line
round of applause.. too obvious

chyeah maybe had another ok attempt, rocks off wasnt good but was lol

vote chyeahh

Orc 05-24-2016 10:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Habitat (Post 586115)
I'ma murder u faggot

then leave u in a 1000 pieces, this gon' be sick
point the burner at ya head, embrace it... eternity's torture and this ain't a rob zombie flick
Pretty slick to me . Good wording
worthless scrub doesn't garner respect, so shit bout to get raw
one bullet to ya dome has all of NC's cheering- that's a round of applause
Nah played here bro . Feeling the orc wording tho
da gat devoted, when caps get loaded... I'm done w/ this faggot
empty the Magnet removes tha charge from his soul- body'll attract nothing but maggots
Miss
chyea spit heat? he blowin SMOKE if he thinks he's good
If I'm blowin smoke, it's after unloadin rounds into this punk like clint eastwood
A Lil vague but okay it's okay
metal piece gleamin, tunnel vision get you locked in my sights
Watch it rise and shine... u know ur dead at the first hint of light
Okay here too

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!! (Post 586182)
U the tourny’s punching bag, couldn’t wait to get a turn
These hands will show yah neck romance, then have their way with your urn
I'm lost . Pls send help
We can go “tit for Tat” but keep coo brah
This aint a fight
This a petition for your flat chested brute broad to go and get a boob job
Streeeetch bruva
got this on lock ya’ll, yah girl sucks my hot dog and gets lock jaw
Swallows them baby Dwayne johnsons’, that’s called getting my Rocks off
Swaggy P but contents light
have your boo missin, seen her N’ spit my rap to her quicker than Fu Snickens
Muffled her face, had your dime under the pillow, but u aint have a tooth missin
Mmmmm yes sir. Don demarco
Serve Hab quicker than soup kitchens, come and get a taste bum!
then blow a hole through Habitats ribs just to see where his abs originate from
Light heree

Chyeahhh if u could drop a verse with all harsh shit like the pillow line you would be a real threat. U write for u tho and that's to be respected. Hab was okay. More consistent in terms of possible quotes so that's why he edges this out. Chyeahh had lotb tho

V hab


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