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~RustyGunZ~ 05-18-2016 12:27 AM

Reza vs. OG Smokinstein - OG Smoke Wins
 
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Due Saturday CALIFORNIA TIME MIDNIGHT.

Reza 05-18-2016 06:12 AM

Im here. Going 12 i guess

Og smokinstein 05-19-2016 01:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reza (Post 586048)
Im here. Going 12 i guess

12 is cool

Reza 05-19-2016 02:52 PM

O-2?? Sheez...

I guess I'm rusty griswold. But you'll take a permanent vacation, son.
I got roguish skills; even with this death star plans you still wouldn't destroy me dun
He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife
Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise
Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down
When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground
Idiot thought going downtown meant his girl was hitting the bank
Nah she was going downtown to withdraw my jizz after i was i done hitting the skank
I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex
Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh
So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b...
Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties
Bitch...

Og smokinstein 05-20-2016 08:56 PM

Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm.
That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm.
The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit.
Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit.

Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots.
Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot.
Reza can play odometer, just to see how far I will go.
Homie.. I'm a killa behind the bars, welcome to deathrow.
Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico.
Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo.
Shots will dissect this cat in front of everbody immediately.
Ill open up this pussy fast like I jus gotta degree in gynecology

Kenny the OG 05-21-2016 03:06 PM

I guess I'm rusty griswold. But you'll take a permanent vacation, son.
I got roguish skills; even with this death star plans you still wouldn't destroy me dun
Nah
He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife
Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise
See hawks concepts are nothing new but this aight
Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down
When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground
ehhh
Idiot thought going downtown meant his girl was hitting the bank
Nah she was going downtown to withdraw my jizz after i was i done hitting the skank
Not feelin this
I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex
Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh
decent
So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b...
Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties
Coulda been a solid finish but the punch didn't hit hard to me



Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm.
That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm.
lmaoooo. Why haven't I thought of this. Simple but effective
The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit.
Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit.
Ehhh
Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots.
Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot.
Decent
Reza can play odometer, just to see how far I will go.
Homie.. I'm a killa behind the bars, welcome to deathrow.
Wackkk
Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico.
Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo.
Ok
Shots will dissect this cat in front of everbody immediately.
Ill open up this pussy fast like I jus gotta degree in gynecology
Mad basic


Og was inconsistent to me but he had more quotables and took this easily. I just wasntwasn't a fan of rezas concepts and the way they were landing. Idk he ain't bad but a few things are off.

Vote- og

Ghost1 05-23-2016 08:22 AM

Bump

Ghost1 05-23-2016 11:47 AM

I guess I'm rusty griswold. But you'll take a permanent vacation, son.
I got roguish skills; even with this death star plans you still wouldn't destroy me dun

Lol wordings off Griswolds could've been cool

He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife
Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise

Played

Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down
When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground

Light

Idiot thought going downtown meant his girl was hitting the bank
Nah she was going downtown to withdraw my jizz after i was i done hitting the skank

Nope

I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex
Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh

Don't love the wording but this was still hot. Ur best so far.

So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b...
Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties

Started w a played wizard of oz setup then veered completely away from it to this smarties bit....which was ok. Set up should be setting up ur punch tho....u did a poor job kf that here



Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm.
That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm.

Cool

The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit.
Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit.

Ok

Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots.
Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot.

Lol fuck w this

Reza can play odometer, just to see how far I will go.
Homie.. I'm a killa behind the bars, welcome to deathrow.

This may have been the first text bar ever written. Lol.

Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico.
Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo.

This is wild good

Shots will dissect this cat in front of everbody immediately.
Ill open up this pussy fast like I jus gotta degree in gynecology

Played shit again



Reza still Trynna get a feel for his style it would seem. He had alotve misses this week. OG suffered from the general rmbva played shit syndrome but...in true rmbva form had sum crazy gun bars that floored me.

Vote- og

Schadenfreude 05-23-2016 08:03 PM

OG SMOKINSTEIN won, Reza just didn't have anything, played or uninspired concepts w/ unpolished wording. Smoke has that simple yet highly effective RMBVA style, that wordked well for him this week.

Saint 05-23-2016 10:50 PM

Mass appealed

Desert blow, clown rodeo

Reza had a lot of somewhat ok concepts. alot to work on, streamlining setups, execution.

Smoke had 2 lines I liked but kick that played behind bars shit...lol

Vote OGsmoke

Junto 05-24-2016 01:04 AM

these was the best from both sides

He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife
Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise
Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down
When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground
I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex
Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh

So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b...
Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties

vs.

Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm.
That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm.

The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit.
Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit.
Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots.
Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot.
Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico.
Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo.

close battle... I thought reza had some decent bars in there
mass appealed flesh was pretty good. couple bad misses but not a bad verse...
first rodeo from smoke coulda been fire... tough to overlook the plaxico rodeo rhyme tho
sand storm was original though & hit, mascot kinda funny
smoke was tighter on his wording and a little more consistent here overall


v/ og smokin

Orc 05-24-2016 10:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reza (Post 586352)
O-2?? Sheez...

I guess I'm rusty griswold. But you'll take a permanent vacation, son.
I got roguish skills; even with this death star plans you still wouldn't destroy me dun
Connection is a Lil loose. Styk figer that u
He loved gun talk till we surrounded this lowlife
Everywhere you go you'll seahawks, rookie like cj prosise
Light but ok
Pop up while ur getting dressed and gun you down
When the cannon sounds, it'll have black running barefoot like an extra on underground
Who's black . I'm lost
Idiot thought going downtown meant his girl was hitting the bank
Nah she was going downtown to withdraw my jizz after i was i done hitting the skank
Nothing witty here sire
I'm universally loved like snoopy. You lacked mass appeal, tex
Until the machete turned his melon into a mass appealed flesh
I wasted two mins trying to find a wp or something here
So go ahead w/ ya cowardly lion. we all know you lack the heart, b...
Ima still leave ya top twisted @ the end like a pack of smarties
Okay here
Bitch...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Og smokinstein (Post 586566)
Ill put the D.E to reza cause for me, gun violence is the Norm.
That dessert blow in his face, that's a nomad caught in a sand storm.
Played conceptually bruv
The headshot,put his identiy in crisis, like stolen credit.
Get rid of all his features, like Jcole last album final edit.
Okay light
Nigga u not built like that, you don't got the heart to bust no shots.
Gunbars got u getting out of character,like a laid off mascot.
Okay, cuda been worded better
Reza can play odometer, just to see how far I will go.
Homie.. I'm a killa behind the bars, welcome to deathrow.
Played conceptually bruv
Catch you while partying,but I aint playing no games after the club.. word to palxico.
Ill put this clown, in the middle of the barrel to show him this not my frist rodeo.
Mmmmm Don demarco
Shots will dissect this cat in front of everbody immediately.
Ill open up this pussy fast like I jus gotta degree in gynecology
Plz no

Rodeo Clown was hot. Then out of character was a cool ass concept, jcole was cool too. Verse was hurt by some subpar old ideas man. Just gotta cut out the obvious shit and you'll be a top top text killa keyboard master. As for reza, too many statements man. U gotta get.more witty with it. Seahawks n smarties was cool. More shit like that and you'll be str8

Gotta vote for the smoke


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