MFTastik vs. Joe Boston - MFTastik wins
 

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I'm going 12 bro

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12 @MFtastick

Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO
I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person
U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in
Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore
Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for
I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum
Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items
U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle
Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle
Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple
Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle

Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip
Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet
The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions
then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick

If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie
Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy
Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up
Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup

Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place
Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face
Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer
Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever

Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO
powers is a wierd phrase for someone who won something. Don't like this, but wording was decent at least.
I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person
U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in
not doing drugs is better than being a heorin junkie or a crack head lol. Not fdeelin this tho
Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore
Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for
okay not great but jab here
I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum
Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items
this is ok... but, ur using less words but are having trouble making correlations with less words so u still have some work to do
U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle
Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle
eh?
Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple
Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle
not a fan

vs

Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip
Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet
lol funny
The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions
then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick
i get it but its a little underwhelming
If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie
Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy
lol aight
Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up
Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup
lmao
Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place
Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face
nah
Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer
Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever
nah

Joe is transitioning from longgg stretches of endless lines to short crisp wording. He's gonna have to practice tho to learn how to make the correlations and using his usually decent concepts while still holding on to the short crisp wording. Joe had a couple okay bars but really didn't do much here.

MF had some nice shit with crisp wording and takes this one easy imo.

v/MF

Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO
This a force to me. I've never heard the expression "yo you got powered in your battle last week". Maybe if u used the word overpowered it'd make more sense. But this a force. The humor didn't work for me either
I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person
U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in
missed
Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore
Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for
Awful setup. Reads mad awkward. The nameflip was a good attempt but the punch wasn't done right
I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum
Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items
This nigga referenced a caldors lmaooo. I thought that was just a regional chain that went out of business in the 90s. Not sure if anyone not from the east coast will get this but its decent. Again tho the setups be terrible
U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle
Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle
decent concept but the wording is way to long for my taste
Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple
Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle
decent


Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip
Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet
Blah
The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions
then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick
nah
If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie
Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy
Lol simple but effective
Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up
Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup
Ok
Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place
Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face
I'm bias against this since I had a gun butt bar last week. This one wasn't bad but it just had no effect for me
Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer
Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever
Laaaaazy

Mf had a cleaner more enjoyable verse. Joe just comes off as mad forced to me most of the time. From his choice of words to how he words his bars. Solid concepts that could hit hard but end up getting washed out under bad execution and strange setups. Mf got this.

Vote- mftastik

Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO
This a force to me. I've never heard the expression "yo you got powered in your battle last week". Maybe if u used the word overpowered it'd make more sense. But this a force. The humor didn't work for me either
I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person
U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in
missed
Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore
Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for
Awful setup. Reads mad awkward. The nameflip was a good attempt but the punch wasn't done right
I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum
Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items
This nigga referenced a caldors lmaooo. I thought that was just a regional chain that went out of business in the 90s. Not sure if anyone not from the east coast will get this but its decent. Again tho the setups be terrible
U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle
Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle
decent concept but the wording is way to long for my taste
Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple
Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle
decent


Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip
Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet
Blah
The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions
then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick
nah
If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie
Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy
Lol simple but effective
Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up
Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup
Ok
Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place
Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face
I'm bias against this since I had a gun butt bar last week. This one wasn't bad but it just had no effect for me
Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer
Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever
Laaaaazy

Mf had a cleaner more enjoyable verse. Joe just comes off as mad forced to me most of the time. From his choice of words to how he words his bars. Solid concepts that could hit hard but end up getting washed out under bad execution and strange setups. Mf got this.

Vote- mftastik

MFTASTIK took this one convincingly imo. Joe's wording was cluttered & clumsy, while MF's was clear & concise. MF didn't have any super crazy bars or cleverly creative concepts, but he most def got his point across much better than his opponent. Joe u still have to polish up that wording, because your stuff keeps reading like struggle bars.

v/ mft

Joe had a decent verse but those lines were mad stretched. On top of wording issues it took away from the impact of his punches. Meanwhile even tgo it wasn't the strongest verse mft had a bit more consistent. I liked the family guy bar and thr gun butt punch. Decent drop.

I got mf, on this one his verse was better than joes.
Joe verse was congested, sometimes to the point it made it hard to read.
Mf read smoother and lil more effective.

Vote mf

Bump

Last week u sucked ass fuck an explaination bro
If Kenny Powers u like that again i suggest u just cancel HBO

Wordings off....not that I think this is an overly good concept anyways


I know u never experienced drugs ur such a fag n straight edge person
U ever get em from Chico Stik their 5 cents at the store your man works in

Light

Wheres his thick skin bitch not built to be around gore
Tas'll graduate from a school of ass whoopings so what the fuck the cap n gown for

I like school of ass whoopins. Again tho wording an execution joe. U got to take ur time w these dude. Atkeast until u can narrow a style that works.

I'll watch his blood poor he better pray the lord protects him from this asylum
Once i grip the Caldors are coming off im taking everything even discounted items

Caldors is sum discount store maybe? This is ok....hit less cuz reference was too obscure to me...wording was better tho

U were frightened coming out the womb never had muscle
Lay Brawn on me bet youll Stfu when i turn to Tyronn Lue during a Cavs huddle

Lay brawn on me is a cool concept. U made this unrealistic tho again by putting urself in the cave huddle. It's too animated. We need to believe wat ur sayin is a legitimate threat....nkt just some story u wrote.

Im the type that loves trouble so im hitting u power fuck a grapple
Mean right with the full extension if u ever think i deny it like a Destroyer battle

U watch ur fucking mouth. (Played)




Square up little man. I gotta jab thatl make him backflip
Or i'll pistol whip him till the magazine turn into a pamphlet

Lol magazine shit played but I fuck w this spin on it for real haha

The left hand got a hook that give your lungs contactions
then the right hand strike on his side like a matchstick

Played. Good wording.

If Joe say he bout that action. I garuntee its a lie
Only time you see rounds in Joes hands.. Its family guy

This shit floored me.

Joes bitch ass wanna try something, this 1, 2 have him fucked up
Then im putting the deuce in his mouth.. 2 Girls, 1 Cup

LMAO this is cool


Old fuck boy Joe, Allways comin in last place
Gun Butt your mouth in, givem that you ate ass face

Until sum1 do a better gun butt line then Kenny I ain givin these no love

Let me catch you mean muggin. then you getting this beamer
Put the 5 to his forehead. i aint checking his fever

Seen this before


Joe was lazy am I feel like mf actually had a few more fresh bangers then usual honestly. Clear cut win for mf.

V fantastic

Played idea man


Okay here too

Dope to see Joe clean up his wording and be more concise . Shows he wants to improve and he's taking the shit talk and insults well and still vying to get do per . Still a Lil way to go on executing his concepts in harsher ways but this was a pretty good verse witha couple of quotes . Mf is becoming a cult figure on here haha tbh his verse was all straight no real bad misses very consistent . He gets the win this wk