OG Smokinstein 2-2 vs Schadenfreude - SCHADENFREUDE WINS
 

@Og smokinstein @Schadenfreude

@Schadenfreude we doing 12? We doing going bars?

12's cool & yea straight bars.

Ext.

Aight w/ Me.

Fuck it..

Another corpse, my real hobby’s killing a queer promptly
so watch me murder this imaginary friend just to leave a clear body.
Better be in a bulletproof suit, cuz when I fire & shoot..
can’t refute the size of the big hawk, the Stick Talks like ‘I Am Groot’.
Lol’d as I wrote this, beat me, must be high & hopeless..
fool how are u OGsmoking, yet u don’t have an ounce of dopeness?
Hoes gimme that body language, I stay piping strangers
while if a bitch ever sends Smoke signals, it’s cuz her life’s in danger.
Face it, RM only brings average shit, u ain’t damaging..
bunch of lames throwing the same trash - that’s waste management.
The 4-4 wicked, so u better be easy hoe, know yo limits,
bitch if u’re cross w/ me after I flash the gun, shit’ll be a photo finish.

..BODY.

When you say you spray niggas, I like to be believe there's some truth in the mix.
Cause you a pepper spray key chain nigga,something you gotta fix,
you'll wont catch Schadenfreude without mase like puffy in 96'
Broke ass nigga, Mr. let me get the password to your Netflix.
But fuck all that...
I got a tec with holes surrounding the barrel like bums in a Ny winter scene.
Ill Gomez Adams, Schadenfreude stretch him with the machine.
More shots Riddling/Ritalin his body then a class full of AdHD teens.
Let your man intervene,..but when I say man I mean your gay lover.
I'll pistol whip him til its a jus a bloody body like dmx 2nd album cover.
You talk a good game, dnt mean shit to a nigga who lived it tho.
I'm not buying your wolf tickets, White fang came out years ago.
Ill grab the 38snub make you go nose to nose now kiss the eskimo.

Another corpse, my real hobby’s killing a queer promptly
so watch me murder this imaginary friend just to leave a clear body.
Ok
Better be in a bulletproof suit, cuz when I fire & shoot..
can’t refute the size of the big hawk, the Stick Talks like ‘I Am Groot’.
nice
Lol’d as I wrote this, beat me, must be high & hopeless..
fool how are u OGsmoking, yet u don’t have an ounce of dopeness?
fairly fresh cause it's a nameplay but weed/dope lines are kinda stale to me
Hoes gimme that body language, I stay piping strangers
while if a bitch ever sends Smoke signals, it’s cuz her life’s in danger.
Lol cool
Face it, RM only brings average shit, u ain’t damaging..
bunch of lames throwing the same trash - that’s waste management.
alright, not too direct at smoke but I still dig it
The 4-4 wicked, so u better be easy hoe, know yo limits,
bitch if u’re cross w/ me after I flash the gun, shit’ll be a photo finish.
alright
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When you say you spray niggas, I like to be believe there's some truth in the mix.
Cause you a pepper spray key chain nigga,something you gotta fix,
you'll wont catch Schadenfreude without mase like puffy in 96'
Broke ass nigga, Mr. let me get the password to your Netflix.
the mase concept is pretty dope but it feels a lil diluted to me considering its 4 lines based around the one
But fuck all that...
I got a tec with holes surrounding the barrel like bums in a Ny winter scene.
Ill Gomez Adams, Schadenfreude stretch him with the machine.
More shots Riddling/Ritalin his body then a class full of AdHD teens.
imo you didn't need to explain the flip like that, shit works. Gomez and Ritalin were solid punches but both light with delivery
Let your man intervene,..but when I say man I mean your gay lover.
I'll pistol whip him til its a jus a bloody body like dmx 2nd album cover.
Ok, nothing major though
You talk a good game, dnt mean shit to a nigga who lived it tho.
I'm not buying your wolf tickets, White fang came out years ago.
Ill grab the 38snub make you go nose to nose now kiss the eskimo.
cool lol


I dig what smoke was going for, something different and close to live battles but in text it kinda slowed down the pace a bit imo. Schadenfreude was solid throughout and he got this for me

V/Schadenfreude

Schad


Another corpse, my real hobby’s killing a queer promptly
so watch me murder this imaginary friend just to leave a clear body.
Nice flip here direct hit

Better be in a bulletproof suit, cuz when I fire & shoot..
can’t refute the size of the big hawk, the Stick Talks like ‘I Am Groot’.
Fucking fire lmao had to research it but watching guardians of the galaxy this was dope



Lol’d as I wrote this, beat me, must be high & hopeless..
fool how are u OGsmoking, yet u don’t have an ounce of dopeness?
Ok nameplay basic light jab

Hoes gimme that body language, I stay piping strangers
while if a bitch ever sends Smoke signals, it’s cuz her life’s in danger.
Lol nice nameplay

Face it, RM only brings average shit, u ain’t damaging..
bunch of lames throwing the same trash - that’s waste management.
Nice my stepdad worked there watch it!

The 4-4 wicked, so u better be easy hoe, know yo limits,
bitch if u’re cross w/ me after I flash the gun, shit’ll be a photo finish.
Played

Og

When you say you spray niggas, I like to be believe there's some truth in the mix.
Cause you a pepper spray key chain nigga,something you gotta fix,
Lol liked the humor factor good flip off setup

you'll wont catch Schadenfreude without mase like puffy in 96'
Broke ass nigga, Mr. let me get the password to your Netflix.
Nah

But fuck all that...
I got a tec with holes surrounding the barrel like bums in a Ny winter scene.
Ill Gomez Adams, Schadenfreude stretch him with the machine.
More shots Riddling/Ritalin his body then a class full of AdHD teens.
Stretched af y would u do that and dont explsin the wp shits corny last line is played too

Let your man intervene,..but when I say man I mean your gay lover.
I'll pistol whip him til its a jus a bloody body like dmx 2nd album cover.
Nice

You talk a good game, dnt mean shit to a nigga who lived it tho.
I'm not buying your wolf tickets, White fang came out years ago.
Ill grab the 38snub make you go nose to nose now kiss the eskimo.
No stretchedddd man ur adding filler

Og work on not adding filler a bar equals two lines man. Ur opener was cool that dmx meta was dope. Schad opener was dope. I am Groot had me dying that shit was flames. Waste management was cool too.

V/Schad more consistent and creative. OG started out ok then must of fell asleep at the computer because he had added 3 lines to one bar why???

Fuck it..

OH SHIT WATCH OUT

Another corpse, my real hobby’s killing a queer promptly
so watch me murder this imaginary friend just to leave a clear body.

Light

Better be in a bulletproof suit, cuz when I fire & shoot..
can’t refute the size of the big hawk, the Stick Talks like ‘I Am Groot’.

This is cool

Lol’d as I wrote this, beat me, must be high & hopeless..
fool how are u OGsmoking, yet u don’t have an ounce of dopeness?

WOOO haha aight now we cookin

Hoes gimme that body language, I stay piping strangers
while if a bitch ever sends Smoke signals, it’s cuz her life’s in danger.

Idk if this is played on him but I fucks w this heavy haha

Face it, RM only brings average shit, u ain’t damaging..
bunch of lames throwing the same trash - that’s waste management.

Light

The 4-4 wicked, so u better be easy hoe, know yo limits,
bitch if u’re cross w/ me after I flash the gun, shit’ll be a photo finish.

This is ok

..BODY.


When you say you spray niggas, I like to be believe there's some truth in the mix.
Cause you a pepper spray key chain nigga,something you gotta fix,

Lmao concept is cool....wording leaves this punch anticlimactic tho...like ur punch is in the wrong place...I'll try an explain this better in the mag

you'll wont catch Schadenfreude without mase like puffy in 96'
Broke ass nigga, Mr. let me get the password to your Netflix.

Lol this is light....funny tho

But fuck all that...
I got a tec with holes surrounding the barrel like bums in a Ny winter scene.
Ill Gomez Adams, Schadenfreude stretch him with the machine.

Surrounding the barrel should've been ur punch an machine should've been the set up. Surround the barrel was was fly

More shots Riddling/Ritalin his body then a class full of AdHD teens.
Let your man intervene,..but when I say man I mean your gay lover.

Same here....Ritalin is ur strong flip here

I'll pistol whip him til its a jus a bloody body like dmx 2nd album cover.
You talk a good game, dnt mean shit to a nigga who lived it tho.

U trolling me? This the new punch then set up style? Lol DMX was dope

I'm not buying your wolf tickets, White fang came out years ago.
Ill grab the 38snub make you go nose to nose now kiss the eskimo.

Lol Eskimo kiss is a dope concept....wording hurt u here...also wolf ticket/white fang was dope haha

Aight so having read og for the first time pretty much........feminists me of a more creative mftastik w even poorer line placement choices haha. Some of those concepts I could use an make a craaaaaazy fuckin verse....but u got to learn how and where to use them....as it stands shade was way more polished....which to be fair he is alot more polished then half the league...still tho as much as I'd like to hand out a dub based on creativity an concepts og verse was just tooooo sloppy here. Enjoyed the read on both sides tho.

V shade

Better be in a bulletproof suit, cuz when I fire & shoot..
can’t refute the size of the big hawk, the Stick Talks like ‘I Am Groot’.
Lol’d as I wrote this, beat me, must be high & hopeless..
fool how are u OGsmoking, yet u don’t have an ounce of dopeness?
Hoes gimme that body language, I stay piping strangers
while if a bitch ever sends Smoke signals, it’s cuz her life’s in danger.

Vs

Cause you a pepper spray key chain nigga,something you gotta fix,
you'll wont catch Schadenfreude without mase like puffy in 96'


Og gtta diff style, but its so awkward its hard to grasp the punch. Concepts were there, wording was weird tho. Shad had the nice verse easily. Smoke signals was nice groot was tough

Vote - Shad

Ima say schad took this easily. I get what og was doing with the punch-setup thing but his wording was horrid. Really took away from the verse.

stick talks lotb
smoke signals

vs

bloody body

snub nose had potential too but wording killed it, u gonna be good eventually w/ dope concepts like that but u still got a long way to go yet

v/schad