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Mr. J 05-01-2016 03:25 AM

Too Much Heat In The Kitchen
 
I got the sword in the stone you not on my axis
open the door to your soul & knock you off balance
send them swinging backwards, thats a parry...
tell them what I drinking after? thats a dairy...
I suck from the teat, your pride is in a bottle...
you love the vitamin D you like what it is that follows.
if you go stupid, ya sickness clogged by your mucus
you a student. your ignance might make me wan lose it
kiddin, ready to assist you down on the back court
all star, my converse could bring down the board with Shaq force...
Kazaam bwoy, get the word straight from my radio...
you can feel the speaker box vibing with that crazy flow...
listen to the gravy pour, made from scratch, all original
Im hypnotized by a golden record with a raw visual...
the lost sought wisdom too, take the good with the bad...
take the look of the mad, this is hollywood with a wrap.
sending them shots up, the scene set, retake & clap back
we can blow some cartridges or reset & snap back.
see where the controller stands at? the one man band
put holes in that cheese & send it to the alps, unhand that...
its too hot....its too hot.....

Maximus 05-03-2016 04:54 PM

hmm, cool quick read bro, Some dope lines sprinkled all around .
the opening two lines were dope and Set the tone for the whole write up. not bad gee, keep scribbling....


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