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Sharp 04-26-2016 09:03 PM

Contender Match: Schadenfreude 9-6 vs Junto 3-1 - SCHAD WINS BY NS
 
NBL Season 9


Due FRIDAY
Extension will be given if asked due to late start. You MUST ask though.



Minimum - 12 lines
Max - 18 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree


NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
NO recycling
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls
@Schadenfreude @Junto

Schadenfreude 04-27-2016 12:00 AM

Extendo needed, going 12.

Junto 04-28-2016 09:03 PM

aight

Schadenfreude 05-01-2016 12:29 AM

Look..

Have the Sig cut up ya wig worse than a hipster barber,
bang tool til yo brain pool & get a lake view of the inner-bitch u harbor.
Couldn’t survive in the Hood, only shooting when he rap
scared & not even a treasure map could send lil Goonie thru the trap.
Better buzz off insect, before u get stung w/ no apology
squad’s like a colony, if ever Junebug, We’ll teach this bum entomology.
Yo bitch a stalker, but I won’t fuck til the slut gets help,
avoiding any function w/ her disgusting lips, more than Hush does Zelph.
Ya whole squad a get washed, lemon squeeze’ll rinse..
if ya man pop, it’s Sandlot - boy’ll see a Beast soon as he leaps the fence.
Nerds saying I’m a no name & u don’t consider Me one
but I’m Troy McClure, this will be a huge lose u may remember me from.

..body.

Ghost1 05-01-2016 10:27 AM

Look..

K I'm ready

Have the Sig cut up ya wig worse than a hipster barber,
bang tool til yo brain pool & get a lake view of the inner-bitch u harbor.

This was fire

Couldn’t survive in the Hood, only shooting when he rap
scared & not even a treasure map could send lil Goonie thru the trap.

Lmao cool

Better buzz off insect, before u get stung w/ no apology
squad’s like a colony, if ever Junebug, We’ll teach this bum entomology.

Not bad

Yo bitch a stalker, but I won’t fuck til the slut gets help,
avoiding any function w/ her disgusting lips, more than Hush does Zelph.

Light

Ya whole squad a get washed, lemon squeeze’ll rinse..
if ya man pop, it’s Sandlot - boy’ll see a Beast soon as he leaps the fence.

Hell yes.

Nerds saying I’m a no name & u don’t consider Me one
but I’m Troy McClure, this will be a huge lose u may remember me from.

Lol light but funny haha


..body.[/QUOTE]


This was a fire verse. Would've been botw prolly. Shame.

SHECK WES 05-01-2016 10:52 AM

Opener was good, 2nd bar nice too, third fuck you, fourth was dope and closer lol alrighty

Dope verse bro you so good at this!!!

Schadenfreude 05-01-2016 02:41 PM

Damn Junto..smh. I apprecite the feed tho.

Kenny the OG 05-01-2016 11:04 PM

Have the Sig cut up ya wig worse than a hipster barber,
bang tool til yo brain pool & get a lake view of the inner-bitch u harbor.
Solid opener. Nice rhyme scheme and punch to top it off
Couldn’t survive in the Hood, only shooting when he rap
scared & not even a treasure map could send lil Goonie thru the trap.
Ok
Better buzz off insect, before u get stung w/ no apology
squad’s like a colony, if ever Junebug, We’ll teach this bum entomology.
Nice
Yo bitch a stalker, but I won’t fuck til the slut gets help,
avoiding any function w/ her disgusting lips, more than Hush does Zelph.
Meh
Ya whole squad a get washed, lemon squeeze’ll rinse..
if ya man pop, it’s Sandlot - boy’ll see a Beast soon as he leaps the fence.
Nice
Nerds saying I’m a no name & u don’t consider Me one
but I’m Troy McClure, this will be a huge lose u may remember me from.
the second dope Simpsons punch I've seen this week. Funny closer

Solid verse overall. Basically no outright misses, all bars connected in some way and a good variety of punch types. Def showed up this week.

Barcotic 05-02-2016 03:48 AM

goonie thru the trap was coo
so was the sandlot line, good stuff

weird wording took away from the rest, decent verse


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