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Allen Knight 2-0 vs Joe Boston 0-1 - ALLEN KNIGHT WINS
NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
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@Allen Knight @Orc
14 Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank |
Yo @Orc if he need an extension im cool with it
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ight joey boy it goes...
got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin' if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3 & dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy |
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@Joe Boston
Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one the wording in the punch is all over the place, completely fucks with the fluidity of the concept. I liked the concept of the wordplay you used, just not effective for me with how it's worded All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod not hitting hard for me. Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features this was nice Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April "creature of habitat" isn't a thing lol, it's creature of habit. Decent punch Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple Ehh just so-so for me Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death The wording doesn't work for me. What does "feel new" mean? Major reach just to set up the New Orleans / Will Smith play, which i thought was just an easy topical Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank Guessing this is a personal? Not hitting super hard for me @Allen Knight got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin' if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton This was tight, setup was a little weak tho ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up Could have done a lot more with this imo, didn't hit hard for me ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas nah, not hitting for me ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino damn how haven't i heard this wordplay? dope i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group see what you were going for, felt just ok tho. a lil forced a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3 lmao this was nice & dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy felt like you should have said this first then ended with your previous bars, as this didn't hit all that hard Overall I thought this was pretty close. I feel like both had hits and misses and suffered from some poor wording. Gotta edge to who I thought hit harder when he hit, which was allen V/ Allen Knight |
Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son
Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one u had the concept going but the second line was way too stretched and killed the potential bro All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod nah this was corny man Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features alright not bad Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April -___________- this couldn't possibly work for so many reasons yo lmao Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple damn another good concept that was hurt by how you finished the second line... Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death dispite the wording I liked this, concept good, wp was good, solid Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank hmmm nah man Vs got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin' if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton double d's played, even I've used that, but the flip was decent ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up decent at best ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas lol nah ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino alright good i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group alright good again a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3 first line stupid but lol & dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy ehh decent at best Joe had 2 good ones. Didn't like how allens verse started but he picked up after the third line. Not allens best that's for sure, and if Joe dropped nicer he could have beat it but Allen takes this comfortably. Vote AK |
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Go Run n play in traffic no one gives a fuck bout u son Just be quick to Deke Al cuz im hoping ur face gets plastered on a window into a replica of one ^ didn't really live up to its potential All my bitches got nice buns get em stunned when im deep with the Rod If u were to go farther in a chick it involves taking off ur shirt exposing ur dad bod ^ Nah I didn't feel this Better pray to fucking God there isnt a cold day i meet ya Blades will have ur face swapped they'll be adding the stabwounds to ur snapchat features ^this one is okay Im a creature of habitat u never see no signs of me being frozen on the facial Your a bitch you've put up more Cold Fronts then predicted this April ^Nooooooope. Leave ur body covered in stapels show u what i do to herbs who act ungreatful For this money im Hungry, Jack you then have those insides leaking Vermont Maple ^ The wording needs work, the ideas are there though Lets see what wack crew u can finagle ill fuck em up and not waste my breath One shot will make em feel New Orlean them ill have ur block looking like Will Smiths death ^ I didn't really like this, it felt forced. Theres nothing left in you ur costantly running on an empty tank Sovereign at text? Im kicking you the fuck out just like Santander Bank ^No, def wasn't strong enough for a closer. Allen: got duel desert eagles aimed at ya body sparkin' if Jolene towards me im pumpin Dbl D's in his chest like Dolly Parton ^ Fresh twist on a played concept, I don't know if everyone caught the 'Jolene' part as well ur w/p's a reach faggot, them rb heads gassing u fuck i kno Wyatt so forced, u gotta family of retards always backing u up ^this one was okay ur slut gets trained out 24/7, she'll let anyone hit reckless Joey Gallo on a guy & gettin her vag ripped wide enough to fit Texas ^ felt a little forced but it was a mad decent idea. ur a snitch w/ no crew, ya loyaltys a crime u weak ho i'd neva Baccarat like u, i'll break ur legs & dump u outside of a Casino ^ dopeeeee. i'll snipe u while ya w/ ur ppl, scope im poppin the truth once a shell Tagalong distance out u'll be the only 1 dropped in the group ^ alright alright a bitch saw ur ugly ass in the VBL & let out a heavy scream that Video Converter from watchin battles to listening to'em on MP3 ^ LOL dope bar. & dont answer hushs battle call, get ur weight up rookie any Video Vixen would make all ur VBL shit look straight up pussy ^ Nah this didn't work very good as a closer. Allen did his thing here while Joe didn't have much of anything. Easy win for AK. Vote - Allen Knight |
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cold fronts (both could've been dope w/ better wording but still decent) vs wyatt baccarat tagalong video converter v/ak |
Joes opener was a nice concept. Snapchat was okay too. Meet ya doesnt rhyme with features though. I expected really good rhyming here considering you said my perfect slant rhymes were off. Overall you need to cut out the extra words in ya verses so that you can fulfil your potential. Make your verses more concise. Allen had the baccarat line which was cool and the video converter was funny. Opener was nice too actually. AK didn't go in too hard on Joe but he knew what to do to win.
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