Netcees - JShazo 2-2 vs Lotto Smirk 5-5

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JShazo 2-2 vs Lotto Smirk 5-5 - LOTTO WINS VIA NS

NBL Season 9

Due THURSDAY

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

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@Lotto Smirk @JShazo

check in..bar count on you

In... Busy this week so 10 - 12?

got no weapon hookups it's all rehearse he's an actress
he got gun links it's cus this fag has to do research for his matches
didn't take him serious,he won't last in these hunger games
I might be mocking jay but it'll be HIS body that's in flames
price on his head w/ the boys have this gays face blown
money'll bring interest that'll ruin ya life thats a pay day loan
he'll blubber n burn rubber while I'm taking instant aim
but run n get tagged in the back like kids playing children's games
every win on NC debatable go back to rmbva we're u cheating men
Over here u been battling w/ no bodies n ironically u only gained a rep THERE beating them

Done

will try n have omething in by later today if cool,

Damn @JShazo, that's not like you

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 577688)

got no weapon hookups it's all rehearse he's an actress
he got gun links it's cus this fag has to do research for his matches
Ok. Personal element made this hit for me
didn't take him serious,he won't last in these hunger games
I might be mocking jay but it'll be HIS body that's in flames
dope. Nothing else to say lol
price on his head w/ the boys have this gays face blown
money'll bring interest that'll ruin ya life thats a pay day loan
solid
he'll blubber n burn rubber while I'm taking instant aim
but run n get tagged in the back like kids playing children's games
since I'm just feeding you I'm gonna nitpick and say' kids playing children's games' feels slightly redundant, but it doesn't take away from the bar. Personally I don't remember seeing a tag bar so this is nice for me
every win on NC debatable go back to rmbva we're u cheating men
Over here u been battling w/ no bodies n ironically u only gained a rep THERE beating them
honestly note sure what you're going for/if I'm missing something. Could be my bad, but all I'm getting here the statement. 'ironically' makes me think I'm missing something though
Done

Solid verse, mocking Jay was nice and everything but the closer was a hit for me. Sucks shazo no showed you

got no weapon hookups it's all rehearse he's an actress
he got gun links it's cus this fag has to do research for his matches
^nice opener
didn't take him serious,he won't last in these hunger games
I might be mocking jay but it'll be HIS body that's in flames
^cool
price on his head w/ the boys have this gays face blown
money'll bring interest that'll ruin ya life thats a pay day loan
^this woulda been a dope nameflip against infiltration
he'll blubber n burn rubber while I'm taking instant aim
but run n get tagged in the back like kids playing children's games
^dope
every win on NC debatable go back to rmbva we're u cheating men
Over here u been battling w/ no bodies n ironically u only gained a rep THERE beating them
^played

Opener was cool, mocking Jay was decent it's played but the angle was fresh. Pay day I wasn't feeling, children's games was dope despite the redundancy sharp mentioned. Closers ehh. Pretty solid verse man.

Mocking jay was dope concept and worded tight. Good shit.

Tagged in the back could've come out played but you out a nice twist on it so I liked that too

The hunger games idea was cool but didn't hit as hard as it could. Came off a little basic. The children games bar was dope
I really just liked the execution of it. Idk.
4/10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 577688)

got no weapon hookups it's all rehearse he's an actress
he got gun links it's cus this fag has to do research for his matches
fire
didn't take him serious,he won't last in these hunger games
I might be mocking jay but it'll be HIS body that's in flames
eh kinda old
price on his head w/ the boys have this gays face blown
money'll bring interest that'll ruin ya life thats a pay day loan
ok
he'll blubber n burn rubber while I'm taking instant aim
but run n get tagged in the back like kids playing children's games
fire
every win on NC debatable go back to rmbva we're u cheating men
Over here u been battling w/ no bodies n ironically u only gained a rep THERE beating them
nah
Done

ok good shit