Netcees - Cred vs VividlyVague

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Cred vs VividlyVague - (Cred wins)

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@Cred I'm down for 12 if you are.

@Vividlyvague

30 shot swiss cheese 'em, show up to ur wake wit the cannon bruh
den put 6 in ur Box during the March to match ur death date on the calendar
more clips.. leave his ass slumped in the river on sum war shit
they'll find this nigga wasted in Germany somewhere like a Orc trip
i'm back, bringing flames! u're a fuckin fag it's a shame
cus i knew u were a pussy before i even seen the Vag in ur name
dog u sparring wit a God so watch me lay 'em out proper
bitch its gonna be hard to reach these bars, that's a west coast chopper
i let the tom burst.. pistol play? u kno i bomb first
mannnn i'll have 'em dancing with that metal like a rock concert
plus i'm the predicted favorite so u already kno u're in trouble dude
u lost Initially.. cus abbreviating ur name s'the only time u seeing a W

drill season.

Check your clip.

How you got anywhere being as frail as you are got me baffled.
Don't let this topical nerd destroyer cred, we know you already lost that battle.
I don't pull punches, I might break a bone with a hectic left.
One shot'll shake him like an etch a sketch, that's what you call a credit check.
I don't give a fuck. Honestly, I might run into a gunfight with a hunting knife.
He'll c red when I gut his wife, his gun'll get him jammed like he belonged on a Wonder slice.
Homie I ain't nothing nice. I seen so much, that being street just don't cut it.
Would tell this fag ta spit theatrical gunplay, but that real life shit is outta his budget.
This dude wouldn't make it down the block in another hood. Who's he kiddin?
This AR is a doosey spittin. He rocks J's? Shoot his ankles til the 2-3 missin.
FOH nigga. You only be in the street long enough to get called inside for suppertime.
Only time this bitch'll hold a can to my ear is if a string is connected to the other side.

...tag that bitch.

Cred

Opener is pretty wordy.
Orc/Germany line is dope.
Vag is fucking hilarious.
West Coast Chopper is fuckin dope.
Dancing metal not my fave.
Closer is wack tho.

VV
Opener is pretty straightforward flip.
Etcha Sketch line overworked for sure. Opposite of opener.
Wonder slice is bad.
I don't even get the next one.
Jordan line is bad.
Closer is very played.

VV, I like you on the topical side, but this was a big swing and a miss here for me, dog. Cred had three really dope lines. West Coast Chopper is one of the most inventive lines I've seen in a while - that complex simplicity is where it's at and you hit that sweet spot.

Vote - Cred

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 570544)

@Vividlyvague

30 shot swiss cheese 'em, show up to ur wake wit the cannon bruh
den put 6 in ur Box during the March to match ur death date on the calendar
---eh this a reach b
more clips.. leave his ass slumped in the river on sum war shit
they'll find this nigga wasted in Germany somewhere like a Orc trip
---ok
i'm back, bringing flames! u're a fuckin fag it's a shame
cus i knew u were a pussy before i even seen the Vag in ur name
---nice
dog u sparring wit a God so watch me lay 'em out proper
bitch its gonna be hard to reach these bars, that's a west coast chopper
---that's fire !
i let the tom burst.. pistol play? u kno i bomb first
mannnn i'll have 'em dancing with that metal like a rock concert
---light
plus i'm the predicted favorite so u already kno u're in trouble dude
u lost Initially.. cus abbreviating ur name s'the only time u seeing a W
---nice that's different

drill season.

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Originally Posted by Vividlyvague (Post 570567)

Check your clip.

How you got anywhere being as frail as you are got me baffled.
Don't let this topical nerd destroyer cred, we know you already lost that battle.
---ok kinda cool
I don't pull punches, I might break a bone with a hectic left.
One shot'll shake him like an etch a sketch, that's what you call a credit check.
---this kinda dope props
I don't give a fuck. Honestly, I might run into a gunfight with a hunting knife.
He'll c red when I gut his wife, his gun'll get him jammed like he belonged on a Wonder slice.
---lol nah bro
Homie I ain't nothing nice. I seen so much, that being street just don't cut it.
Would tell this fag ta spit theatrical gunplay, but that real life shit is outta his budget.
---nah wording is long winded and punchline is meh
This dude wouldn't make it down the block in another hood. Who's he kiddin?
This AR is a doosey spittin. He rocks J's? Shoot his ankles til the 2-3 missing
---nah bro
FOH nigga. You only be in the street long enough to get called inside for suppertime.
Only time this bitch'll hold a can to my ear is if a string is connected to the other side.
---lol kinda ok but I seen the concept a lot

...tag that bitch.

Vivid came off corny at times cuz he don't got the battle tip down pact just yet but his lines got a certain humor and charisma I dig

Cred had harder hits across the board with that motorcycle line being straight crazy

V cred

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 570544)

Orc trip, Vag & West Coast Choppers.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague (Post 570567)

Opener was about it.

Overall CRED won handedly, Vivid u have to work on creating muuuucch fresher concepts.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cred (Post 570544)

@Vividlyvague

30 shot swiss cheese 'em, show up to ur wake wit the cannon bruh
den put 6 in ur Box during the March to match ur death date on the calendar
Aiight, a little forced but I'm feeling
more clips.. leave his ass slumped in the river on sum war shit
they'll find this nigga wasted in Germany somewhere like a Orc trip
Weak
i'm back, bringing flames! u're a fuckin fag it's a shame
cus i knew u were a pussy before i even seen the Vag in ur name
Nah
dog u sparring wit a God so watch me lay 'em out proper
bitch its gonna be hard to reach these bars, that's a west coast chopper
Ok
i let the tom burst.. pistol play? u kno i bomb first
mannnn i'll have 'em dancing with that metal like a rock concert
Nah
plus i'm the predicted favorite so u already kno u're in trouble dude
u lost Initially.. cus abbreviating ur name s'the only time u seeing a W
I dig the idea a lot but execution off, like the punch didn't end up making a lot of sense bro

drill season.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague (Post 570567)

Check your clip.

How you got anywhere being as frail as you are got me baffled.
Don't let this topical nerd destroyer cred, we know you already lost that battle.
average
I don't pull punches, I might break a bone with a hectic left.
One shot'll shake him like an etch a sketch, that's what you call a credit check.
There should have been some sort of better tie in to credit check. Weak
I don't give a fuck. Honestly, I might run into a gunfight with a hunting knife.
He'll c red when I gut his wife, his gun'll get him jammed like he belonged on a Wonder slice.
Nah bro
Homie I ain't nothing nice. I seen so much, that being street just don't cut it.
Would tell this fag ta spit theatrical gunplay, but that real life shit is outta his budget.
like the idea but not the wording
This dude wouldn't make it down the block in another hood. Who's he kiddin?
This AR is a doosey spittin. He rocks J's? Shoot his ankles til the 2-3 missin.
Don't get it
FOH nigga. You only be in the street long enough to get called inside for suppertime.
Only time this bitch'll hold a can to my ear is if a string is connected to the other side.
Nah

...tag that bitch.

Cred takes this. Dug the opener and the chopper bar best. Cool ideas all round but some wording issues. Vague, you had a really light opener and that was all to compete, which wasn't enough. I liked the idea with the. Theatrical gunplay bar but the execution was just.. nah.

V/Cred

vv was aight, his wording makes the lines sound better than they really are, just need solid concepts homie.. cred had orc, vag, west coast chopper.. all bangers, he gets it

v cred