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Championship Match: Pinot Grij vs Destroyer - (Pinot wins)
NBL Season 9 Due WEDNESDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
pics?
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No thanks. 14-16?
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14 is fine then creature
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Need ext til tomorrow aft. S'ok?
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sure
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it's not fair, u were crowned champ?!?! trust me, it stops there
please come at me bro & des will stomp u fuckin swift like john mayer grij is candy man, des will beat him & laugh while he whimpers yeah, his mars bar was nuts... but now it's just been replaced w/snickers pinot's a known puff, but acts like he's so tough aint no one felt a punch from a kung fu brother since bruce leroy beat sho nuff ur bars are all wack to me... call u the champ??? no way, son only time these cats wanna hear pinot more is cuz they just got off probation des comes thru soaked in gin & leaves u with swollen skin funny how ur named after wine, which is what u will do as the votes come in u dont belong in this league. think u truly beat nik? u kidding friend? how ur initials be PG, yet ur verses still got all kinds of fuck n shit in them? this nerd is green, & this aint the first time ive had to hurt a fiend cuz i ball, Pin, and that's also the type of hammer they'll find at ur murder scene |
You ain't no box office draw with that burn victim face - puhlease, son
The only Deadpool should be the one you got them disgusting ass genes from I'm comin' with a .50-cal that's like a microscope - you'll be gettin' the picture Cuz when I put the piece to your eye, the little things in life'll start lookin' so much bigger You a cell phone salesman? Ha, I guess ya funeral's the only thing on the horizon At least the coffin'll be roomier than the mall kiosk you spend your pathetic life in Or I'll find a spot to dump the body - so there's no way the Feds could trace it You'll get covered in plastic and dropped in the water - that's an Otterbox demonstration And ya girl been in mad gangbangs with Hispanics when she drunk off the coronas She ain't a Starbucks barista, but still come home reeking of bold Colombian aromas And when it comes to swingin' w/ dudes - you been known to dabble in that You keep a roster of beefy men in ya phone, and it ain't the Yahoo fantasy app Ain't no way Des a contender, you got no place in the Champ finals Orc forcin' names where they don't belong - I guess he thought this was the mag title |
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grij is candy man, des will beat him & laugh while he whimpers
yeah, his mars bar was nuts... but now it's just been replaced w/snickers pinot's a known puff, but acts like he's so tough aint no one felt a punch from a kung fu brother since bruce leroy beat sho nuff I liked these from des.. and the pinot more wasnt bad, I just didnt feel the impact of it.. You missed halfway down.. wine and PG lines are played... or I'll find a spot to dump the body - so there's no way the Feds could trace it You'll get covered in plastic and dropped in the water - that's an Otterbox demonstration Ain't no way Des a contender, you got no place in the Champ finals Orc forcin' names where they don't belong - I guess he thought this was the mag title I thought that otterbox line was fire... mag line was cool, never seen it yet on Orcs mags.. Overall verse had some clean lines... The dissing des phone kiosk job has been done alot, imo.. But it was kindve funny but a lil corny imo.. Deadpool same, kindve a roll ur eyes, but it was aight.. Misses weren't as bad as Des.. V- Pinot |
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Good battle
Des, the first 8 were good, Pinot more was dope af, then u kinda fell off a bit, but I did like the pg/ bad word thing Pinot, everything hit except beefy men, solid, this is the guy that killed it in battling back in RL Vote Pinot |
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V/Pinot |
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This was a dope battle def botw Both came really dope af Pinot had the harder hits but this shit was a legit champ match V grij |
I thought des's only miss was swift/john mayer, didn't u make fun of fracture for using a Taylor swift line lol. I thought kung fu brother and hear pinot more were nice. Mars bar was a cool personal, named after wine is simple but good. Pg is cool, I'm not big on initial nameplays but I liked what he did with the flip and the wording. Ball pein hammer was simple but aite.
Vs. Deadpool was ehh, thought it coulda been flipped better. Piece to ur eye was nice. Coffin line was good personal, its getting played on des at this point but the way he used it was nice. Otterbox is cool. Starbucks barista is aite. Not feelin beefy men. And the closer is nice. Overall: I was thinking des won this after reading the verses and doing by breakdown, but after reviewing my breakdown I saw that des had a lot of name flips that hurt his verse overall. He had: hear pinot more, named after wine, pg, and ball pein. All name flips. They were all good and hit and on my initial read I didn't even notice so it didn't feel like he overdid it, but lookin at my review he def overdid it. I was gonna vote des cuz he only had one miss and pinot had two imo and I liked des style on this verse of simple yet effective with clean wording, and his verse felt more personal but now I see it was only cuz of the nameplays. That kung fu brother line was fire tho. Mars bar is nice too. Idk man this is close as fuck, I can see why des thinks he should win. U know what, fuck it. I gotta vote for the verse I liked more, even if its going against the grain. Dope shit by both tho V. Destroyer |
@Bags help ur boy out lol
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yeah. @Bags wtf?
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Des had a few cool lines. Snickers was good, wine was decent, King fu was ok.
Pinot had a few good ones as well. Otterbox was lotb. Deadpool I liked too and fantasy app. Pinot gets it with more heavy hitters. |
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