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Iamrhetoric 1-0 Vs Utmost 0-0 -UT WINS BY NS
NBL Season 8 Week 2 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @IAmRhetoric docked -2 votes for not voting @Utmost |
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asking for an ext, i know im not gonna be able to finish in time
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the lazyiness was real
Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either |
I liked the opener. You have decent concepts just the wording holds some back. Like the internet bar could have been really good, just needed to be touched up. This would have been an interesting battle. Props.
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Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot
so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through ^^^cool opener Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet ^^^nah My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar ^^^nope U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age ^^^decent Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either ^^^solid overall not a bad verse had some misses but some good shit to, tweak ur wording a lil an ur bars will hit better, concepts are there. |
Hallmark was nice. Thought tourettes was funny too.
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Act up n' get snap tackled - then pulla gat nine from my jacket to boot
so prepare a will Iam, you wont JUST have a black eye after we're through -too wordy, didnt reallly like this concept- Proof, uve neva been a threat - put the knife to ya innards Rhet then medics'll listen to I Heart fail faster.. than streamers with bad internet -nah, wasnt liking this- My eyes might dart n head jerk - but its clear im deadin this square compare me Tourette's, but God Dam-mmit Im fuc king bett er. I swe ar ---eh--- U wont win, sorry - This is MY HOUSE!!! n yea Im goin thru quite the phase but if ur lookin for a hall mark moment.. heres a sharpie for writin ur height n' age -lol ok cool- Saw ya shit verse last week, ***kles ensued when i noticed it lackin heaters I mean, Control did no show.. but I showed no control of my laughter either -nah hallmark was the only quote here |
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