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Meth 11-15-2015 01:30 AM

BAL Contendership Match: Muff (2-0) vs. Lotto Smirk (2-0) - Lotto wins
 
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@Muff @Lotto Smirk

El Muffin 11-15-2015 02:29 AM

12

Lotto Smirk 11-15-2015 03:52 AM

In g/l

El Muffin 11-15-2015 08:00 PM

ur British? oh ok.

hope ur relative recovers

this scrubs a Mod? lmao on god ima spaz
N lose all my mental Faculties coz they made ur fgt ass part of the Staff
u been battling awhile. but still wack.- this cats, bleak
writin since 08.- but havent elevated untill the verse u dropped LAST WEEK
ur fam has my best wishes.- but acknowledge truth
I hope your Grandmother gets Better. then, maybe YOU will follow suit
Muff's a traveler. from the 'Pyramids of Giza' to the streams of Berlin
Closest u got to a Camel,Lot is when u fell asleep n dreamed u were Merlin
u seen the battles this week. - twitchin in deliberate fashion
u can try to Win, Lotto. but ur gettin nada if MY NAMES on the ticket u faggot
I Tire of ur bs. from hell n back. w/ the shells im strapped
u Better Make a Pit Stop or get Aired out in a Couple Seconds, Flat

will be editing this when I have more itme

Lotto Smirk 11-18-2015 05:38 PM

when I write it's great, u straight up always bin duller
compared to me u the complete opposite like ur skank mum & fathers skin colour
Im sat here, listening to biggie smalls .... got that flava in ya ear
u just a cum drinking junkie ... got that flava in ya hand cus u secretly queer
try stepping then I'm betting ur arm & legs end up w/ brakes
u'd be on route to a fracture .. but ur ALREADY a washed up head that nobody rates
don't pack 9's or shotguns face it I'll dispose of ya body, ya soft
N put ur body under the water it'll feel like ur fgt ass wasn't fired from ur sub marine job
I damage ur girl,I'm her world, when u slam her u wack son
ur slut calls me the bosche cus she loves when I drill her w/ the hammer action
fell off lately top tier? u not queer no matter what u tell me
bitch u on a level so low u make ya diabetic fathers glucose's look healthy

No more edits haha

G/l

Plot 11-20-2015 11:01 PM

MUFF
this scrubs a Mod? lmao on god ima spaz
N lose all my mental Faculties coz they made ur fgt ass part of the Staff
Idk, dont like it much, only connection Im making here is mod/faculties.
u been battling awhile. but still wack.- this cats, bleak
writin since 08.- but havent elevated untill the verse u dropped LAST WEEK
Nah
ur fam has my best wishes.- but acknowledge truth
I hope your Grandmother gets Better. then, maybe YOU will follow suit
This is ok, the better/improve, but its still weak
Muff's a traveler. from the 'Pyramids of Giza' to the streams of Berlin
Closest u got to a Camel,Lot is when u fell asleep n dreamed u were Merlin
Nah, this is weird, why would he wanna get near a camel, does that mean
a camel-toe? I mean I get camelot/merlin, but this doesnt work

u seen the battles this week. - twitchin in deliberate fashion
u can try to Win, Lotto. but ur gettin nada if MY NAMES on the ticket u faggot
This is so tired on him
I Tire of ur bs. from hell n back. w/ the shells im strapped
u Better Make a Pit Stop or get Aired out in a Couple Seconds, Flat
Meh aired out/flat tires, this is ok but is worded bad.

You really didn't try here Muff

LOTTO
when I write it's great, u straight up always bin duller
compared to me u the complete opposite like ur skank mum & fathers skin colour
Why didnt you say Dad instead, makes it sound awkward mum and father..
Kinda funny, saying he's half-cast, is this true at allz?

Im sat here, listening to biggie smalls .... got that flava in ya ear
u just a cum drinking junkie ... got that flava in ya hand cus u secretly queer
Don't like this
try stepping then I'm betting ur arm & legs end up w/ brakes
u'd be on route to a fracture .. but ur ALREADY a washed up head that nobody rates
Meh, really weak
don't pack 9's or shotguns face it I'll dispose of ya body, ya soft
N put ur body under the water it'll feel like ur fgt ass wasn't fired from ur sub marine job
Wow at wordy, this might be a personal, if it isnt its wack
I damage ur girl,I'm her world, when u slam her u wack son
ur slut calls me the bosche cus she loves when I drill her w/ the hammer action
Jeez, prolly bar of the battle with the bosche/boss hammer connection
fell off lately top tier? u not queer no matter what u tell me
bitch u on a level so low u make ya diabetic fathers glucose's look healthy
Heh, this is ok

V-LOTTO, don't think either tried hard, but Lotto had some better hits.

Allen Knight 11-22-2015 06:12 PM

loll plot the biggest loser faggot ever, u sayin anyone shit is wordy is funny look at ur wack verses bitch.

anyway,


ur fam has my best wishes.- but acknowledge truth
I hope your Grandmother gets Better. then, maybe YOU will follow suit
I Tire of ur bs. from hell n back. w/ the shells im strapped
u Better Make a Pit Stop or get Aired out in a Couple Seconds, Flat


Vs

I damage ur girl,I'm her world, when u slam her u wack son
ur slut calls me the bosche cus she loves when I drill her w/ the hammer action

fell off lately top tier? u not queer no matter what u tell me
bitch u on a level so low u make ya diabetic fathers glucose's look healthy


V/lotto, solid battle this was close, but i feel muff rushed his verse tbh here,
both had 2 nice bars but i think lotto misses hit better & he had the Lotb.
props on the battle.

Allen Knight 11-22-2015 06:51 PM

@Orc @Wavy Crockett @Muff @Lotto Smirk @Flo Real @Chyeahhh!!! @Knux @Plot @Schadenfreude @Bash @Nameflip @Kemizt @2tripple0 @POET MiNDER


VOTE I KNOW SOME U PUSSIES DIDNT.

Flow 11-22-2015 07:00 PM

Even battle. Felt muff came pretty light but was certainly more creative conceptually. Closest lotto got to muffs creativity probs hammer action which i got for even stevens on lotb along with muffs closer. That closer was sick. But overall the battle was won on the misses and lottos just crept in harder with a slight bit more sting althouhgh i did detest the secretly queer bar... your better than that.

Vote lotto

Schadenfreude 11-23-2015 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Muff (Post 551431)
Opener, get better, lottery

Decent verse, the missed weren't terrible, but the hits weren't great either.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 552310)
Fracture, underwater, bosche hammer

Good verse, but half your bars landed sickly, while the others were aight at best.

Overall I'd say LOTTO SMIRK hit heavier w/ the punches that did land.

sral 11-24-2015 07:35 AM

LOL Muff came with that lightwork this week, I hated the camel lot line but actually kinda dug the flat closer because of how it was worded where as a lot will dislike it.

Lotta had the Fracture line which was cool, sub marine line which was okay, mum and dad was okay. The hammer action was prob his best but even that wasn't amazing conceptually. Muff had the way better concepts, the lazyness killed any impact for me though, his best was the Better one.

Kinda disappointing here but Lotto edged it.


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