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BAL: 2tripple0 (0-0) vs kemizt (0-0)- Kem wins

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@2tripple0
@Kemizt

even with relevant set ups and punches that seem moderate
youd still be a side dish at a party where they serving condiments
flip you first before I use one of ya concepts and say I liked it
but you put two in two together and kemizt splitting like science
its ya wording that kills u. most of the voters aint feeling it.
cuz I could come with amateur concepts and still steal the win.
1st of all youll never see the crowd LOL or relate to kem.
cause I got too much knowledge while you just imitating them.
I'd frown on ya verse, since it hurts to read all them played concepts
since your lines aint straight they just on the horizon like a sunset.
battle? nah didn't think so..wasn't feeling your tracks homie
you'd better find skill fast cuz trip giving you a run for your money.

12. match.

2001 to remeber? call 911 cuz its my win, coward.
he'll trip and go down quick, like the twin towers

hokay lets go

he calls himself tripple zero. So we know hes got none.
Ill have him fighting himself in another world, like Jet Li in The One.
Ill see through your bullshit and watch his pigment change like selenium
End his career quick that he'd commit suicide like it was the new Millennium
your bars are always wack and you should have stayed with your poetry.
cuz when the BAL drop? we know 2000 is over...you will hear it globaly
ill own you quick, you can bet im hitting my banks cash
Ill have you stressin your finances like this was the y2k crash
you can't advance to the next round. you're some guy thats it.
you can say you got owned by the science guy, theres no deny in it

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 545630)

even with relevant set ups and punches that seem moderate
youd still be a side dish at a party where they serving condiments
--this could have been cool if it was worded with some substance.
flip you first before I use one of ya concepts and say I liked it
but you put two in two together and kemizt splitting like science
--ok
its ya wording that kills u. most of the voters aint feeling it.
cuz I could come with amateur concepts and still steal the win.
--nothing here
1st of all youll never see the crowd LOL or relate to kem.
cause I got too much knowledge while you just imitating them.
--nah
I'd frown on ya verse, since it hurts to read all them played concepts
since your lines aint straight they just on the horizon like a sunset.
--huh?
battle? nah didn't think so..wasn't feeling your tracks homie
you'd better find skill fast cuz trip giving you a run for your money.
--nah

too straight forward homie. need some substance in ur lines maybe if u read some of the top guys here u could get on the right track

12. match.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kemizt (Post 545975)

2001 to remeber? call 911 cuz its my win, coward.
he'll trip and go down quick, like the twin towers

hokay lets go

he calls himself tripple zero. So we know hes got none.
Ill have him fighting himself in another world, like Jet Li in The One.
--meh
Ill see through your bullshit and watch his pigment change like selenium
End his career quick that he'd commit suicide like it was the new Millennium
--nah
your bars are always wack and you should have stayed with your poetry.
cuz when the BAL drop? we know 2000 is over...you will hear it globaly
--this was a good idea. ok line.
ill own you quick, you can bet im hitting my banks cash
Ill have you stressin your finances like this was the y2k crash
--too simple. lot of 2000 concepts tho. kind of overkill.
you can't advance to the next round. you're some guy thats it.
you can say you got owned by the science guy, theres no deny in it
--yeah no

trip was pretty bad.

ive seen better from kem i feel like he dropped lower do to his opponent

he still got the dub tho, because he had some decent ideas.

guess the BAL drop kline was LOTB

v/ kemizt

nothing

Vs

your bars are always wack and you should have stayed with your poetry.
cuz when the BAL drop? we know 2000 is over...you will hear it globaly

V/kemizt, ok no hate to tripple, u were just not creative here tbh an didnt
really diss ur oppent harsh, work on ur concepts & wording u'll get there
read battles. Kemizt was ight had more ideas that line i quoted u needa
drop more like that...read old battles an u'll get the idea.

1st of all youll never see the crowd LOL or relate to kem.
cause I got too much knowledge while you just imitating them.
^^^ Legion of Legends? Only thing near decent you had

Vs

your bars are always wack and you should have stayed with your poetry.
cuz when the BAL drop? we know 2000 is over...you will hear it globaly
^^^ could've set it up better but the punch was cool

I got Kem taking this because he actually had something that hit. That LOL could've potentially hit but your execution of it was basic. I just quoted it to give you feedback because it was a decent idea.

v/Kem

nothing

vs

2000

almost nothing vs nothing

v/kumizt