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Lotto Smirk 10-21-2015 12:45 PM

BAL: Destroyer (1-0) vs Knux (0-0) - Des wins
 
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@Destroyer
@Resin M-I-C

~RustyGunZ~ 10-27-2015 01:26 PM

went 14 @Destroyer

Frank 10-27-2015 01:36 PM

*Popcorn*

Lotto Smirk 10-28-2015 10:41 AM

Got destroyers 14 @Knux

Lotto Smirk 10-28-2015 11:34 AM

Knux's verse

Your midtier at best.. when it comes to text your nothin' remember?
Beating you's sucha small claim I was gonna show up ina suit witha public defender
We all know ur soft, u aint gangster & when it comes to pussy this kids outta luck
Its obvious you aint blood related.. thats just your criteria for the bitches you fuck
Ur incomes a joke.. this swayers desperate for a win but he's gettin sonned ina blink
Funny he's known for grasping at straws but can never remember to give one with the drinks
Financially ur struggling bro... I made my return & I'm warning you dude
For me this shits like riding a bike.. and its going way smoother than your morning commute
Lookin like a straight junkie.. makes me wanna keep beltin' this fag
Dudes got such a meth face it could run a tourny and help witha mag
Your a faggot.. Bags force fucks you & thinks u reciprocate with the best head
Luckily it dont matter what kinda sex u Odom cuz each of these lines got u on ya death bed
Ur NBL run was pathetic, got to the playoffs by no-shows honestly ur the worst, clown
See, when iSpaz I champ seasons.. you got bodied by the 10th seed and knocked out in the first round

Lotto Smirk 10-28-2015 11:36 AM

Des's verse

dude acts like he's dope w/it, but I'm just like 'die faker!'
can't flip ur name, so I'll just flip ur body... off the side of a skyscraper
i throttle blows that topple foes, so watch as knux eyes go blank
only thing poppin off during that verse is the corn in Frank's microwave
champed more than me, u should be known around this place like a trophy
so why does everyone still think ur an abbreviation of a ginger who hates karaoke?
it's cuz ur lines don't hit kid & it's not that ur a bad writer
ur just asleep at the wheel doing minor damage like hush late night trappin in the jaguar
des is like a Jedi with red eye, I'll take this man down with bags of weed
show this dude how The Force Awakens...AND puts him right back to sleep
this a site of champions, but don't get gassed up.. ur the worst kid!
when cats say they saw K Shine, they're talking YouTube vids, not ur verses
knux stay late night Freaky & doesn't stop until the meth is through
'Coke Zoo' is what i call the line of strung out creatures willing to have sex with u

Schadenfreude 10-28-2015 03:40 PM

Quote:

Small claims, morning commute, meth face & closer
Nice verse, some lines didn't hit too hard, but the ones that landed were pretty good.

Quote:

Frank's microwave, abbreviation, Hush in the jag, force awakens
Good drop, some I liked, some I didn't, but for the most part, u had effective punches.

Overall this was a dead heat, y'all are even in quotes, therefore it comes down to preference; w/ that criteria I feel Des edges. Neither of u had a haymaker, so the question's whose punches were more entertaining & imo DESTROYER gets the nod due to his dry, yet harsh humor.

2tripple0 10-28-2015 04:00 PM

for me I thought knux verse was a bit rushed and also his lines were stretched as fuck whereas destroyer came with a better structure and more personal lines than knux I thought you were both a bit lacking in the punch line department......but still I found destroyers verse had more strength in it and also he landed his punches a lot better......I thought knux was just a bit off when it came to his wording and structure......yeah so there it is.....im going with destroyer....

vote: destroyer..........

8===D~~~~(}: 10-28-2015 04:10 PM

Knox

Your midtier at best.. when it comes to text your nothin' remember?
Beating you's sucha small claim I was gonna show up ina suit witha public defender
this was cool
We all know ur soft, u aint gangster & when it comes to pussy this kids outta luck
Its obvious you aint blood related.. thats just your criteria for the bitches you fuck
lol ok
Ur incomes a joke.. this swayers desperate for a win but he's gettin sonned ina blink
Funny he's known for grasping at straws but can never remember to give one with the drinks
nah
Financially ur struggling bro... I made my return & I'm warning you dude
For me this shits like riding a bike.. and its going way smoother than your morning commute
decent
Lookin like a straight junkie.. makes me wanna keep beltin' this fag
Dudes got such a meth face it could run a tourny and help witha mag
GONE
Your a faggot.. Bags force fucks you & thinks u reciprocate with the best head
Luckily it dont matter what kinda sex u Odom cuz each of these lines got u on ya death bed
played already
Ur NBL run was pathetic, got to the playoffs by no-shows honestly ur the worst, clown
See, when iSpaz I champ seasons.. you got bodied by the 10th seed and knocked out in the first round
iSpaz plays are played

Had: small claims, blood related, meth face

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Des

dude acts like he's dope w/it, but I'm just like 'die faker!'
can't flip ur name, so I'll just flip ur body... off the side of a skyscraper
nah basic
i throttle blows that topple foes, so watch as knux eyes go blank
only thing poppin off during that verse is the corn in Frank's microwave
ahahahaha, wording in second line kinda screwed but still good bar
champed more than me, u should be known around this place like a trophy
so why does everyone still think ur an abbreviation of a ginger who hates karaoke?
alright
it's cuz ur lines don't hit kid & it's not that ur a bad writer
ur just asleep at the wheel doing minor damage like hush late night trappin in the jaguar
decent, wording & writer/jaguar don't rhyme, if you think they do you must talk like a fhagfit
des is like a Jedi with red eye, I'll take this man down with bags of weed
show this dude how The Force Awakens...AND puts him right back to sleep
nahhh
this a site of champions, but don't get gassed up.. ur the worst kid!
when cats say they saw K Shine, they're talking YouTube vids, not ur verses
light & played but decent flip
knux stay late night Freaky & doesn't stop until the meth is through
'Coke Zoo' is what i call the line of strung out creatures willing to have sex with u
nah

Had: microwave, abbreviation

I feel des could have had more quotes if he worded shit right and everything didn't sound like I was reading from a textbook. Maybe it's just me idk, knux gets this with a better verse.

Vote: KNUTZ

Meth 10-28-2015 08:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 545810)
Knux's verse

Your midtier at best.. when it comes to text your nothin' remember?
Beating you's sucha small claim I was gonna show up ina suit witha public defender
--solid
We all know ur soft, u aint gangster & when it comes to pussy this kids outta luck
Its obvious you aint blood related.. thats just your criteria for the bitches you fuck
--solid again
Ur incomes a joke.. this swayers desperate for a win but he's gettin sonned ina blink
Funny he's known for grasping at straws but can never remember to give one with the drinks
--lol.. this is ok
Financially ur struggling bro... I made my return & I'm warning you dude
For me this shits like riding a bike.. and its going way smoother than your morning commute
--lol. this is hot. never lost ur style i see
Lookin like a straight junkie.. makes me wanna keep beltin' this fag
Dudes got such a meth face it could run a tourny and help witha mag
--good. fuck u tho
Your a faggot.. Bags force fucks you & thinks u reciprocate with the best head
Luckily it dont matter what kinda sex u Odom cuz each of these lines got u on ya death bed
--eh. this is one of the better odom lines ive seen but ive no joke seen at least 30 of them in the last 2 weeks.
Ur NBL run was pathetic, got to the playoffs by no-shows honestly ur the worst, clown
See, when iSpaz I champ seasons.. you got bodied by the 10th seed and knocked out in the first round
--dope

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 545811)
Des's verse

dude acts like he's dope w/it, but I'm just like 'die faker!'
can't flip ur name, so I'll just flip ur body... off the side of a skyscraper
--ok
i throttle blows that topple foes, so watch as knux eyes go blank
only thing poppin off during that verse is the corn in Frank's microwave
--lol, ok
champed more than me, u should be known around this place like a trophy
so why does everyone still think ur an abbreviation of a ginger who hates karaoke?
--nice
it's cuz ur lines don't hit kid & it's not that ur a bad writer
ur just asleep at the wheel doing minor damage like hush late night trappin in the jaguar
--nice
des is like a Jedi with red eye, I'll take this man down with bags of weed
show this dude how The Force Awakens...AND puts him right back to sleep
--dope
this a site of champions, but don't get gassed up.. ur the worst kid!
when cats say they saw K Shine, they're talking YouTube vids, not ur verses
--ok
knux stay late night Freaky & doesn't stop until the meth is through
'Coke Zoo' is what i call the line of strung out creatures willing to have sex with u
--not sure if the angle was the best one, but this was still good.

Yo this battle was hot, probably the battle of the week for sure. sucks one of u have to lose for ur showing here.

Des had karaoke, jaguar, force awakens, coke zoo, no misses

Knux had riding a bike, ispaz, meth face, one miss

4-3 to Des but i think Knux's hits were better so it's pretty close.

Gotta give it to Des on the consistency though.

Dope battle, and close

V/ Destroyer

Useless 10-29-2015 12:04 AM

Your midtier at best.. when it comes to text your nothin' remember?
Beating you's sucha small claim I was gonna show up ina suit witha public defender
--- but u don't use public defenders in small claims court lol....wasn't for that this would of been aite..............
We all know ur soft, u aint gangster & when it comes to pussy this kids outta luck
Its obvious you aint blood related.. thats just your criteria for the bitches you fuck
--- lol aite...........
Ur incomes a joke.. this swayers desperate for a win but he's gettin sonned ina blink
Funny he's known for grasping at straws but can never remember to give one with the drinks
--- lol aite again..............
Financially ur struggling bro... I made my return & I'm warning you dude
For me this shits like riding a bike.. and its going way smoother than your morning commute
--- lol 3 inna row.............
Lookin like a straight junkie.. makes me wanna keep beltin' this fag
Dudes got such a meth face it could run a tourny and help witha mag
--- ehhh....this seems played............
Your a faggot.. Bags force fucks you & thinks u reciprocate with the best head
Luckily it dont matter what kinda sex u Odom cuz each of these lines got u on ya death bed
--- nahhh sick of Odom flips, and this wasn't original enuff to justify it tbh............
Ur NBL run was pathetic, got to the playoffs by no-shows honestly ur the worst, clown
See, when iSpaz I champ seasons.. you got bodied by the 10th seed and knocked out in the first round
--- cool personal but, I've seen iSpaz's name used like this for a personal a lot. Pretty sure I used it myself a while back....and the bar was stretched imo..............


Vs.


dude acts like he's dope w/it, but I'm just like 'die faker!'
can't flip ur name, so I'll just flip ur body... off the side of a skyscraper
--- this a throwback bar lol...I fucks with it tho..........
i throttle blows that topple foes, so watch as knux eyes go blank
only thing poppin off during that verse is the corn in Frank's microwave
--- cool..........
champed more than me, u should be known around this place like a trophy
so why does everyone still think ur an abbreviation of a ginger who hates karaoke?
--- lol nice...........
it's cuz ur lines don't hit kid & it's not that ur a bad writer
ur just asleep at the wheel doing minor damage like hush late night trappin in the jaguar
--- cool.............
des is like a Jedi with red eye, I'll take this man down with bags of weed
show this dude how The Force Awakens...AND puts him right back to sleep
--- lol nice............
this a site of champions, but don't get gassed up.. ur the worst kid!
when cats say they saw K Shine, they're talking YouTube vids, not ur verses
--- not feelin tbh...don't like first letter name flips unless they're super dope..............
knux stay late night Freaky & doesn't stop until the meth is through
'Coke Zoo' is what i call the line of strung out creatures willing to have sex with u
--- lol aite..........



Overall: I thought this was a goof battle, knux had a couple played lines that hurt his verse. He doesn't seem to have any rust tho as his wording is aite and he had line heaters in a row. Des just out gunned him here tho, he had a really solid verse with a couple nice lines to carry it over the top.


V. Des


Nice to see knux make a come back tho

Cred 10-29-2015 08:47 AM

Morning commute lol, meth face, odom

Vs

Microwave lol, hush jaguar i liked this, force awakens

Ok, close match here. Both had there hits n misses. I got it tied in quotes but at the same time i have destroyers verse as the better one. Came down to personal preference. Good shit


Vote - destroyer

Boredom 10-29-2015 01:35 PM

We all know ur soft, u aint gangster & when it comes to pussy this kids outta luck
Its obvious you aint blood related.. thats just your criteria for the bitches you fuck
Financially ur struggling bro... I made my return & I'm warning you dude
For me this shits like riding a bike.. and its going way smoother than your morning commute
Lookin like a straight junkie.. makes me wanna keep beltin' this fag
Dudes got such a meth face it could run a tourny and help witha mag
Your a faggot.. Bags force fucks you & thinks u reciprocate with the best head
Luckily it dont matter what kinda sex u Odom cuz each of these lines got u on ya death bed

v

i throttle blows that topple foes, so watch as knux eyes go blank
only thing poppin off during that verse is the corn in Frank's microwave
champed more than me, u should be known around this place like a trophy
so why does everyone still think ur an abbreviation of a ginger who hates karaoke?
knux stay late night Freaky & doesn't stop until the meth is through
'Coke Zoo' is what i call the line of strung out creatures willing to have sex with u

i got knux gettin 4-3 in quotes and imo his non quotes hitting harder then des's.. both dropped pretty solid but based on preference i got knux getting this dub.

puravida 10-29-2015 10:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 545810)
Knux's verse

Your midtier at best.. when it comes to text your nothin' remember?
Beating you's sucha small claim I was gonna show up ina suit witha public defender
We all know ur soft, u aint gangster & when it comes to pussy this kids outta luck
Its obvious you aint blood related.. thats just your criteria for the bitches you fuck
Financially ur struggling bro... I made my return & I'm warning you dude
For me this shits like riding a bike.. and its going way smoother than your morning commute


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Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 545811)
Des's verse

champed more than me, u should be known around this place like a trophy
so why does everyone still think ur an abbreviation of a ginger who hates karaoke?
it's cuz ur lines don't hit kid & it's not that ur a bad writer
ur just asleep at the wheel doing minor damage like hush late night trappin in the jaguar

both had a decent showing here. however, i'm giving this to Knux. I just enjoyed his lines a bit more than Des on this. and didn't hush crash his audi? lol anyway, both had some cool quotable but i think knux hit harder this time

vote knux

Allen Knight 10-29-2015 11:38 PM

Your midtier at best.. when it comes to text your nothin' remember?
Beating you's sucha small claim I was gonna show up ina suit witha public defender
We all know ur soft, u aint gangster & when it comes to pussy this kids outta luck
Its obvious you aint blood related.. thats just your criteria for the bitches you fuck
Financially ur struggling bro... I made my return & I'm warning you dude
For me this shits like riding a bike.. and its going way smoother than your morning commute
Lookin like a straight junkie.. makes me wanna keep beltin' this fag
Dudes got such a meth face it could run a tourny and help witha mag

Vs


it's cuz ur lines don't hit kid & it's not that ur a bad writer
ur just asleep at the wheel doing minor damage like hush late night trappin in the jaguar
des is like a Jedi with red eye, I'll take this man down with bags of weed
show this dude how The Force Awakens...AND puts him right back to sleep
knux stay late night Freaky & doesn't stop until the meth is through
'Coke Zoo' is what i call the line of strung out creatures willing to have sex with u


V/knux, cool battle...dumb close, had to re-read but i think knux
had one more bar that hit imo was a lil more consistent.
des had that coke zoo bar & it was fire an lotb imo...i can see this goin either way.
but i think knux got the dub, props to both enjoyed this one.

Lotto Smirk 10-30-2015 03:46 PM

5-4 des upping this will drop a vote soon

Nameflip 10-31-2015 09:47 AM

Knux.

- shit you came out swinging bro. Nice lines in there. Those bars about him being broke back to back was off to me. Felt like there should of been seperation.

Des.

- had some lol lines in there, felt like it went soft in the middle but the last bar or two picked it back up.

This was close as fuck, both came correct. But I got Des with the more enjoyable read for me


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