Rnd1 - Infiltration vs. Plot - {Infiltration wins}
 

The Fall Brawl

Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max
If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop.
All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada)

Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one.

DUE DATE IS 10/15/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST

Need anything, let me know.

@Infiltration @Plot

10?

Thats fine

instead of battling...


you should ask me to forgive ya sins, i have a divine following
Its communion.. they'll be blood w/ this body, but u dont deserve christ's offering
NC addict. spends whole days LLBing, so lonely fuck this waste
sat in front of the lime screen so long plots green-lit.. like scripts in production phase
Have forensics diggin bullets out ur wounds, entire dermis scraped
rounds got ur name on it... & im squeezing til all layers fill up, thats a birthday cake
My lines send chills down ur girls spine, its feeling like first winter
I'm below freezing cold... so she wrapped around my pipe, buuut it still burst in her
She loves me guy. Had my dick nestled between her comfy thighs..
In battles my crazy bars give her that screwface....to go along w/ them fuck me eyes
I turn niggas to comatose states when i start aiming at my targets
Docs be surprised to find signs of activity in ur dome like Matt Damon in the Martian
Halloweens his favorite holiday, the way he dresses up is mad nerdy
Nobody'll open doors for him....after seeing poorly disguised concepts w/ bad wording

Dope verse, creative hard hitting punches, only one real personal, but nice regardless.

Decent, either had some random concepts/references or your wording hurt the impact of 'em.

Overall INFILTRATION took this battle, good showing from Plot tho.

Greenie, burst, screw face

Vs.

Davey Jones, Clapton and carpenter


I just inf. Tho being more harsh and creative with his punches

Edited. Not allowed to vote.

plot had a few cool ideas but he didnt execute them good enough. inf had green lit, birthday cake and closer for the dub

inf's verse was consistant as fuck.. only line i didnt like was the pipe one.. plot had clapton solo and davey jones.. couple forced spots lkke halal and sasquatch but good stuff, inf was just on here

v- inf

you should ask me to forgive ya sins, i have a divine following
Its communion.. they'll be blood w/ this body, but u dont deserve christ's offering
nice concept... doesn't hit real hard but cool
NC addict. spends whole days LLBing, so lonely fuck this waste
sat in front of the lime screen so long plots green-lit.. like scripts in production phase
this is heat
Have forensics diggin bullets out ur wounds, entire dermis scraped
rounds got ur name on it... & im squeezing til all layers fill up, thats a birthday cake
I don't usually like "-- that's a ____" style... but the dope concept carries it
My lines send chills down ur girls spine, its feeling like first winter
I'm below freezing cold... so she wrapped around my pipe, buuut it still burst in her
ha okay
She loves me guy. Had my dick nestled between her comfy thighs..
In battles my crazy bars give her that screwface....to go along w/ them fuck me eyes
heard something like this before...
I turn niggas to comatose states when i start aiming at my targets
Docs be surprised to find signs of activity in ur dome like Matt Damon in the Martian
not bad
Halloweens his favorite holiday, the way he dresses up is mad nerdy
Nobody'll open doors for him....after seeing poorly disguised concepts w/ bad wording
okay

vs.

This clown called the Inf? Hush, said he’s great with flowth..
He must have meant that little man from Game of Thrones.
ha... don't really make sense though, 'Imp' is within Vic's ability
Coz Inf just some pathetic faggot that’ll die when I spray the chrome,
Leave so many shells in his body , NC gonna call him Davey jones.
this is good
The intertexts not feeling your jokes bro, you’ve got a problem kid,
We just aint getting the Ha! Lol! And not eating any of your Muslim shit
creative shit... off again but I appreciate the attempt
So get clapped in slow-mo, creaming this kid and it’s no joke,
The way the Slow Hands are getting to his neck, you’d think it was a Clapton solo.
reference wasn't there for me but fresh idea again
And ya girl don’t even want your dick Inf, your relationships arbitrary,
I’ve shown her so much Tounge in Groove, she’s started a trade in carpentry.
nice
You'll get ya loud mouth slapped shut son, Yeti still show no respect,
Then Plot’ll just get that Sass, squashed flat! Without even an avalanche through Tibet.
enjoying the intri***y of a lot of these... this one was a no though
Fuck the ambulance, there will be no evidence left, not even a trace of his birth,
After I toss his corpse off Mount Rushmore, he’ll be literally gone from the face of the earth.
not bad

this is prolly one of the better matches of round 1
Infiltration came real consistent. Green lit & birthday cake were fire.
Body / blood of christ was solid, & a few others that were cool.
Plot killed it on the concepts. A lotta fresh ideas I haven't seen
Davey Jones & Carpentry were both nice to me
Clapton solo was actually wild too but I had to google it
only downfall was that there was some shakey execution...
as much as I liked the halal idea it didn't work, and neither did Inf/imp or Sasquatch
don't think I've seen Plot battle much recently so I hope he sticks around wit it
But in this one I got Inf by a small margin based on consistency... good battle here

V/ Infiltration

NC addict. spends whole days LLBing, so lonely fuck this waste
sat in front of the lime screen so long plots green-lit.. like scripts in production phase

Halloweens his favorite holiday, the way he dresses up is mad nerdy
Nobody'll open doors for him....after seeing poorly disguised concepts w/ bad wording

Vs

And ya girl don’t even want your dick Inf, your relationships arbitrary,
I’ve shown her so much Tounge in Groove, she’s started a trade in carpentry.

Overall Vote - Infil, Plot had a few nice ideas going but execution wasn't really strong IMO. Infil had more harsh direct punches creative at that but decent battle but I got Infil taking this one

Right i got you both even in quotes. Both had some nice quotes etc but alas some poor wording choices too. My issue is like junto i also felt i heard the screwface bar recently. Ive had a quick search and cant find it so im going to tenitavely vote

INF

I thought inf was pretty good, green screens, screw me face and ender... plot is creative but needs to work better on the connection but your ideas are my type of punchlines, tighten it up a bit

Vote inf

Infi for consistency . his verse had a smooth finish from start to end.

Plot had that halal line . shit would have been like one of the best lines if it had been worded right.

still

Inf

green lit, pipe burst, Martian was ok

vs

slow hands, Sasquatch/yeti was ok

plot just needed some wording work, concepts were there but inf just came more consistent.

v/inf

NC addict. spends whole days LLBing, so lonely fuck this waste
sat in front of the lime screen so long plots green-lit.. like scripts in production phase
Have forensics diggin bullets out ur wounds, entire dermis scraped
rounds got ur name on it... & im squeezing til all layers fill up, thats a birthday cake
Halloweens his favorite holiday, the way he dresses up is mad nerdy
Nobody'll open doors for him....after seeing poorly disguised concepts w/ bad wording

vs

Fuck the ambulance, there will be no evidence left, not even a trace of his birth,
After I toss his corpse off Mount Rushmore, he’ll be literally gone from the face of the earth.

one had the stronger wording and execution here, the other had some nice concepts but didnt fully use them to full potential ... v/ INF